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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Loved the new update! I love this story!


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Lovely update 👏
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Wow This is a deep story. Everyone seems to have some unforgettable incident in the past. For bulbul it's her parents' death.. For Pragya it's something to do with her not trusting guys anymore .. For Purab it's something sad that he spends his free time with Ayana, I am guessing it to be a kid ... And Abhi's family as such has a past 12 years back .. To add to this sarla's line about losing a son and getting him back twelve years later . Interesting ! Can't wait to read more Hailly. Great going :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful update
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Originally posted by: anilu

Wow This is a deep story. Everyone seems to have some unforgettable incident in the past. For bulbul it's her parents' death.. For Pragya it's something to do with her not trusting guys anymore .. For Purab it's something sad that he spends his free time with Ayana, I am guessing it to be a kid ... And Abhi's family as such has a past 12 years back .. To add to this sarla's line about losing a son and getting him back twelve years later . Interesting ! Can't wait to read more Hailly. Great going :-)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai everyone I have updated Chapter eight.
Do tell me how it is this chapter was bit difficult to write.Hope it is not to boring.
Chapter Eight
Hotel York Inn
On reaching the hotel Purab was waiting for us in the lobby. Purab:What happened guys why did it took you so long to reach here,is everything alright . Rishab:Everything is fine Purab,we stopped in few places that's why we where late. Purab:Ok then you guys know right two peoples will be sharing a room,Neel and Virat here is your room key,Maria and Leah,Nikil and Seena,Aliya and Bulbul,Rishab here is your key. Bulbul's Room
Bulbul:Hey Aliya why is Nikil and Seena are sharing a room? Aliya:Because they are married Bulbul.
Bulbul:Wow Seena is married I didn't know that.
Aliya:Yes they have been married for nearly two years now,Bulbul I am really tir after changing I am going to sleep,is that ok with you?
Bubul:Of course Aliya,go ahead.
After tossing and turning for so long Bulbul finally fell asleep after midnight. Bulbul was mumbling in her sleep,leave me alone somebody help me hearing the laugher of a guy shots up shouting NO,she was drenched in sweat and was breathing heavily it took her several minutes to realize where she is,after sometimes her heartbeat slowly comes to normal. Bulbul:For a minute I really thought that he was standing right next to me,God why can't these nightmares be less realistic and when will these dreams stop plaguing me?
She goes near the night stand to get some water,with shaky hands she lifts the jug,resulting in spilling half its content.That's when she notices the swimming pool below,decides to go down there as she is afraid to close her eyes and to get some fresh air to clear her mind, hence she didn't wake Aliya. Purab's Room
Purab was lying in the sofa holding sleeping Ayana closer to his heart,he was staring out of window lost in his own thoughts.
Purab:Today twenty years have passed mom since you left me,I still remember your last words mom. Flashback
A lady was lying in a pool of blood a little boy of seven was kneeling besides her,his entire body was covered with blood and bruises.
Lady:Run Purab,runaway from here,live your life the way you want to,though I may not be there with you physical I will be always there in your heart.The life ahead will be tough and you may have to face many sorrow all alone but don't lose hope,if god has taken away something from you he will replace it with something even better(speaking with some difficulty)Promise me that you will fight for your happiness,promise me Purab.
Purab:Promise Mom(Tears silently running down his face) Lady:(A contented smile crosses her face)Run Purab Run.
Flashback End's
Purab:All I have left is Ayana,I don't know what my future will be,but I will keep my promise Mom. Hearing Ayana whimper in her sleep,Puarab snaps out of his thought and loosened his tight hold on her. Purab:Sorry Pari for holding so tightly papa wont do it again,pats her head lightly. After laying her in the bed he goes to the window to close the curtain,he was about to close it when he sees a lone figure sitting near the swimming pool.
Purab:Who could it be sitting near the pool at this time of night?(That's when the moonlight falls on the persons face,he curses under his breath)That girl is going to be the death of me. After arranging pillows around Ayana,so that she does not fall in her sleep.Locks the door he leaves from there.
Swimming Pool
Purab:What are you doing here all alone at this time of night. Bulbul quickly wipes off her face and turns around to face him.On seeing remnants of tear across her face Purab thinks not to scold her,without saying anything he sat besides her. Bulbul:I couldn't sleep,I didn't mean to trouble you guys I am sorry. Purab:Its ok,did you have a nightmare or something like that? Bulbul:Yes,how do you know?
Purab:My brother used to get nightmares when he was little.One night he came to my room and didn't see me since I was in the washroom,so he went away without even calling me and was sitting in the hall hoping to see me,after sometime I went to get some water from the hall on hearing the sound he got really scarred it took me nearly half an hour to calm him down.You know what I suggested him a solution that night to overcome his fears it helped him a bit as a result frequency and the impact of the nightmare were reduced a bit.
Bulbul:What did you tell him?
Purab:Do you really want to know?
Bulbul:Yes.
Purab:I asked him to close his eyes and think about a person who stood besides you in your good and bad times,a person who will do anything to make you happy and with whom you felt safe,after he realize who that person is I asked him to recall the movements when he felt happy and safe with that person in doing so you might fell that person is closer to you and in turn reduce your fear and anxiety a bit.I know it's difficult,if you do it just before sleep on your most stressed day it will help you to relax,nightmares usually occurs when you're tensed or anxious about something.Go ahead give it a try.
Bulbul:What now.
Purab:Yes,Just try it.
Bulbul closes her eyes and thinks about all the people she had known in the past four years,there was only one person who matched Purab's description,her sister Pragya.A slow smile crept her face thinking about all the happy movement's spent with her.
Bulbul:Thanks Purab,thinking over the movements spent with my sister did actually help me to relax a bit. Purab:Your sister?
Bulbul:Yes my sister Pragya Arora she works at Phoenix Creation as a designer,you actually missed your chance of seeing her today,she came to sent of me.She really wanted to meet you,what to do,you were not there.
Purab:She wanted to see me why?
Bulbul:Because she is great fan of your dance.
Purab:There she goes again you are determined not to change are you?(In his mind I am happy that she is back to normal)Come it is getting late you need to go to your room. Bulbul:But.
Purab:No more excuses you are coming with me.
Purab insist on walking her till her room door after wishing each other good night they go to there respective rooms.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update.
Loved it.
Thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smala

