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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Nice but update in english
Nice sarla as bua
Good
Wow it mean sarla dead no
Abhi is really feel bad
Nice girl
Cont soon
Edited by nasreenroja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
wait so are abhi and pragya related? sorry im confused?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
I read all the 3chapters it's fabulous
The story is really nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
THAK U ALL FOR THE , SUPPORT ... YA I WILL TRY TO UPDATE IN ENGLISH ... BUT I CANT PROMISE .. SORRY😔 YES ABHI AND PRAGYA ARE RELATED ... PRAGYA IS ABHI'S PATERNAL AUNT'S [BUA] DAUGHTER ... I HOPE THE CONFUSION IS CLEARED ... REALLY IAM VERY HAPPY TO KNW UR VIEWS
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: simsim25

I just caught up on the three chapters! They are fantastic! A completely different story but it is very interesting and I can't wait to find out what you have in store! Your doing great! <3


Thank u ...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: -kanishka-

Ohhh emm geee 🤗
Again loved this story. A really different story and its plot is fab. Do update soon. Waiting to read more of this story.
Love,
Adah


Thank u ... u knw wat ... after chap 2 i wanted to stop cause i din't get the response i expected ... but then it was ur OHHH EMMM GEEE pushed me to continue ... THANK U😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: nasreenroja

Nice but update in english
Nice sarla as bua
Good


Thank u ... i will try to update in english ... i can't really promise ... sorry and Thank u 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: illa8

wait so are abhi and pragya related? sorry im confused?


yes abhi and pragya are related , pragya is abhi's paternal aunt's [bua] daughter ... i hope ur confusion is cleared ... Thank u😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Asma-

I read all the 3chapters it's fabulous
The story is really nice


Thank u😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
CHAPTER 4
AT ARORA HOUSE , PRAGYA AND BULBUL WERE PACKING THEIR THINGS TO LEAVE TO THEIR NANI'S HOUSE NEXT DAY . PRAGYA WENT TO HER MAA'S ROOM TO COLLECT SOME STUFF FROM THERE . SHE THEN FOUND A VERY OLD PHOTO IN BETWEEN SOME STUFF . IT WAS THEIR FAMILY PHOTO . EVERYONE WAS THERE IN THE PHOTO , WHO WERE FAMILY TO HER . SHE THOUGHT OF SHOWING IT TO BULBUL AND CALLED HER .

PRAGYA: Bulbul , come here ...

BULBUL : Yes di , do u need something ...[pragya signalled bulbul to come near her and to sit ]

PRAGYA : Have a look at this bulbul, this is our family ... maa's family [ controlling her tears ]

BULBUL: Wow di we have such a big family , who are all these people ... but she recognized some faces ... [pointing at some faces ] di this is aliyah my friend , oh my god di ... this ...this is rockstar abhi aliyah's brother ... and this is purab her childhood friend . [throwing a confused look ] are they our family di?

PRAGYA : Yes bulbul they are ...

BULBUL: [Little excited ] wow di rockstar abhi and aliyah are our family .

PRAGYA: [Smiling faintly at her childish excitement to know that abhi was a part of their family] Yes my dear all of us are family .

BULBUL: Why din't to tell me before di ... even maa never shared any thing about this

PRAGYA : Because she din't wanted to [took the photo from bulbul and introduced other family members] so this is our family bulbul ...

BULBUL: Wow di iam really excited to meet them .

PRAGYA : So am i , ok bulbul now go rest a little we have to leave tomorrow morning

BULBUL: Good night di ..

BULBUL LEFT AND PRAGYA GLANCED AND THE FAMILY PHOTO AND WAS RUNNING HER FINGERS THROUGH EACH FACE ON THE PHOTO SMILING A LITTLE WHILE SHE WAS REMINISCING HER MOMENTS AT MEHRA MANSION . BUT SHE STOPPED HER FINGER ON ONE FACE IT WAS ABHI NO IT WAS ABHISHEK FOR HER .

PRAGYA : [In her mind] . Abhishek must have been really broken down after knowing that his bua was not there in this world . no not bua , she was very much more than bua to him she was just like a mother to him . [she gave a last look to the photo before keeping it in the bag] i miss u golu rockstar [ that's how she called him in their childhood because he was like a butter ball back those days ]

AT MEHRA HOUSE . DADI KNEW ALIYAH HAD SOME QUESTIONS , SHE CALLED ALIYAH AND SHOWED A FAMILY PICTURE AND ALIYAH WAS REALLY QUICK TO RECOGNIZE BULBUL IN THE PHOTO .

