AbhiGya FF -The Perfect Deal-Epilogue Pg 43- 13/06 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
The Perfect Deal was, in my opinion, the perfect story! Your writing style is amazing! Your story and adaptation of the actual deal between abhi and pragya (in the show) is interestingly outstanding. What I liked about your story was that it was a balanced 'deal' (story)! We had chapters with humor, jealousy, anger, fights, make-ups, break-ups, love, confusion, real-life problems with alia and Neil, and a happyily-ever-after! I am so glad u updated every day because that way it kept the readers (me) intrigued and it allowed you to complete the story and maintain the focus, because what often happens is that people start a story and than take a long break and struggle to get the back to the gist of it. All I am trying to say is that I always looked forward to reading this story and you fulfilled my appetite for a daily dose of abhigya!
And... your epilogue was brilliant. It wasn't just a 'and they lived happily ever after'! You covered some important aspects. You got Alia and Neel, you got the uncle-niece relationship between Aditi and Abhi and most importantly you very very very cutely and naughtily 😉☺️😆 got Abhi and Pragya!

You are truly an amazing writer and this is one of the more fun reads. Please don't stop, I want more and I believe I will get more!

Kind of sad that there won't be anymore Perfect Deal for me to read 😭😭

I think you have understood by now how much I like your story and how much I appreciate your commitment and style for this story! Keep up the good work! Come back with a bang... I know you will!

A HUGE HUG FROM ME TO YOU...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read all page in one
Absolutely beautiful story dear
Amazing work love it

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Posted: 10 years ago
DIAHH!!!! 🤗 and some more 🤗.

Short on time and this story deserves way more than this brief comment. But - this little gem was perfection in itself. Absolutely adorable. And i loved every single character and the way you portrayed them. Very well done 👏.
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES!!!!!!!!!
(BECAUSE ALL I HAVE IN MIND NOW IS HUNDRED KYAS BECAUSE IT ENDED ALREADY AND A THOUSAND UFFs)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read the whole story in one go
Beautifully written yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Perfect end 👏
Loved it ❤️ thaaank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg diah, dia love u.
congrats diah, u finished will miss this upd.
neil back again,abhi jealous over aditi, bhai its bad.
abhigya going to have a baby so nice end.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Diah awesome and fab and superb and perfect end I love it
you have done a very good job and your written is superb
abhigya happy end and also pragya pregnancy was the perfect end and the perfect happy even after
I can't wait to read more story from you
thank you so much for this story Diah
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Posted: 10 years ago
Diah, wonderful ending to this amazing story, 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww such lovely epilogue loved reading it I like how Abhi was jealouse of Neel buying Aditi and new doll house and now there is a competition between them lol

Aww it's nice Neel is grateful to Pragya and he promised to keep both Aaliyah and Aditi happy

Lol it's funny how dadi is scared of bulbul she went to call her so sweet

Oh wow Abhi and Pragya are gonna have a baby they will be great parents

I hope we get to read another story from you soon

Love ya x

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