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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Gayatri, maine sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ke someone will make posters for my story. Yes my lamba jawab to you is still awaited. But what even yaar.. I am flattered so much!!!


Forget about my fic, this poster is so professional.. like a book cover.. uff..

I of course loved them all, but this is the best!!!


Like writer, like reader.

We know how to touch someone's heart, don't we?? ☺️ 😆

Just Kidding!😃

You surely know how to!*☺️I know you are blushing reading this☺️ and you know why*

As for me, purpose served, mission accomplished. I wanted the girl who made so many people so so so happy with her masterpiece to feel all the felicity, bliss, pride and ecstacy she deserves.⭐️👍🏼🤗

The poster(s)/book cover- Thank you so much. Means a lot to somebody who has never done anything of this sort before.😛

To bana lo apni book ka cover if you like, I will be honoured.

And thanks a lot for the PM. Great epilogue. You have taken care of very very fine details like the Phd research paper, its topic etc as always. Applaud your eye for minutiae. For me the chapter name is - Oomph reloaded!!

Here is a song for your epilogue- Suresh vs. Fangurls(Closest representative of this epilogue I could think of😊)

Jealous Lyrics

"Jealous"-Nick Jonas

I don't like the way he's looking at you
I'm starting to think you want him too
Am I crazy, have I lost ya?
Even though I know you love me, can't help it

[Chorus:]
I turn my chin music up
And I'm puffing my chest
I'm getting red in the face
You can call me obsessed
It's not your fault that they hover
I mean no disrespect
It's my right to be hellish
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

I wish you didn't have to post it out
I wish you'd save a little bit just for me
Protective or possessive, yeah
Call it passive or aggressive

[Chorus:]
I turn my chin music up
And I'm puffing my chest
I'm getting red in the face
You can call me obsessed
It's not your fault that they hover
I mean no disrespect
It's my right to be hellish
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

You're the only one invited
I said there's no one else for you
'Cause you know I get excited, yeah
When you get jealous too

[Chorus:]
I turn my chin music up
And I'm puffing my chest
I'm turning red in the face
You can call me obsessed
It's not your fault that they hover
I mean no disrespect
It's my right to be hellish
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

Oh (that's why)
I still get jealous
Oh (that's why)
I still get jealous

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yw04QD1LaB0[/YOUTUBE]


Actually,I have got 2 'jealous' songs- one is the aforesaid one from Abhi's POV suited to this epilogue and then there is a second one from Pragya's POV- the young girl Pragya's when she was left by Abhi for two years and when she would see him on TV and when she met him and wanted to know about his life,Tanu and other girls he worked with. Here it goes-

Jealous -labrinth lyrics

By: Labrinth

[Verse 1]
I'm jealous of the rain
That falls upon your skin
It's closer than my hands have been
I'm jealous of the rain
I'm jealous of the wind
That ripples through your clothes
It's closer than your shadow
Oh, I'm jealous of the wind, cause


[Chorus]
I wished you the best of
All this world could give

And I told you when you left me
There's nothing to forgive
But I always thought you'd come back, tell me all you found was
Heartbreak and misery

It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me


[Verse 2]
I'm jealous of the nights
That I don't spend with you

I'm wondering who you lay next to
Oh, I'm jealous of the nights

I'm jealous of the love
Love that was in here
Gone for someone else to share
Oh, I'm jealous of the love, cause


[Chorus]
I wished you the best of
All this world could give

And I told you when you left me
There's nothing to forgive
But I always thought you'd come back, tell me all you found was
Heartbreak and misery

It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me


[Bridge]
As I sink in the sand
Watch you slip through my hands

Oh, as I die here another day
Cause all I do is cry behind this smile


[Chorus]
I wished you the best of
All this world could give

And I told you when you left me
There's nothing to forgive
But I always thought you'd come back, tell me all you found was
Heartbreak and misery

It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me


[Outro]
It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50VWOBi0VFs[/YOUTUBE]

And finally a song dedicated to the ''LIFE WAS GOOD'' end of this epilogue. Suits it well symbolically-