ALIYAH: Dadi this is bulbul my friend .

DADI: tum jaanti ho isse

ALIYAH : Haan dadi , she is my friend and a very talented designer .

DADI : Yeh toh bohot achi baat hain ... [and she introduced the other faces to her]

ALIYAH : Dadi agar yeh log hamari family toh why were they not staying with us ...

DADI : Waqt ke saat tume sab kuch pata chal jayega aliyah . tum jake thoda rest karlo kal pooja hain na jaldi uthna pageda

ALIYAH : Ji dadi

ALIYAH LEFT . DADI SHED SILENT TEARS SEEING THE FAMILY PHOTO . SHE QUICKLY WIPED HER TEARS AND CALLED ABHI .

DADI : Hello abhi

ABHI : [In a sad tone ] ji dadi kahiye

DADI : [Noticing sadness in his tone ] abhi tumne apni dadi ko maaf nahi kiya beta .

ABHI: Aisi koi baat nahi hain ... dadi ...mein toh bas aisi hi bua ke saath bitaye moments to yaad karke toda sad tha ...[trying hard to control his tears ]

DADI: Abhi mera baccha i know ki tum bohot upset ho ki apni bua ko ek aakri baar nahi dhekpaye ... iam sorry for that ... par beta agar tum gham ko boologe nahi toh kushi ko kaise accept kar paoge .

ABHI : [Confused] Mein ... mein kuch samjha nahi dadi

DADI : Beta tume yaad hain us din sarla ne hume phone kiya tha . woh chahthi thi ki uske jaane ke baad uski bachiyaon ka khayal hum rakhe unhe yaha bulale humare paas . woh log kal yaha aa rahe hain beta . ab hamara adhoora parivaar poora hoga abhi ...[shedding some silent tears]

ABHI : [Was happy he could think of only one person] Chashmish [ as he called pragya during their childhood ]

DADI: Haan abhi ... haan pragya aur bulbul wapas aa rahe hain humare paas . yu bas jaldi aa ja abhi .

ABHI: Dadi mein kal subhah tak ghar ajaounga . bye dadi

ABHI CUT THE PHONE . PURAB CAME NEAR ABHI . HE KNEW SOMETHING WAS REALLY WRONG WITH ABHI . HE ASKED ABHI . ABHI HUGGED HIM AND SAID HIM ABOUT HIS BUA'S DEATH AND PRAGYA AND BULBUL'S RETURN . PURAB WAS REALLY TAKEN ABACK TO HEAR ABOU ABHI'S BUA CAUSE HE KNEW ABHI WAS REALLY ATTACHED TO HIS BUA AND HE ALSO KNEW KNEW THAT DEEP DOWN ABHI WAS BROKEN AND WAS ALSO HAPPY THAT PRAGYA WAS COMING BACK . PURAB KNEW THOUGH ABHI AND PRAGYA FOUGHT ALL THE WHILE , BUT THEY WERE INSEPARABLE DURING THEIR CHILHOOD DAYS . RAJ CALLED AKASH AND EXPLAINED HIM EVERYTHING . THOUGH HE DIN'T GET ANYTHING HE WAS ALSO SAD THAT THEIR FAMILY LOST A DEAR ONE.

ABHI : [In his thought's ] chashmish would have really broken down to loose her mom as she was world to chashmish . i really miss u chashmish .

NEXT MORNING AT ARORA HOUSE . RAJ CAME TO TAKE THE GIRLS WITH HIM . PRAGYA AND BULBUL BID GOOD BYE TO THEIR JANAKI MASI AND LEFT WITH THEIR RAJ BHAI TO MEHRA MANSION .

AT MEHRA MANSION . EVERYTHING WAS READY FOR THE POOJA THEY WERE JUST WAITING FOR THE ARORA SISTER'S TO COME . PRAGYA AND BULBUL ENTERED THE MEHRA MANSION . DADI CAME FORWARD AND HUGGED BOTH OF THEM , THEY TOO HUGGED HER BACK . SOON ALIYAH CAME RUNNING TO HUG BULBUL AND BOTH OF THEM SHED SOME TEARS . AS PRAGYA WENT INTO THE MANSION SHE THOUGHT NOTHING WAS REALLY CHANGED . THEN THE POOJA STARTED . DADI WAS WAITING FOR ABHI TO COME . SUDDENLY PURAB AND AKASH CAME AND JOINED THE POOJA . PURAB SAT BESIDE DADI.

