an abhigya SS NEW...UNBREAKABLE LOVE......Chapter 6 updated page 12

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hai friends...my name is priya...i read many fictions from many forums and inspired to write an ss on abhigya ...this couple attracted me most...i dont know why...its my first attempt...so please excuse me for any mistakes...i dont know hindi properly so am texting in english.
Note:friends with many thoughts in mind and may be reading of many stories i dont know if my story resembles others...if so please do tell me...i will remove this story...hope dis story will be liked by u people

Story starts after abhi realising his feelings for pragya and pragya knowing tanu is pregnant with abhis child...pragya decided to sacrifice her love..

CHAPTER 1

Abhi saw pragya coming into their room.He came infront of her.But when he saw her he felt uncomfortable.The eyes which always held love for him are now devoid of any emotions and seemed completely empty.He still determined to confess his feelings to her.Abhi not knowing how to face her turned his back towards her.Closing his eyes he said"Fuggy i love u..u..I never felt like with tanu...whenever iam with u i felt home...I never cared for tanu like i cared for u...am nt comparing u with tanu..its just i cannot ignore you nor i cannot stop thinking of u every moment...i knew i did many mistakes...even after torturing u for the crime u have never done...u loved me unconditionally...may be that soft heart attracted me the most...I now came to know wat actually true love is...I love u fuggylove u as much as i love my dadi and as much as my music...may be thats y dadi choosed u for me...and turned towards her
The moment he turned towards her his world seemed to shatter before him.Pragya was crying uncontrollably sitting on the floor.She never thought abhi will confess his feelings to her infact she never thought abhi loves her as much as he loves his dadi .
Seeing pragya in dat state abhi in no second went towards her and asked her y she is crying.She didnt know wat to say.she didnt want abhi to know that she is sacrificing her love for abhis to be born child.She simply cleared her face and determined to say the most hurtful words she never wished to say even to an enemy.
Abhishek what u said u love me...is it some kind of joke...i never thought u will take my confession dis seriously...infact its just a joke said by me...how do u think i will love u...u tortured me so much...not knowing the truth completely u showed me hell...wat did u say that u love my soft heart which forgave u...i didnt forgave u simply...u helped my family by saving the hall so i forgave...but love ...never ...i dont love you...infact i came here now to ask for a divorce...we knew that now every misunderstanding is cleared between us...and the purpose of our marriage is over...so we need to end this...saying this she left the room.
Abhi was shell shocked listening this.He sat on the floor with tears flowing from his eyes copntinuously.He didnt knw for how many hours he sat there like that.After what felt like an eternity,he got up and cleared his face and went near his fridge.He took the whisky bottle and started drinking.He remembered all his moments with pragya,...how she hugged him when he went to rescue her...how she stood infront of him to face the death...how she saved him by taking the bullet...how she confessed her love its the most beautiful confession he ever heard...how she forgave him for accusing her for the kiss infact mouth to mouth respiration she done to save him...how she cried hugging him for bulbuls condition...He still remem,bered how she found her comfort hugging him.
It all felt like a dream.He threw the bottle with a force that shattered the mirror into pieces reminding him how jst his heart has been shattered similarly by pragya.He shouted...Y fuggy...y did u do dis to me...y did u invoke these feelings into me...i was satisfied with my life before u entered...but from the day u entered my life turned upside down...i loved my dadi but i never been like she wanted me to live...since u came i started living my life in the way dadi wished me to be...now am not same abhi anymore...y did u do this to me...y...saying this he fell onto the floor.He didnt know when sleep overtook him.
Down pragya rushed into guest room and started crying uncontrollably...y abhishek...y always this happens to me...y my dreams never come true...y did u confess ur feelings to me when i thought of leaving u...no abhishek u cant love me now...i wont seperate a child from his father...am going to leave u no matter how much difficult it is for me...i love u abhisjhek forever...with this determination pragya left to their room...
When she opened the door of their room...she couldnt stop her tears seeing the state abhi is in.She slowly went near him..set him right and covered him with blanket and moved towards other side of the room.She made the bed on the floor and laid on it...she started thinking of the ways to disclose the news of their seperation to everyone.With this thoughts she didnt when she drifted into sleep.


Precap::Purab...fuggy never loves me...am a bad person purab...i hate myself...i deserve this.Atleast now i will give her wat she wants.Iam going to give divorce to her
Abhi r u mad...what r u saying...pragya di loves more than anything...infact its mine bulbul and pragya di's plan to realise ur feelings for pragya di...
WHAT????????


[DIV]friends any mistakes am sorry excuse me...my first attempt...i will continue only if u like...my mind is complete mess with many ideas...so please let me know ...
INDEX:
Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 4
Chapter 3: Page 6
Chapter 4: Page 8
Chapter 5: Page 10
Chapter 6: Page 12
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
Unres ,,

OMG... R u serous it's yr first attempt ... Anyway it's Amazing ... I wanted to read about many abhi since the regime I read the news .. And it's the first one I red .. And I definitely raised the bar dear...
Anyway coming to the fic ... U described abhi feelings to the tee... .i loved that he said that ilu as much as dadi Nd music ... And he says that he was fine without u ...but he started to love without u .. .its amazing. " and update soon and PM me to like a darling ,, , .😊
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Originally posted by: adyaa

Res

Unres ,,

OMG... R u serous it's yr first attempt ... Anyway it's Amazing ... I wanted to read about many abhi since the regime I read the news .. And it's the first one I red .. And I definitely raised the bar dear...
Anyway coming to the fic ... U described abhi feelings to the tee... .i loved that he said that ilu as much as dadi Nd music ... And he says that he was fine without u ...but he started to love without u .. .its amazing. " and update soon and PM me to like a darling ,, , .😊


Thnq so much adyaa ur comment matters to me a lot...nd ya am gng to update nxt part tmrw...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start priya
U displayed every emotion of abhigya beautifully
Hope purab help abhi in finding the truth
Keep it up
Looking forward to read more from you
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Originally posted by: vlhs12993

Great start priya
U displayed every emotion of abhigya beautifully
Hope purab help abhi in finding the truth
Keep it up
Looking forward to read more from you


Thnq so much...its really glad u people r liking...if u people like it...den am gng to write many stories...since i have mny ideas...thnq again
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start!!
Beautifully written
Loved it
Can't wait for you to continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! A first attempt and this amazing! Very nicely written! Heartbreaking to see both Abhigya in this state! Cannot wait for more! <3 :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnq so much...for liking dis
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Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Amazing start!!
Beautifully written
Loved it
Can't wait for you to continue


Thnq so much...ya i will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow! A first attempt and this amazing! Very nicely written! Heartbreaking to see both Abhigya in this state! Cannot wait for more! <3 :)


Thnq ...fr ur support

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