Abhigya TS: The Aftermath (epilogue- page 4, 6/10)

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Omg this is so well written

u get the emotions across so well.

i love this storyline compared to what is going on in the show at the moment.

please update part 3 soon

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hello Ayna,

It was an absolutely delightful read. I was hooked on to the story and suddenly it ended. As much as it itches me to know more, like what happens finally and what is pragyas take on it, I would still think it's a perfect ending. Maybe a small epilogue you could give us?

What I admire about this piece is that the way you could make me step into pragyas and abhis shoes. I felt for both of them! I felt like it was happening with me, I had my stomach clenching all the time I read.
I really love your abrupt style of ending - it is a nice style of literature, but today as reader I would love to know more.

I think if a writer can churn out emotions of reader by making then step on the characters place then it is the most successful venture for a writer. I think you've reached there with this piece.

I don't know if I am coherent any longer
But with that, kudos to you and all the best for all your future endeavours!
Please PM me if you do write another part here.

Love,
Aafrah

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -mina-
ANYAAA

I love this so muchhh

post-divorce friends fic

pragya trying to be her best self

possessive lying abhi

EVERYTHING

i hope to leave you a more worthy review in the future but right now i'm just asfcsvsggsvsfv SO HAPPY

this is a beautiful read

i know it says TS and i know i saw two parts

but i hope there is more anya pleasseee

pleasseee more definite resolutionnn pleaseee

omg

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!

more later byeee

*insert snapeish injoke here that i cannot think of because i am so thrilled at having read this and also my emotions are all over the place and my eyes were blurred with tears for the last quarter and i need to reread but my heart is racing and also it's past bedtime and OMG*

OMG!

HELLO

eeep!! mina thank you so much for your review! i was away for some time so i made myself write a post-divorce-but-not-really-divorced story bc why not

i am an utter failure when it comes to conclusive ending. im just impossible with those things but im really glad you liked it!!

i like to think snape isn't one to jest, he'd just hide his growing smile, sniff at you and walk away robes billowing and all. i love that man. im in love with a fictional character. pls halp!!!!

thank you for dropping by!

Originally posted by: hailly
Amazing updates loved it.
Beautifully written.
Loved it so much.

hey! thank you for reading. glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: raima111
loved it... 😛

glad you liked it!!

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: --simmi--
Wow! After divorce friends! Something different! Very nicely written, I loved reading it. I can't pick a specific bit, I mean everything was so so I dunno what to say really. The end was really emotional but comforting at the same time, thanks for writing this amazing piece of work! <3 :)

ah, thank you my dear! i promise myself to write light, happy stuff but end up with a heap of angst (or sth in resemblance to angsty) instead. smh smh smh

thanks again for dropping by!! <3

Originally posted by: Humzy
awsm ts
loved it
very nicely written

thank you very much!! glad you liked it 😉

Originally posted by: anamika.vg
Nice story yaar! Pls say there is more chapters coming!
Waiting for more stories from you!

why thank you!!

i cant promise you anything.. sometimes when i write more i end up ruining it🤢 thanks again for dropping by!

Edited by valschanya - 10 years ago

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha
Anya loved loves it
such an awsm ts
abhi crazy man, searching for answer

yes, abhi is one troubled man. he really needs to pull himself together. asap!!

thanks for reading😊

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014
Hii welcome back ..you disappeared on us suddenly and completely ..I was chcking daily for updates from you on the other fic ..glad you are here at last with a very pleasant surprise..I loved it so much so so much very emotional and sadly romantic..I wish you give us another update but the way you end it is so beautiful and I can easily take it from here to the happy ending

Thank you so much ..I hope you don't forget the other on and will give us the next update soon

hi love! im sorry for disappearing on you guys.. sometimes life gets the better of you and you just cant keep up😕 but i will be updating more frequently now, or at least i hope so.

so glad you liked it! i tried writing pragya as someone who came out of her ordeal as a stronger person.. i hope i delivered! thank you for your awesome words <3

Originally posted by: vivkriti
Lovey. Abhigya friendship after divorce superbly written loved it

hey thanks for commenting! glad you liked it😳

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: nilmi
Amazing ...loved it

thank you!! glad you liked it😊

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Omg this is so well written

u get the emotions across so well.

i love this storyline compared to what is going on in the show at the moment.

please update part 3 soon

oh hello there! thank you for dropping by. writing emotional parts can be haaard so im glad it didnt turn out that bad😉

Originally posted by: quirky_senorita
This was just incredible.

whoa thank you!!

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: aafrah
Hello Ayna,

It was an absolutely delightful read. I was hooked on to the story and suddenly it ended. As much as it itches me to know more, like what happens finally and what is pragyas take on it, I would still think it's a perfect ending. Maybe a small epilogue you could give us?

What I admire about this piece is that the way you could make me step into pragyas and abhis shoes. I felt for both of them! I felt like it was happening with me, I had my stomach clenching all the time I read.
I really love your abrupt style of ending - it is a nice style of literature, but today as reader I would love to know more.

I think if a writer can churn out emotions of reader by making then step on the characters place then it is the most successful venture for a writer. I think you've reached there with this piece.

I don't know if I am coherent any longer
But with that, kudos to you and all the best for all your future endeavours!
Please PM me if you do write another part here.

Love,
Aafrah

oh wow.

ok where do i start? first, thank you so so much for giving me an elaborate review. i love reading what others think and it does help improve my writing. food for thought!!

a short epilogue huh? i think i might do just that. i just hope i wont drag it out too much. i struggle with making my stories whole. i do feel this story hasn't resolved itself but i was literally scratching my head deciding how the story would end😕 though there's one thing that didn't sit quiet well with me: pragya's take on abhi's revelation and whether there's any kind of future for them. (ok that's two)

i see writing, no matter how short, as a way to channel feelings; anger, pain, bitterness, happiness, excitement. so when i know other readers were affected by a character's emotion, or even better-- able to identify themselves through the characters.. it just feels so rewarding. i think i can vouch for other writers when i say this.

again, thank you for dropping by!! <3

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

That was so beautiful... all the emotions ... so wonderfully portrayed 👍🏼!!!! I loved it!!!!

Thank you!!!

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Anya!! OMG Mina beckoned me back to IF with the promise of your fic and it was SO worth it!! Uff it aroused Abhigya feels in me which no fic has done in soo long! It made me want to write again uff! I loved your descriptions of Abhi feeling so at ease in her apartment. I liked that hte kiss wasn't magically pleasant but just added complication onto an already overcomplicated relationship. And that last moment destroyed me! I want more yet I can imagine what happens next too. But please, more! I'm being greedy.

Thank you, thank you!