Abhigya and Rabul ff _When Love Happens(Chap 25 UPD, Page 51) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it! The Abhigya parts remind me of another show on zee tv, sapne suhana ladakpan ke, cant remember the guys name, he was a famous designer and the girl was his employee, they didnt get along too well and her parents too werent allowing her to go with him cause of his past.
Anyway, I love the story Hailly! It is awesome, hope all goes well between the two! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update Hailly ! Can't wait to read the next :-) thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smala

Awesome Hailly.

Great update.

Loved it.

Thank you for the pm.


Thank you smala.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Loved it! The Abhigya parts remind me of another show on zee tv, sapne suhana ladakpan ke, cant remember the guys name, he was a famous designer and the girl was his employee, they didnt get along too well and her parents too werent allowing her to go with him cause of his past.

Anyway, I love the story Hailly! It is awesome, hope all goes well between the two! <3


Thank for the comment simsim25 ,I have watched few episodes of that show ,will try my best not to resemble that show in future update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loving the story so far 😃
Can't wait to read the changes this trip going to bring in abhigya and rabul life
You're doing a great job 👏 👏 👏
Waiting for the next 😊
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Hai I have updated chapter seven.Hope yoi guys like it.Thanks for the comments everyone.
Chapter Seven
Saturday Morning
Pragya calls her office and informs the receptionist that she will be late today request her to inform her boss.
Outside Freelance Dancing Studio
Bulbul ask Pragya to wait near the tourist bus and goes to call Aliya,to introduce her sister.Neel who was passing by see Pragya and goes to near her.
Neel:Hey gorgeous,why are you standing here alone,if you need any help you can ask me I will definitely help you.
Bulbul:She doesn't need your help you idiot and don't make a fool of your self she is my sister.
Neel:Cool I was just enquiring if she needs any help that's all. Bulbul:Sorry ya I didn't know that the meaning of the word flirting has been changed. Pragya:Leave it Bulbul.
Bulbul:What Pragya you spoiled all the fun do you know how much he teases all of us here and today I got a chance to tease him back you spoiled it,anyways Neel this is Pragya my sister and Pragya this is Neel.
Pragya:Hai Neel don't mind her she is always like this.
Neel:I know and its really fun to work with her.
Pragya:Smile's.
Bulbul:Hey Pragya come i will introduce you to the rest of them.This is Aliya you know her right.
Pragya:Yes you are one who helped her when she sprained her leg,thanks Aliya for looking after her.
Aliya:It was nothing I was just doing my duty,I heard that you are a superb hockey player.
Pragya:I was a hockey player during my college days but now I am just a designer. Aliya:Wow a designer,when are you going to release your new designs? Pragya:Its been just one month since I started working in Phoenix Creation and we have a presentation on Monday.
Bulbul:You know what she is the one who designed the costumes for the presentation and they are awesome.
Aliya:I know they will be after all you both are sisters,ok then see you later Bulbul I have some work to do.
Bulbul:Bye,come lets see the rest.This is Maria,Seena,Leah,Virat,Nikil and Rishab,guys this Pragya my sister.
Pragya:I have seen your programs on TV,I never thought I will see you guys in person you are awesome.
Rishah:Thanks Pragya it means a lot to us.
Pragya:I just told the truth that's all,Bulbul you have introduced me to everyone except your boss I really hoped to see him today,where is he ya?
Bulbul:Don't know Pragya I have not seen him today.
Rishab:Purab will join us in Lucknow he usually comes in his car,Bulbul we are getting late get in the bus.Bye Pragya see you later.
Bulbul:Bye Pragya,All the best for your presentation.
Pragya:Bye Bulbul, All the best.
Phoenix Creation
Before leaving the office Pragya goes to meet Abhi.
Pragya:May I come in.
Abhi:Come in.
Pragya:Sir Oh my mummy want your phone number.
Abhi:I am going to see your mummy today,I will give her my phone number then. Pragya:Why do you want to see my mummy Sir?
Abhi:It doesn't concern you and you don't have to worry about it.Here take this(Gives her a box)
Pragya:What's this Sir?
Abhi:Its a phone,since I broke your phone and you're going for a long trip you need a phone to contact your parents right.
Pragya:Sorry Sir I cant take it(Keeping it back in the table)
Abhi:It is not a gift Miss.Arora I am just replacing the object which I have damaged and I don't like other people to pay for my mistake,so take it.
Pragya:Thanks Sir.
Abhi:Ok then Miss.Arora see you tomorrow morning,bye.
Pragya:Bye Sir.
On her way back she mumbles to herself.
Pragya:Strange guy when I asked him his number he behaved very arrogantly but at the next instance he gives me a phone and indirectly apologize for the mistake he has committed,what should I understand from his behaviour,Bulbul is right why am I raking up my mind thinking about him,just leave it ok.
Tourist Bus
Tired of dancing for so long Bulbul finally sits in her seat next to Rishab while those with still some energy left where dancing.Rishab's phone rings.
Rishab:Hey Purab how is everything and tell Ayana that I said hai. Purab:Everything is fine,Ayana is sleeping right now.How is everybody their and don't let them over exhaust themselves ok.
