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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: blossemdawn



Thank you! I love your fanfics! Keep up the good work :)



Aww thank you! And I'm sure your one is gonna be a good one! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the update! Loved it! Loved Abhis line at the end - But it's all changed now. I value you. My heart needs you :) <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it continue soon plz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Fabulously well written =)
Nice first chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Thanks to everyone that commented and supported me to continue writing the story! The recent episodes are killing me!!! I wish what I'm writing on my fanfic would have been true! Sadly it's not so please comment and if you all have any ideas you'd like to share with me regarding the fanfic please do so :)
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CHAPTER 2

"Abhi... What are you saying? You have to accept tanu. You can't be feeling like this for me" I say slowly. Hoping that he'd understand without me telling him what's happened. "Why are you forcing me and insisting me to be with tanu all of a sudden? That doesn't sound like you fuggy." I can see the pain in his eyes. "Abhi. I love you. And I don't want, what you have done in the past to haunt you. You should accept tanu." He seems confused and hurt.

"Pragya, what do you mean? What have I done in the past that will haunt me?" "You'll find out soon abhishek. I don't have the right to tell you. I shouldn't tell you. It's tanus responsibility and I'm not the one that should be telling you. Go and ask tanu." As these words leave my mouth. I leave a confused and hurt abhi in the room and go get ready for another painful day.
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After getting ready and I'm drying my hair. I get a phone call from my least favourite person. tanu. Ugh. "hello...?" I say slowly. "PRAGYA. HOW DARE YOU? YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO TELL ABHI ABOUT MY PREGNANCY. THATS MY JOB AS THE MOTHER OF HIS CHILD. BUT YOU WOULDN'T KNOW THAT FEELING. HE DOESNT EVEN LOVE YOU!" What she says kills me a little in the heart but then I process the rest.

"How... Did... Abhi find out about your pregnancy???" I say. Confusion is going straight in my mind like a rocket. I quickly hang up on tanu as I see abhi coming in the room. Hurt. And angry. "Aap... Yahan...?" I say slowly. Knowing he's angry and he probably doesn't want to hear a lot of bullcrap from me right now especially about how he may have acted with tanu knowing about her pregnancy. "Pragya. You never told me about tanu. How could you not. I had a right to know she was pregnant. I know it's supposed to be tanus job but you should have known that tanu wouldn't tell me." I'm so confused. If I didn't accidental tell him. How in the world did he find out???

"If... I didn't tell you... How did you know?" I ask. Waiting eagerly for his answer while he's fuming in anger. "When you were having a shower, I found tanus pregnancy report. And I can say as a fact that tanu may be pregnant. But I'm 100% sure it's not my baby. I mean. Think about it. I was with you for 1 month running around from the kidnappers. And the report says she's one and a half month pregnant. How is that possible? When I asked her how she's pregnant. She said it was when you were gonna give me a divorce. But if you remember clearly. That was during December. And it's may now. And she says she 1 and a half month pregnant. And you call yourself a teacher." He grinds his teeth and I sit on the bed, thinking of every word he just said. That's so true. She can't be pregnant with his baby. She can't be. Abhi can't cheat on me to this extent. I start getting happy at the thought of him not being the father of tanus child and I give him a big well deserving hug without even realising it...

"Pragya... I've been wanting to say something to you... Pragya, I..."

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To be continued guys! :) comment and tell me how you found it! Sorry it's a short chapter again! But so much happened in this chapter and well I don't really know how to do long chapters :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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What and end ? I ... a real cliffhanger ..I really hope he tell her he loves her ..all the dragging in the show kills me so going directly to the point will be good for a change ...but I understand it's your story and you get to choose where to take it I'm only wishing ..whatever you wrote will be fine and I will read ..it's a nice story please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful two chapters!!! continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!!! Your guys comments have supported me to carry on this story and I know my fanfic isn't the most popular one but for the people that are following it, I don't want to disappoint you guys! So here's chapter 3 guys!!!
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CHAPTER 3
"Pragya... I... Love you. I don't want tanu. I want you. I didn't realise what you were to me until yesterday. I started to know the real value of you. I'm sorry for everything. For making you feel worthless and ugly. The truth is that you are the most beautiful girl I have ever laid my eyes on. When I look at you, time stops. My heart beats as fast as light. Your voice is like music to my ears. I thought Dadi and music were the 2 most important things in my life until I fell for you. When you were kidnaped. It was like the kidnappers took my life away from me. When you're not with me, it's like a part of me is missing. I don't know what the future holds for us pragya, I don't know if tanu is really pregnant with my child or not but pragya I want you to know that it's always going to be you who I feel like this for. "

I'm so shocked. Everything abhi said to me and confessed to me feels like butterfly's kissing my heart. Every word that came out of his mouth just made me fall for him even more. Tears fill my eyes and I slowly say... "Suniye... I am truely and unconditionally in love with you Mr Abhishek Prem Mehra" as these words leave my mouth he gives me a gaze I have always dreamt of. The love. The affection. The look I always saw him give to tanu is for me now.

No longer being able to hold his gaze I give him a tight hug and whisper "I will never leave you." I can hear his heartbeating for me. I can feel every heartbeat changing my name. I can feel his smile and his urge to never letting me go.

"Come lets go to tanu. Let's take her for the DNA test. And after that we will know the truth and we can be together." He says smiling but I can sense his worries of what if the baby is his and what if we can't be together?
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Sorry guys it's another short chapter but I found it very very sweet :)
Il continue the next chapter soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update .loved it .continue soon plz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Wonderful update pls continue soon😊

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