A Suitable Husband | in progress | a Pregnancy Track FF by mina - Page 22

When I write it! 😆 😳

So waited till I could find time for a detailed feedback! 😛 So coming to my detailed feedback... Everything about this chapter is so so so nicely done!

You have always been the expert in writing Pragya! But this chapter will be my favourite coz the way she being awkward at first, then relaxing, then being nervous, identifying with Angad, her insecurities, conflict in her mind, assuring to herself it would be better this way, all the thoughts -----> very very very well done! 👏

Di you are making it really hard for us to not fall for this Angad!!! 😆 Abhi has tough competition! If Abhi wasn't such an adorable heart melting fool I would want Pragya to end up with Angad! 😃

Angad in a way is what Pragya has always searched for, but then again Abhi has spoiled her for any other man!

Looking forward to read the next chapter!!!

Loads of loveee Minamma!❤️

Ps: when Angad started showing Pragya photos I was like wait!!!! This happened before too! Only to realize it was in the other story! 😆 Only jealous Abhi was missing in this part and tbh I didn't miss him here! 😛😆

oh man the daasis and the daadi are too cool! also yay for them meddling to bring abhigaya together!

i think this is one of the few times i actually feel sorry for abhi 😆 pragya is so stubborn (abhi is no less but still at least this time his stubbornness is in trying to get his wife to stay with him) and daadi is a meddling genius.

i sort of ship angad/pragya, oh no. he's handsome and definitely will treat her better than abhi did in the beginning - but abhigaya are also still orbiting around one another and ready for collision course, no one else will ever match up for them?? but angad is such a great character already

i am so here for abhi realising he's treated pragya absolutely horribly - so here for him feeling guilty for "touching her wrongly" as he put it. i really love the way you've written their characters. both so stubborn and stuck in their points of view despite all their instincts screaming otherwise. pragya follows her head, abhi follows his heart, and it just means they clash so much.

daadi and daasi are my favourite i swear i love how they just want pragya's happiness. i also love how daadi knows how to get pragya to do things it's so great. (also poor abhi. i never thought i would say this, but poor abhi.)

angad and pragya make a lot of sense on paper - but pragya has to learn that her heart isn't going to let go of abhi so easily, i'm guessing.

as usual, i absolutely love your writing and cannot wait for more!

OMG that is too precious!!! 🤣

Love it...that's another fic though, not sure I could write it. 😉 😆 But how adorable!!!

Of course I think Fuggi is gonna end up with Abhi.😳

Hmm, I hope Abhi proves himself soon!😊 I like how this track is about Tanu also but she is never actually communicating with the characters. I like that, too much Tanu..not good.

Let's see what Pragya decides!😊

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Abhi, Abhi (Now, Now)!!!!!!!!!😆