Rishab:Everything is fine here Purab,and don't worry about anything I will take care of everything ok,good night Purab.
Purab:Good night Rishab.
Bulbul:Hey Rishab don't you think that Purab is a boring person,everyone here is enjoying themselves except Purab because he usually spends his time alone don't you its a little weird?
Rishab:That's because you don't know him well Bulbul, sometimes certain incidents changes a persons life he has been through a lot in his life.He has always lived for others but in doing so he forget to live for himself.
Bulbul:what do you mean Rishab.
Rishab:I can't tell you everything Bulbul its his personal matter,all I can say is that spent some time with him get to know him and don't judge a person without knowing anything about him.
Bulbul:But.
Rishab:Good night Bulbul(Gets up from his seat)Come on everyone its getting late go to sleep.
After some grumbling everyone settles in their respective seats. Bulbul:(In her mind)What has really happened in Purab's life?Who is Ayana?And why was Rishab's face so sad when he talked about Purab?What should I do now?
Pragya's Home
Pragya:Hey Bulbul how are you?
Bulbul:I am fine Pragya by the way whose phone is this?
Pragya:Its my phone Bulbul.
Bulbul:Are you going to tell me the truth or not?
She moves to the balcony to speak.
Pragya:Today I went to see Sir to ask his number he said that he will give his number in person to mom and gave me this phone as a replacement for the phone he broke.
Bulbul:Its not even one day since I left home but within that time your hot boss apologize to you and even gave you a new phone wow Pragya.
Pragya:He didn't say sorry in words Bulbul just an indirect apology,you know what he has already saved dadi and his number in my phone.I don't know why the heck he want to meet mom and what he is going to say to her?
Bulbul:Relax Pragya I don't think he is going to complain about you.I think he is a trust worthy guy. Pragga:I don't believe in guys anymore Bulbul and you know it very well. Bulbul:eh I know.
Pragya:Hey Bulbul I need to go,Sir has just reached our home.I will call you later,Take care,sweet dreams. Bulbul:Good night Pragya.
Sarla opens the door and sees Abhi standing there.
Abhi:Hai auntie I am Abhi.I(Before he could complete his sentence)
Sarla:Abhi come in dear.
Dining Hall
Sarla:Sit dear,what would you like to have.
Abhi:Nothing auntie.
Sarla:I am seeing you after so long time,I am really happy that you decided to come back to India(In her mind,I lost a son twelve years back and I just got him back)Tell me dear what can I do for you? Abhi:Auntie this is my phone number(Giving her his card)don't hesitate to call me for any help you need what ever may be the time,and(hesitates a bit)can you please do a favor for me,I don't know anyone here that's why.
Sarla:Of course dear what can I do for you.
Abhi:You see auntie dadi had a heart attack six months back and she will be alone in the house for three day though there are servants their to look after her can you please an eye on her for me,I don't have any other options and I don't like leaving her alone,will you call me if there is any problem? Sarla:Of course dear,you don't worry I will take care of her you just concentrate on your work ok. Abhi:Thank you so much auntie.
Sarla:Itsmy pleasure dear and you don't have to thank me.
Abhi:Good night auntie.
Sarla:Good night dear,sleep well.
Pragya who had been hiding behind the door slowly goes to her room.Prasanth who had come to see who had come at this time hears Sarla talking,after listening to Abhi's request.He really feels bad for doubting such a person who loves and respects his elders so much. Tourist Bus
After ending the phone call with Pragya,Bulbul thinks.
Bulbul:I know Pragya,that you where not able to forget that day even thinking about that day makes my body freeze with fear and I still have nightmares about it sometimes.But I want my family to be happy like before,I don't know what more should I do to make everything normal and I am tired of acting brave in front of everyone, can't you guys do something(Looking at her parents picture in her phone).A lone tear falls on her phone,after wiping her face she tries to forget her sorrow by drowning herself in music(listens to music in her phone)
Pragya's Room
Pragya:All I want is to forget my past and move ahead in my life,but when ever it comes to trusting a guy I couldn't do it,today I even suspected Sir although he is arrogant he has always helped everyone and never intentionally hurt anyone.From now onwards I am going to follow my instinct which I have ignored till now due to which my family members were hurt a lot,but not anymore I won't let that happen.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly


Thank for the comment simsim25 ,I have watched few episodes of that show ,will try my best not to resemble that show in future update.


No no! I didnt mean that! I just said, if it wasnt done on purpose no need to change it cause I love it the way it is! Just write the way you want it to be! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the new update! I love this story!
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Lovely update 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25



No no! I didnt mean that! I just said, if it wasnt done on purpose no need to change it cause I love it the way it is! Just write the way you want it to be! ❤️


Thank you simsim 😃

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