DADI: Purab abhi kaha hain . aur tum log kab aye

PURAB : Dadi apne kamre mein woh bohot upset hain aur woh pooja mein nahin aana chahtha hain.

DADI: Theek hain lekin tum log kaha se aaye [ cause they din't come from main door]

PURAB : Dadi woh hamare car ke peeche media padi thi isliye hum back door se aye hain .

DADI SIGHED AT HIM AND FOCUSED ON POOJA . THE POOJA ENDED . IT WAS LUNCH TIME . HARDLY ANYONE OF THEM ATE FOOD . FINALLY EVERYONE WAS GONE . ALL OF THEM SAT IN HALL . PURAB WENT FORWARD TO TALK TO PRAGYA .

PURAB : How are u pragya di ?

PRAGYA :Purab? [hugged him] i am fine how are u .

PURAB : I am good di , i am sorry for ur loss di ...

PRAGYA : It's ok purab .

BEFORE THEY COULD EXTEND THEIR CONVERSATION DADI INTERRUPTED .

DADI : Pragya , Bulbul tum dono ke kamre 2 or 3 days mein ready hojayenge . tab thak please use the guest room .

ALIYAH : Bulbul mere saath mere kamre mein rahegi dadi please .

DADI NODDED IN ACCEPTANCE . BULBUL LOOKED AT PRAGYA WHO ALSO NODDED IN ACCEPTANCE . BULBUL LEFT WITH ALIYAH .

DADI : Pragya beta tumhara saman yahi rakhdo mein kisise bijvadungi guest room tak . tum jake toha rest karlo .

PRAGYA : Nani woh ... woh mein maa ke kamre main rehana chahthi hoon agar aap logon ko koi problem nahi hai toh .

DADI : Theek hain beta , chalo main thume chod dungi .

PRAGYA : Nahi nani , aap rest kijiye mujhe yaad hain ki maa kamra kaha hain .

DADI : [Kissed her fore head ] tum jaake aram karo . i will send ur luggage .

PRAGYA NODDED AND LEFT . SHE REACHED HER MAA'S ROOM . SHE OPENED THE DOOR THE FIRST THING SHE WAS THE LARGE PHOTO FRAME OF HER MAA . SHE THOUGHT NOTHING WAS CHANGED . BUT WAIT SHE NOTICED SOMEONE STANDING JUST A FEW STEPS AWAY FROM HER MAA'S PHOTO . WITH HIS BACK TOWARDS HER . SHE DIN'T CARE SHE WAS TAKING SLOW STEPS TOWARDS HER MAA'S PHOTO . ALL THIS WHILE SHE WAS THINKING ABOUT THE MOMENTS SHE SPENT WITH HER MAA . SHE WAS BROKEN BY EACH STEP SHE TOOK . ALL THESE DAYS AFTER HER MAA'S DEATH SHE JUST HELD IT TO HERSELF SO THAT BULBUL WONT GET BROKEN DOWN . BUT NOW SHE JUST COULD'T SHE HAD TO LET IT OUT . FINALLY SHE REACHED THE FRAME AND TOUCHED IT SLIGHTLY AND SHE JUST BROKE INTO POOL OF TEARS .

ABHI STOOD BEFORE HIS BUA'S PHOTO FRAME AND SHED SILENT TEARS . THOUGH HE DID THIS EVERY SINGLE DAY . THIS TIME IT WAS DIFFERENT HE WAS MORE HURT , MORE SAD AND IT PAINING EVEN MORE THAN BEFORE . BUT HE SUDDENLY NOTICED SOMEONE BESIDE HIM , TOUCHING HIS BUA'S PHOTO , HE TURNED HIS HEAD TO SEE WHO IT WAS . SHE WAS SHOCKED TO SEE PRAGYA THERE AND WHAT WAS MORE SHOCKING WAS SHE JUST BROKE DOWN . NO COULD'T SEE HER LIKE THAT . HE BENT ON HIS KNEES AND HELD HER BY HER SHOULDERS AND MAKE HER LOOK AT HIM . SHE IDENTIFIED HIM .

PRAGYA : [In between tears ] abhi... abhishek

HE NODDED IN AGREEMENT . SHE JUST ENTWINED HER HANDS AROUND HIS RIGHT ARM AND PLACED HER HEAD ON HIS SHOULDER AND CRIED HER HEART OUT .

HOW IS IT . 😊 I KNOW ITS LONG AND MELODRAMATIC BUT I PROMISE NEXT CHAPTER WILL HAVE MORE ABHIGYA . LET ME KNOW UR VIEWS .😊
Edited by sparky03 - 10 years ago

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