Abhigya SS - A Connection ALL UPD PAGE 1 AND ALTERNATE END PG 2

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

simmi, this is awsm.
wow i always admired by ur sad ends, rather than happy ends, it make me feel real and also pathetic.
happy end is really cute.
loved all the part.
love u and ur story.

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-harini-

@-harini-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

When I saw that you had sent a pm,I just couldn't resist and I opened it ..now I am too glad I did!
Simmi! This is for you 🤗 !
You already know I admire the way you write..I had tears when I read the first version.It was so beautiful yet so sad!
Such a different take and thank you for writing this!❤️
As regards the alternate end, yay loved it!😊
You are a wonderful writer :) keep going!

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Apeksha

@ApekshaM

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Res*
Will unress soon😉

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-haleemzz-

@-haleemzz-

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

simmi that was so sad an amazing

i was so happy to know you wrote something

love the title

simmi i love this

thanks for pm

loved the ending it was so good

the alternative ending was also good

but preferred the other ending

it was amazing

its amazing simmi

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Olya

@olushka2924

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Wow, I did not expect this. You managed to surprise me. Very cool! 👍🏼 👏

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Very nice ss this is called true love

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TeluguAmmayi

@TeluguAmmayi

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Simi this is awesome 😊
V glad there is an alternative ending

Thank you

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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

oh my god simmi

that was heartbreaking yet so beautiful

love in it's purest form

read all the parts together and could feel the emotions

this story definitely connected with my heart

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Awesome Simmi!! It was just so beautiful.

They felt as if something had clicked into place for a moment but it was a connection that didn't complete...

I don't know what to say.

It definitely was something very different.

I'm so glad you posted all the parts together and I got to read it in one go! :D

It was kinda emotional but a beautiful story. <3

Thank you for the PM. :)

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Simmi

@--simmi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Thank you all who liked this! I knew it was different and was worried if it would be likable or not! The response makes me feel good! Thanks for the lovely comments! And yes, it was inspired by the song of Amrinder Gill with a similar story!