An idea for SS based on current story line

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear al,
I have an idea for an SS based on current scenario. If any one of you could take it on, it would be great. I just posted it in Mina's post and am repeating it here.

While Pragya and Abhi are discussing as they usually do, Pragya continues innocently rubbing on Abhis face that he loves Tanu. She keeps repeating the same at various points. Finally the dam breaks. Abhi blurts out that he actually loves Pragya and in fact has never loved any one before. In fact he never knew the actual meaning of love before, and he understands it better. He continues telling, is it not obvious from his behaviour. He says from the time he married her, his attention has only been on Pragya. To begin with he hated Pragya, he wanted to get back to her and only used Tanu for that. Then he was confused with Pragya. If she is so bad as they were thinking why is she is behaving this way. The confusions were growing day by day. Even in that phase he only used Tanu to get back. Then there was possessiveness. Some thing or the other the attension was only on Pragya. There was hardly any Tanu. Then the MMS khand which completely took him off gaurd. He was hurt by Pragya. Jealous with Suresh. Then the confusions as to why the pull. Then the desperation to find the kidnapped her. After that some more confusion with Pragya confession and so on. Where is Tanu in all this. Every inch of his time was occupied by Pragya once she entered his life. Yes, he has done lot of sins and thats why he is facing this. He realized very late that he actually loves her and now he is not even in a justifiable position to confess his feelings. He is now going to lose and that is killing him. In fact even dadi is taking some back seat to this feeling that he is going to lose. Had this pregnancy been false, he would have some how managed to get her love him. Definitely would have worked hard to get her love him. But now he does not have the right.

Pragya was shocked with his words. Towards the end, she could not any more take the immense pain hidden in his words. She jumps in saying actually she also loves him. She was doing all this for him, her love. She wants to ensure he is happy and does not care even if that kills her. Both of them stare at each other and realize how foolish they have been. It was there all over, its just that they did not want to buy it. Both could see the other crumbling under the impending seperation but were not willing to believe.

They just stare at each other silently with tears flowing continuously. Suddenly Abhi leaps forwards and pulls her to a tight hug. It was clear he was not letting go of her. Pragya reciprocates back and tightens her grip on him. Both of them continue to tighten further and further indicating they are not going to let go of each other under any circumstances. Yes they will have to deal with Tanu and her child, but it is for another day. And there are thousand of other ways of doing it without seperation.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice description! I don't know if we need an SS when you have explained it so nicely yourself. Thanks for posting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Nice idea but you have written it beautifully and as Mina said I don't think there is a SS needed, you could continue further from here though, that would be nice cause this is a perfect start to it!

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