KENNY CHESNEY LYRICS

Life Is Good Lyrics


from Everywhere We Go

Darlin', if you think back
To the heartbroken past
Before we found each other
It's so amazing, it's almost crazy
What a difference lookin' through the eyes of love

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Gonna knock on wood
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good

People stop me on the street
Thinkin' I'm the old me
Talkin' about the bad old days
But ever since you came along
Them old blues are long gone
I break into a grin and all that I can say is

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Gonna knock on wood
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good

Someday girl, this old world will try to beat you up
Let 'em bring it on 'cause every time we touch

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Gonna knock on wood
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good
Life is good

I would have loved and not loved to see this triangle in the soap. Loved for the obvious reasons and not loved' because I know the typical EK show Cvs would ruin it with their dragging,taking the jealousy to the extreme and making Abhi see 'an actually non-existent' infidelity from Pragya's side, misunderstand her,blame her yet again, get drunk, hurt her and himself and after an year or so of dragging & destroying the story not knowing how to take it further end the track stupidly yet unaware how to resurrect the sanity of the story. So thank God it wasn't there.

Glad YOU wrote it. Slick, sleek, precise and pitch-perfect!👏

What was there to hate? Enjoyed their pillow talk to the core.❤️

But yes, I get this nervousness of yours a little too well as is evident from my PMs about the posters and oration. Was cute how you said you would run away immediately after posting.😆 Because I do the same when I feel like that. I knew you would want to correct that 'their' and the other stuff later. It is okay.Don't worry. We know you leave no stone unturned in making things perfect and those tiny mistakes neither count nor matter. So chill.😛😊

I like how pragya now expresses clearly, is able to retort and abhi dorsn't go into silent mode, gives her a fair chance to express herself and doesn't misunderstand for no reason. Liked how they have evolved and are celebrating ten years of togetherness with the same newness/spark of their old days.

Keep them coming.😊

However I have to admit that my inferno like excitement for RESTLESS and this epilogue was doused to some degree yesterday as I read through all that is to come on KKB, the negativity and the evilness surrounding it and felt utterly frustrated. I better stay away from the real KKB(till it becomes bearable) like I had been doing until now and stick to your works and selected stuff from other writers/fans.

Nevertheless, I had fun reading it. It was lovely, cute and hot. Super stuff. Will read it again with a calm mind so that I can relish it to the fullest.

PS- Some things about this chapter somehow reminded me of a 2012-2013 bestseller!

Gayatri


Edited by GA5if - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@aakanchanadevi
Thank you so much.😃(referring to your post on pg-84 quoting this- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/129980361)
My post with all the posters and compliments for Tia was too huge, hence not quoting the entire thing.
Gayatri
Edited by GA5if - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
More than anything...having something to READ excites me to a greater extent!

Enjoyed the whole setup...and of course jealousy 😛 Even after a decade of togetherness and having a kid...Abhi still thinks she will ever entertain anyone else? 😛

It's always good to see Abhi jealous and if it leads to what it led to in the epilogue 😛 Mauja hi mauja for Pragya 😆

Excited to know what happens while Abhi is in London and how you take this story forward!!! And I feel THIS Suresh will develop feelings for Pragya???

And by the way...am I just assuming or you are continuing this?? 😳

All in all this epilogue was very well written.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

No yaar.. Abhi..😆 actually i was so angry after watching abhi in yesterday's episode, then i saw PM for epilogue.. literally after reading it, my anger increased 10 folds more..🥱

i hate Abhi's judgmental behavior..🤔 he saw Suresh talking nicely with chashmish and also heard some compliments.. So he felt jealous and said so many bad words for Suresh..😭.. i mean what even..😲 and he didn't stop here.. he took pragya upstairs and made love to satisfy his ego..😳 really i hate such behaviors.. But i love your writing skills and concepts..😃 you r fab..👏

