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Hey guys!! This is my first fanfic!!!! So I hope you all like it! The current show track is making me go insaneee omg! So this fanfic is about pragya's POV and what I would do if I was pragya! Sorry for the grammar problems and my Hindi is terrible as I'm from New Zealand so il try not to do the Hindi speaking! So il write the teaser and if I get positive feedback il continue the story! Comment please!!! Good or bad I don't mind :)
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TEASER

PRAYAS POV

What have I done... How can I lie to the person who means most to me? I don't love him? It was an April fools joke? What kind of person would lie as such! I do love him! My feelings for him are true! As I watch my abhi... No tanus abhi... Walk away after my cold cold lie, I tumble on my ground and I wish that the ground will just swallow me up...

Maybe I should tell him it was all a lie and that I do love him. Maybe I should tell him that tanus pregnant. No that's her job! But why should I make him hate me, I mean I know he doesn't love me but hatred? That's not what I wanted at all! Who would want the love of their life to hate them? I have to apologise! I will! Tomorrows the day from this day to that I will tell him how I feel.

Part one will be uploaded soon depending on your guys feed back :)

Chapter 1- pg 2
Chapter 2- pg 3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's a nice start continue please :)
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Nice start .continue soon plz .
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Aww nice start! Really eager to know what happens the next day and if Abhi will listen to her
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nice and very interesting start ...I would like to know what will happen next
... pls update soon
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Very nice!!
Please do continue! ❤️
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Aww nice start! Really eager to know what happens the next day and if Abhi will listen to her


Thank you! I love your fanfics! Keep up the good work :)
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Thank you all for your lovely replies! Will continue the story and chapter one tomorrow :)
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i completely agree with you.. the current track is making us insane... loved your teaser... continue soon.. please
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Thank you all so much for the wonderful feedback! And the motivation for me to continue this story! Hope you all like it!!!!
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The story's name is "Every moment with you"
CHAPTER ONE

as the sun shines on my face and I wake up, I immediately remember everything that happened the previous night, the lies, the tears. I just wish that what ever happened would have been a dream. But sadly, it's morning and what happened has turned out to be reality.

As I gaze at the bed. I notice that he hasn't came home yet. Where would he be? With tanu? My heart sinks at that thought. And I get up and take a shower I think about how I should explain myself. How I should tell him what I said, what I did, wasn't what I wanted. How should I explain how much I love him?

After getting ready and applying kumkum on my forehead, I hear Aaliyah approaching me sounding very angry, I get ready for the worst. Aaliyah comes to me fuming and says "bhabhi what have you done? What have you done that Bhai is in this condition" I think of all the possible things that may have happened to the person I love most. "Aaliyah, what happened?? What's wrong with him?? Inhe kya howa? Take me to him right now" saying so Aaliyah and I start traveling to some sort of flat, I don't seem to remember or know it too well but I know that it's abhi's. I approach abhi to see him lying on the floor chanting my name...

Why's he acting like this? Does he have feelings for me too? Did my behaviour yesterday give him that much of an impact?

Suniye... I say slowly. He looks at me, I can immediately notice the happiness in his intoxicated eyes. "Fuggy.. Tum yahan?" Isn't he supposed to be angry at me? Why is he so normal? I know he's intoxicated but what's wrong with him? "Shhh... Don't say anything. You're not in the right state of mind. Come let's go home" I tell him then Aaliyah and I take Him to the Mehra house. Dadi approaches us and asks what's wrong with abhi. I tell her not to worry and that he will be fine.

After abhi is lying down on his bed and slowly waking up after his 8 hour nap. He holds his head in his hands. I bring him coffee and tell him to hear me out. "I don't want to listen to you pragya. What you said. The terrible joke you made. Is unforgivable. I can't believe I didn't know the real you" saying so I see the tears filled in him eyes... And only then I notice the tears on my own. "Suniye... Yesterday... What I said, it's not true! My feelings for you are true! I was caught up in the moment. I don't know what happened, how it happened, when it happened but I am truely and madly in love with you!" I can see the suprised look in his eyes. His face shows mixed emotions. The anger is gone and there's only pain and confusion.

"If what you said yesterday wasnt true... Then... Why would you say that?" He asked me the question I was most feared to answer. "Because we... I... We just can't be together" saying so I run out of the room and hug my knees and cry to the ground in the guest room. And without knowing it I have fallen into a deep sleep.
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When I wake up the next morning, I find myself on the bed. Not on the ground. I rub my eyes and notice the dry tears in my eyes. I smile at the thought of him knowing my feelings and not hating me but the feeling that he's not mine is still dancing on my mind like a demon. The fact that I will never get to hear those three magical words from him was killing me.

As I'm about to get out of bed. I see abhi coming in with 2 cups of coffee. He gives a me a small sad smile and gives me a cup. "Woh... Tum... Kal... Listen. I don't know what's wrong with you and why you are saying such things but I want to know. Why can't we be together foggy. Why are you suddenly saying things like this. You have all rights on me. I want to accept you fully as my wife." I'm trying to process what he said into my brain. "You... Want to accept me... But, what about tanu! What about her chi..." I stop myself before blurting out about tanus pregnancy. He gives me a confused look as says "kya... Chi? What does that mean" "I meant career" I say. Feeling like a knife is staggering into my heart. "Pragya. Listen. I used to love tanu, yes. But it's all changed now. I value you. My heart needs you" abhi says. I can see the sincerity in his eyes.

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TO BE CONTINUED! Sorry if it's a short chapter!!!

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