abhigya ss;mission bring fuggy back chapter 5 page 9 28/11

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HI guys
i have had an idea for quite some time
do tell me if i should continue
so what if Sarla has a heart attack and dies.
to ne honest i hate sarla caharacter she just pisses me of to an extreme.I think she likes pragya more than bulbul and she is over emotional about everything
Every single person in pragya's family blames her and she comes back to the old fuggy pragya
but no one supports her but abhi.dadi and Abhi will get her to her self.

prologue
Dear diary,
mummy ji died 3 months ago,however fuggy has been suffering the most out of everyone.
fuggy told me the truth about everything and i moved to Delhi with fuggy and dadi.
Every single day i see my fuggy dying a little her eyes i so fell in love have lost its nature spark,she nearly never goes out,it seems like she has stopped laughing and i can't see her like this.
I have told bulbul the truth but she has blamed my fuggy on her mothers death,Purab doesn't even believe his di.I have tried so hard to being back my suniye however i am not done,i will keep trying.

I will do anything in my power to bring her back:mission bring back my fuggy begins now.

signed Abhishek Prem Mehra

do tell me whether to continue or not😃😃
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so guys this is going to be abhi telling everything hope you like it

chapter 1
Dear diary
my day has been as hard as ever,i have seen the expected and the unexpected.
Its like i am seeing everything breaking right in front of my eyes and i can't do shit about it,however fuggy has finally told me the truth.
Devastated she was:she was dying and it was obvious that she is loosing herself to something that was never her fault.
So i have decided the best thing to do is take my fuggy and dadi away from all this;we all are leaving to Delhi in a weeks time.
I hope to start a new beginning.

In a couple of months a whole lot of things have happened,it has impacted us all:i want it to change.

PAST
So heres how everything started new pragya had already been here for a month.
Everyone in the house had to do house work even and Aliyah and Tanu.
Shocked,i know i was.New Pragya had a way of having her way of things,it was always amusing for me to watch,did upset me though.
As weeks past,everything was taking a turn not a good turn but a bad turn.
Purab had came to visit the mansion he had seen a lot in fact too much and was horrified,from far i watched everyone ran up to him including tanu and aliyah they were chatting bullshit .Purab looked furious.
I was disgusted.Where was my angel of a sister gone?She was filled with hatred she was changing into a devil.I didn't expect much from Tanu but are you serious she had changed a little as well.
All these people were so cruel.
I had to take my mind away from all of this so i went to the only person,who loves me so purely:dadi.
As i was walking up to the stairs i saw an angry Purab running down the stairs.
I asked him what happened.
ME:'Purab what happened?why are you so angry?'
PURAB:'Pragya i can't take this she is ruining my family and your family i went up to her room and then'He was shaking like a leaf with tears pouring out of his eyes.
ME:'Go home'
I want up to my room she wasn't there,i went up to dadi.
The room door was ajar i peeked in someone was crying;instantly i knew to was fuggy.
FUGGY:'dadi i can't do this anymore sorry i can't go on with your plan.Purab broke all his relations with me he called me pragya not pragya di.i was in my room when he stormed he screamed at me and broke all relations with me.My only brother is gone,just in a second gone! what am i going to do?
Ive lost purab and I'm loosing Abhishek. Abhishek is being used,tanu claims Abhi is the father of her baby and its not its nikil.Also Aliyah want to tarnish her brother image with Raj bhai and she want to put the blame on Purab.
Is it wrong for me to save my suniye from humiliation?Or is it wrong to save my brother from being framed?
At this moment everything seems to be wrong.Im loosing everything.He thinks i don't love hime when in fact i love him the most'.She dropped onto the floor weeping.
I ran in to comfort fuggy; i took her into a hug she hugged me back questioning her decisions.From the corner of my eye i saw dadi locking the door and leaving giving us some privacy.
She broke the hug and cupped my face.
ME:'why didnt you trust me?i love you and i will always stand by you.You are not loosing me you will always have me with you i will never leave you.do you understand captain fuggy.Now tell me where you where in the 20 days you were gone'.she nodded
FUGGY:'i had a accident dadi helped me received she gave me a second life! I stopped breathing at one point my munglesutra dropped out of my hand and dadi put it on my neck and i started to breathe because of you and i will always love.the only reason i didn't tell you is because dadi restricted me and you know your an atom bomb when your angry',she smiled through tears .
i embraced her again we said i love you to each other and we stayed in the same position for a very long time.We fell asleep in the same position


Till next time diary,
signed of by Abhishek Prem Mehra



Edited by KIHminnie123 - 10 years ago

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