Nice update.

Loved it.

Thank you for the pm.


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Hai I have updated chapter nine. Hope you like it.
Chapter Nine
Sunday Morning
Pragya's House
Sarla:Pragya have you packed your designs,phone,purse,dress and everything else you need,you have not forgotten anything do you? Pragya:Mom relax I have packed everything.And I will be perfectly fine.Nothing will happen to me ok. Sarla:Ok dear now don't waste your time have your breakfast so you can leave on time.
Pragya:Ok mom(she sat down and stars eating hurriedly) Prasanth:Pragya dear slow down you still have thirty minutes left,so eat calmly ok.
Pragya:Ok papa and smiles. Abhi's House
Abhi:Dadi I have kept your medicines in the cupboard don't skip your medicine you have to take all the three medicines daily and if you need anything or need to go anywhere Ramu will be there to help you. Dadi:Abhi how many times do I have to tell you that I am not a kid and I can look after myself.
Abhi:One more thing dadi.
Dadi:Enough you're not going to say one more word,sit down and have your breakfast now.
Abhi:But.
Dadi:Sit down Abhi,stop worrying about me just enjoy your trip with Pragya.
Abhi sits down with a resigned sigh and starts eating his breakfast.After finishing breakfast.
Abhi:Bye dadi,I will call you after reaching Agra.
Dadi:Bye dear,All the best(kisses his forehead) Abhi was waiting near the car for Pragya along with Prem and Ravi after making sure that everything is in order.After sometime Pragya comes outside along with her parents.On seeing her Ravi and Prem moves ahead to get in the truck. Pragya:Bye Mom. Sarla:All the best dear and don't forget to call me after you reached Agra.Bye.
Pragya:I won't forget mummy.Bye Papa. Prasanth:Bye dear,all the best and do your best ok.
Pragya:I will Papa. She gets in the car,Abhi who was standing silently near the car was about to get in when Prasanth calls his name.
Abhi:Yes uncle. Prasanth:Please take care of her Abhi. Abhi:Ofcourse I will uncle and don't stress yourself,if bye chance you couldn't contact Pragya don't hesitate to call me anytime you want. Prasanth:Ok and all the best dear.
Abhi:Thanks uncle.
Car
After complete silence for nearly thirty minutes Pragya couldn't keep her mouth shut any longer.
Pragya:You know what Sir,I can't really believe that you are dadi's grandson both of you are extremely different characters.Dadi is open-minded,cheerful and fun loving person,if she was with us right now we wouldn't even realize the passing of time,but Sir you're arrogant,short tempered,serious and boring in nature and there is no fun in being with you.
Abhi gives her an angry glare.On seeing his face Pragya bursts out laughing.
Abhi:What are you laughing about Miss.Arora?
Pragya:(Wipe her eyes)You are so cute when you're angry, sorry Sir for teasing you I couldn't help myself complete silence was irritating me. Abhi:You deserve a award Miss.Arora.
Pragya:Award why?
Abhi:Being silent for thirty minutes is a great achievement on your behalf.
Pragya:I am not that talkative,I can remain silent when ever necessary. Abhi:Yes its just that you are chirping like a cricket most of the time. Pragya's face turns red with embarrassment,seeing her face Abhi started laughing.
Abhi:Tit for tat Miss.Arora.
In spite of herself a small smile crept on her face seeing his infectious laughter.Though he liked silence very much for some unknown reason he didn't like seeing Pragya so silent and thoughtful,so he decides to break the silence himself. Abhi:What are you thinking?
Pragya:Ever since Bulbul came to stay with us so many things has happened in our life,but I never thought my life will change so drastically that I will end up here today.
Abhi:Isn't Bulbul your sister? Pragya:Actually Bulbul is my mom's sisters daughter,her parents died in an accident five years ago since then she has been living with.But for me she is like my own sister.
Abhi:I am sorry Miss.Arora.