Sorry your temper increased! Your interpretation of Abhi is right at one level (meaning he is a layered character and there are other interpretation to him too). He can be judgemental, impulsive and tantrum throwing. But then that's Abhi for you, he is that kind of a person. Him having these flaws and very human qualities makes him interesting to me in the show and to write.
Again, sorry to bother you. I normally don't PM. I ended up PMing this one since many had asked me to and I included you and a few others who I thought would be interested.
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Actually tia this the lovely story of your make me remember rockstar ff.
Love all the part.
And comments briefly once I got time
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tia! I haven't commented on this thread till now but I've read all the chapters. Its such a beautiful story! <3 I loved reading it. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Sorry your temper increased! Your interpretation of Abhi is right at one level (meaning he is a layered character and there are other interpretation to him too). He can be judgemental, impulsive and tantrum throwing. But then that's Abhi for you, he is that kind of a person. Him having these flaws and very human qualities makes him interesting to me in the show and to write.
Again, sorry to bother you. I normally don't PM. I ended up PMing this one since many had asked me to and I included you and a few others who I thought would be interested.

don't say sorry yaar.. 😭Got something to read on Abhi's POV for abhi's yesterday's episode behavior.. i really understood his pain now.. silly me, i think i m also having judgmental behavior..😆scene dekh apna aapa kho diya, aur bakwas kar gayi..😛 now i am okay..😊😆

@bold.. i agree about his flaws.. lekin kuch zyada hai(for me).. thoda bhi kam ho gaya na it will be okay for me..😳
if possible.. PM me if you write something again.. i would love to read your stories.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guys,
I have something to share for those ever interested in Suresh-Pragya-Abhi triangle. What interested me in this is the subtle stuff they showed in the soap. Although Suresh-Pragya were engaged and all that, of course they didn't really have a romantic relationship. Pragya was platonic and Suresh thought he loved BB, so yeah it never worked out and Pragya could take him out of her brain too with not much difficulty.

But then after Pragya marries Abhi, there is some interesting things that happen. Suresh always has a discontent of Abhi (because Abhi stands for everything Suresh doesn't believe in, the flashy, rich arrogant never so right rockstar). And Suresh always expresses it. He is sort of disappointed too that he lost Pragya in a way. And later, he keeps on stressing how lucky is Abhi to have Pragya whenever SuBhiGya meet.

And when AbhiGya are on their pag phere, Suresh is peeping at the window (he was doing it for Bulbul perhaps), but he notices Pragya and then Abhi. Abhi is sort of taking his shirt out etc. (that's drunk Abhi annoying Pragya whatever), yet our Suresh Babu keeps on looking. I mean why is he interested in AbhiGya that way? Is he sad about losing out on Pragya, unhappy about AbhiGya marriage?

While at a surface level, Suresh always tries to support Pragya, he goes a step ahead to take on Abhi. Like in drunk and drive case, he wants to have Abhi punished without even informing Pragya! After all, it's his best friend's husband but he doesn't bother to even inform her before complaining against Abhi.

And when Abhi saves the day in KB hall scenario, Suresh thanks him but also makes a statement that Abhi's ways were not exactly right.

And then in MMS case, he tells Abhi "she had feelings for me". what was the need to say that? Abhi is already mad looking at this MMS where PraSu are on a bed. Then Suresh rather than trying to help AbhiGya marriage by explaining the situation that lead to MMS, adds more fuel by saying Pragya had feelings for him!!!

And ABhi of course has been observant of Suresh's antics all along. And he has always taken a dig at Suresh at any given chance while he still appreciates him as a good guy.

Interesting that Suresh never interferes between RaBul this way although he is supposed to be in love with BB. He stays away from them in a dignified way. But with AbhiGya he has been a nosey presence.

I wish CVs had developed this. I was very interested in this trio.

Anyways, in my epilogue here, I have made it light hearted since I had no intention to continue it as a story. But as you would have noticed, Suresh sort of gives a cold shoulder to Abhi (he doesn't say bye to him when he leaves, he just focusses on talking to Pragya all along) and Abhi is very much annoyed with Suresh. So if written seriously, this can be a problematic/interesting triangle..

Oh well... just sharing ideas!! Suresh seems to be gone from the soap.. and this stuff will never be shown!

