Collaborative FF:Grew Young Together...PAGE 14, CHAPTER 12 UPDATED! - Page 2

Originally posted by: -mina-

Next chappy please!!! This is so adorable. And what's this about pragya's brother? Very interesting guys thanks for doing this!!

Originally posted by: Naina-

Didnt you guys just talk abt this yesterday??? I AM SO EXCITED!!

RES. Will be unreserved in four days, cant wait!!

*Four days later*

Unres. Its been four days and this is the first thing I do when I get home. Its like my little treat that I've been waiting to read. 😳

I dont even know where to start...this was the most adorable thing I have ever read!! Curious, how old are they supposed to be? I'm imagining kindergarteners/first graders? I can't even pick out what the cutest part of the story was. Maybe when he poked her and tried to make her feel better? Or when she gave him the pencil? Or how he was so honored by her offering him a pencil!! Or how he was so happy that he gave her a kiss? Or how they couldn't stop talking about each other to their parents? LOVED EVERYTHING!!!

If I had to pick though, this was my favorite part:

I was so happy that a girl helped me for the first time and that too when I didn't even ask her. Can you believe it? Without me even asking? On top of that she was helping me with sincerity. I felt on top of the world. It's a small gesture but it was the biggest gesture of my life from a girl. From a girl? I was so happy at that moment that I didn't even realize when I quickly got closer to her and pecked her on her cheeks whilst she was stunned.

So freaking cute. I loved the little details. Like how Pragya's mom gave Pragya a little glare when she told her how Abhi kissed her. Or how Abhi's dad found it amusing when Abhi kept talking about Pragya. Also, how refreshing to have Abhi with parents!!

Can't wait to read whats next! This gave me "Hum Tum" feels, which is one of my favorite movies :)

Talent se bhare-Nadz and Nives, thank youu for such a cute collaboration!! You guys rocked it! 👏

Originally posted by: anamika.viji

So adorbs :)

U girls r rocking :)

Identical twins !! So cute ,!! Waiting for the next :)

Originally posted by: Naina-

AWW...just aww!! So many questions! *raising hand* I wanna know more about both of their brothers. There seems to be something more than what meets the eye for both of them. Also, bechara Arjun. i feel a little bad for him lolz. What if he wanted to be a part of their friendship? Or what if he had a mini crush on Pragz and is a little jealous of Abhi? How will Abhi feel if Pragya gets closer to Prem instead of Abhi? I need to know!

Absolute favorite part:

I told her that she would run away after seeing her mom and that was the reason for me stopping her. She told that she had a fight with Arjun before I came to class. He wanted to sit besides Pragya and Pragya asked him to not sit as I would sit there. Arjun had told her that everyone would like to sit near him but she doesn't let him sit near her. Arjun had told that he is the rockstar. Pragya argued with him. Then they had challenged each other as to where I would sit near Arjun or Pragya. "I won the challenge", grinned Pragya.

Sometimes the first chapter is so well written that the second chapter can fail to make you feel as happy and satisfied with it. But that was definitely not the case here! The story just got cuter! Loved it!!

P.S. First comment unreserved on page one!

P.P.S. Lil' Pragya likes baarish and reading...hmm, lil' Nadz much??😉

Originally posted by: Shafoo

awesome update i like it very much