Pragya:Its alright Sir. Abhi:Seeing both of you together no one will ever doubt that you're not sisters.If someone else has told me this I would have punished them for lying to me.You both are like hurricane where ever you go you wreck the place.
Pragya smiles. Abhi:What about your real sister,what is she doing now? Pragya:Purvi di has married four years ago and is living in Delhi right now.
On seeing her smile fading from her face he quickly changes the topic. Abhi:By the way what do you think about this presentation? Pragya:Truth is that I can't really believe that I am going to Agra for my first presentation you know what the first time I went to Agra was to participate in a fashion competition and now I am going to the same place for my presentation its so wonderful. Abhi:How was your competition??Did you win? Pragya:Yes I won the competition,at that tim Bulbul was also there with me it was such a fun and in those days Bulbul used to smile and talk nonstop not like the present days she has become so serious and talks less these days. Abhi:You are talking about Bulbul right,I can't believe that she has become quite these days she was talking nonstop when she came to see dadi.
He stops talking when he sees that her eyes filled with such a pain and sadness.He was about to ask her what is wrong when she quickly hides her expression and smiles at him. Pragya:You know what Bulbul and her team mates are going to perform the opening dance for the new dance show which is launched in TV this Monday,I really wanted to see her performance you know. Abhi:(Since he realizes that she is changing the subject deliberately,he decides not to pry into her personal matter)So your sister is a dancer? Pragya:Yes she has been working in freelance dancing studio for about a week now.
Abhi:Don't worry Miss.Arora I am sure your sister will show you the recordings of her performance.
Pragya:I hope so.Her childhood dream is coming true I
Ringing of her cell phone interrupts rest of her sentence, seeing the caller ID a brilliant smile appears in her face.
Pragaya:Why are you calling me now(in an angry tone) Abhi:(In his mind)Why is she getting angry now when she was so happy on seeing the call,this girl is confusing me so much. Pragya:You have been avoiding my call for nearly a month,now why are you calling me Shan,did you dial the wrong number by mistake or have you finally remembered your friend? Shan:I am really sorry Doll,I have been busy these days that is why I didn't call you.
Pragya:Don't make silly excuses Shan Kapoor.Can't you even spare one minute for me.
Shan:Ok doll I know I have made a mistake can you forgive me please please.
Pragya:Ok fine I will forgive you.How are you?Is auntie and Saina ok?How is business progressing?Why didn't auntie or Saina call me?They are not busy right or have they forgotten me?Is everything alright there?Why are you not speaking anything? Shan:How can I talk when you won't close your mouth for one second. Pragya:Ok ya I am sorry I won't interrupt you.Now tell me everything. Shan:Everything is fine here,mummy and Saina didn't call you because they where busy in redecorating our new home,and my business is progressing very well infact I have just finished a big project last week.Now enough about me tell me how is your new job? Pragya:Wait a minute.How do you know I have started my new job?I didn't mention it.
Shan:(In his mind,you are gone Shan)Oh actually Bulbul called me and she told me about your job.
Pragya:What you have time to attend Bulbul's call but you can't even spare one minute for me,fine cut the call I don't want to talk to you. Shan:Don't be angry doll,she called me just ten minutes back when I was going to call you.I am sorry ok.
Pragya:Ok I will forgive you this time but don't commit this mistake again ok.
Shan:Ok doll.Now tell me how is your new job?
Pragya:I love it Shan.Everybody here is very nice and have helped me a lot.You know what Shan we are going to Agra for the presentation of my first project.
