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Simmi

@--simmi--

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

I don't normally feel for Tanu but this did make me think, like the way you write Rani!

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Rani beautifully portrayed Tanu and what she really means to Abhi and her realising that she dropped the Ax on her on foot by getting him married to Pragya...and maybe maybe that indeed was the last of Him the Rockstar and Her...

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: kubare
Rani beautifully portrayed Tanu and what she really means to Abhi and her realising that she dropped the Ax on her on foot by getting him married to Pragya...and maybe maybe that indeed was the last of Him the Rockstar and Her...

Oh just adding loved you hinting that she was more in love with his status and her status of being with him then really loving the Man..as the Man before he was a Rockstar did not rock her boat...😉

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Tia-
Sometimes I do feel bad for Tannu, when I forget her cruel side.
And I could read this ficlet with that mindset and I did feel for her.

But I remember Abhi-Tannu's first scene in the soap- the very first.
He meets her after his successful concert, she asks him to go for a drive, he excuses himself because he wants to go celebrate his Daadi's birthday.

She was never his priority, :-(, just like how you ended the fic.

Thanks for writing Tannu, Rani.

Thanks Tia! You're right, throughout their entire journey she's never been his priority. Pragya might not be either compared to Dadi but Pragya understands that and Tanu doesn't.

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: IamMeethu
Rani, this is a great idea. Loved Tannu's POV! Thank you for sharing ❤️.

Thanks Ashu! Glad you liked it 😃

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014
Rani when I read A Tanu OS I was like what ? but because I like your writing I was so tempted to read, so I did.. I was so tensed and almost sure I will hate it but now I'm glad I took the risk ,,it is so good and I liked it. this is exactly my idea about their relationship

loved it sooo much ..thanks Rani

Thank you for taking a chance on it Nuha, so glad you liked it 😃 I'm honored that you liked my writing enough to give this one a try. 😃

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Trishh-
Rani, this is gold!!! I have always wanted to see Tannu's point of view on things! T very simple, no dramatization really, but effectively shows the relationship that Abhi and Tannu have!!!

Thanks Trish! 😃

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: simsim25
I don't normally feel for Tanu but this did make me think, like the way you write Rani!

Thanks Simi! I'm happy my writing provoked some thoughts 😊

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kubare

Oh just adding loved you hinting that she was more in love with his status and her status of being with him then really loving the Man..as the Man before he was a Rockstar did not rock her boat...😉

Thank you so much Krish! 😃 It's kind of poignant that she brought this on herself but not really because she isn't a really sympathetic character. Man before he was the Rockstar might have been good in bed, who knows, but since it was their first time they were still making mistakes 😆