PS: The point is Abhi is jealous/annoyed with Suresh for reasons I explained in the epilogue. And Suresh can be jealous of Abhi too, because Abhi has a lot that he doesn't! Anyways that's my interpretation with what I saw of Suresh-Abhi in the soap. Faisal-Shabbo were good!😭
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

don't say sorry yaar.. 😭Got something to read on Abhi's POV for abhi's yesterday's episode behavior.. i really understood his pain now.. silly me, i think i m also having judgmental behavior..😆scene dekh apna aapa kho diya, aur bakwas kar gayi..😛 now i am okay..😊😆

@bold.. i agree about his flaws.. lekin kuch zyada hai(for me).. thoda bhi kam ho gaya na it will be okay for me..😳
if possible.. PM me if you write something again.. i would love to read your stories.. 😃


No worries at all Baaba. I just felt bad for making you angry when you were already mad! Chalo theek hain, ab sab such theek hain. Actually I like that Abhi ke baarein mein people have such strong opinions, I like reading them. Shabbo's characters are like this- grey and "not so right" characters. And I am of course fascinated.
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Guys,

I have something to share for those ever interested in Suresh-Pragya-Abhi triangle. What interested me in this is the subtle stuff they showed in the soap. Although Suresh-Pragya were engaged and all that, of course they didn't really have a romantic relationship. Pragya was platonic and Suresh thought he loved BB, so yeah it never worked out and Pragya could take him out of her brain too with not much difficulty.

But then after Pragya marries Abhi, there is some interesting things that happen. Suresh always has a discontent of Abhi (because Abhi stands for everything Suresh doesn't believe in, the flashy, rich arrogant never so right rockstar). And Suresh always expresses it. He is sort of disappointed too that he lost Pragya in a way. And later, he keeps on stressing how lucky is Abhi to have Pragya whenever SuBhiGya meet.

And when AbhiGya are on their pag phere, Suresh is peeping at the window (he was doing it for Bulbul perhaps), but he notices Pragya and then Abhi. Abhi is sort of taking his shirt out etc. (that's drunk Abhi annoying Pragya whatever), yet our Suresh Babu keeps on looking. I mean why is he interested in AbhiGya that way? Is he sad about losing out on Pragya, unhappy about AbhiGya marriage?

While at a surface level, Suresh always tries to support Pragya, he goes a step ahead to take on Abhi. Like in drunk and drive case, he wants to have Abhi punished without even informing Pragya! After all, it's his best friend's husband but he doesn't bother to even inform her before complaining against Abhi.

And when Abhi saves the day in KB hall scenario, Suresh thanks him but also makes a statement that Abhi's ways were not exactly right.

And then in MMS case, he tells Abhi "she had feelings for me". what was the need to say that? Abhi is already mad looking at this MMS where PraSu are on a bed. Then Suresh rather than trying to help AbhiGya marriage by explaining the situation that lead to MMS, adds more fuel by saying Pragya had feelings for him!!!

And ABhi of course has been observant of Suresh's antics all along. And he has always taken a dig at Suresh at any given chance while he still appreciates him as a good guy.

Interesting that Suresh never interferes between RaBul this way although he is supposed to be in love with BB. He stays away from them in a dignified way. But with AbhiGya he has been a nosey presence.

I wish CVs had developed this. I was very interested in this trio.

Anyways, in my epilogue here, I have made it light hearted since I had no intention to continue it as a story. But as you would have noticed, Suresh sort of gives a cold shoulder to Abhi (he doesn't say bye to him when he leaves, he just focusses on talking to Pragya all along) and Abhi is very much annoyed with Suresh. So if written seriously, this can be a problematic/interesting triangle..

Oh well... just sharing ideas!! Suresh seems to be gone from the soap.. and this stuff will never be shown!



Thanks for sharing Tia I loved reading your thoughts and I agree with you in all of them but as we said in spite of Suresh being built up as a controversial and interesting character with so many potentials the CVs just dropped him like a hot potato so suddenly and with no obvious reasons it seems that he will play a big part in the kidnapping track and then just disappeared in thin air ..
I really liked him and in spite of " boring " was supposed to be the essences of his character he was never boring for me ...
I have no hope that the CVs may bring him back but if you ever got the idea of exploring all this in your FF I will be more than happy to read

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