Shan:Wow that is a great news.Who else is going with you? Pragya:Me,my boss and two others are coming in the truck behind us. Shan:You have not told me anything about your boss is he a nice guy?Does he treat you well?Is he handsome? Pragya:Yes he is handsome,he is a complicated guy.I don't understand it myself whether I should categories him as a kind or an arrogant person.It is difficult to understand him ya,he is arrogant and short tempered sometimes,but sometime he is really kind,caring and understanding guy.Now you tell me what do you think of him. Shan:I think he is a nice guy,but what happened to you, you're praising him so much,what is happening uh,alone with a handsome hunk uh. Pragya:Stop it ya don't you start behaving like Bulbul. Shan:Ok doll I won't tease you.All the best dear do your best.Don't forget to call me after the presentation ok. Pragya:Ok Shan.Bye,take care.
Shan:Bye dear.
On seeing Pragya smiling so much
Abhi:(In his mind)Who is this Shan?Is he her boy friend?If he is her boy friend then why was she talking about some strange guy with him?Who is this strange guy?Why am I thinking about all this?A person will go mad trying to understand this girl. Hotel York Inn
Swimming Pool
While passing the pool area along with Rishab and Aliya Bulbul hears the sound of child laughing,out of curiosity she went to check who is their. 0n reaching the pool Bulbul is shocked to see,smiling Purab tossing the child up in the air and catching her in mid flight while the child squealed with delight.
Child:Higher papa higher
Purab:No Pari not today we will play tomorrow. Bulbul:Papa?Purab is married?I didn't know that.
Rishab:Purab is not married,Ayana is his brother's daughter. Bulbul:But then why is she calling Purab papa then? Rishab:Her parents died in an accident when she was six months old.Since then Purab is her papa ,to Purab Ayana is his world he cant live without her,he can do anything for her happiness. Mean while a hotel boy approaches Purab and informs him that the person standing opposite side of the pool want to talk
him in private.
Purab:Pari sit here ok(placing her on the pool side chair) and don't go anywhere papa will be back soon.
Ayana was getting bored by sitting alone by the pool side so she goes to play with the water till her dad comes.
She bends down to reach the water with her little hand. In her eagerness to play with water,she has leaned over bit too much as a result was about to fall in the water when Bulbul scoops her up and moves away from the pool.Hearing Bulbul's shout Purab turns in time to see Bulbul scooping Ayana in her hand.Purab excuse himself and rushes over to Ayana's side.
Bulbul:Naughty girl.Papa told you to not to go anywhere right. Ayana:Who are you? Bulbul:I am your papa's friend,my name is Bulbul.By the way what is your name Princess?
Ayana: Ayana. Bulbul:But princess suit you better, I am going to call you Princess from now on.
Seeing a tensed Purab.
Bulbul:She is alright Purab.Nothing happened to her,here. Purab:Thank you so much Bulbul.Sorry Pari papa won't leave you Alone now(Hugging her tightly,after sometimes) Pari who is your new friend?What is her name?
Ayana:You know her name right papa.
Purab:yes I know her name,but you have introduce your friend properly to me.Now what is her name?
Ayana:I forgot papa.
Bulbul:You forgot your friends name this soon,I won't speak with you here after(face the opposite direction)
Purab:(Oh god who is the child here? Now I have to manage two children, what am I going to do?)How can you get angry with your friend this soon,come on ya turn around and shake hands with each other. After shaking hands. Bulbul:Come on princess lets go and play.
Purab:Hey you can't steel my Pari from me.
Bulbul:Ok Purab you also join us. Seeing all three of them enjoying so much.
Rishab:(In his mind)You deserve happiness bro,if your happiness is with Bulbul I will go to any extend to unite you both.


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Loved abhigya car drive! Cant wait for them to actually arrive for the presentation! Is shaan her bf or?

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