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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Thanks for the update! Aww, abhigya were cute, Chashmish and golu! Love it!! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 5
ABHI ALSO SOBBED ALONG WITH PRAGYA . HE THEN MADE PRAGYA LOOK AT HIM . BUT SHE JUST COLLAPSED IN HIS ARMS . ABHI WAS SCARED OF LOOSING HER AGAIN . HE DIN'T KNOW WHAT WAS HAPPENING . HE SHOUTED FOR DADI AND ALIYAH .

ABHI : Dadi ... aliyah !!!!!!!!!!!!

ALIYAH , DADI , BULBUL AND OTHER FAMILY MEMBERS CAME TO ABHI . ALL WERE SHOCKED TO SEE PRAGYA IN THAT STATE . BULBUL RUSHED TO HER DI .

BULBUL: Di , what happened , please ... wake up di ...

ABHI : Aliyah , please dial to doctor fast .

BULBUL : Somebody please bring water ...

ABHI WAS GETTING UP TO BRING WATER , BUT FOR SOME REASON HE COULD'T MOVE . SOMETHING WAS STOPPING HIM . HE LOOKED DOWN , IT WAS PRAGYA , SHE CAUGHT ABHI'S T-SHIRT SO TIGHTLY THAT HE COULD'T MOVE .
PURAB: Bhai a lijiye paani [giving a glass of water to abhi ]

ABHI SPRINKLED SOME WATER ON PRAGYA'S FACE . SHE MOVED A LITTLE . BUT HER EYES WERE SO HEAVY . SHE COULD'T OPEN THEM . ABHI LIFTED HER IN HIS ARMS AND PLACED ON THE BED . DOCTOR ARRIVED AND STARTED CHECKING PRAGYA .

DOCTOR: She is fine . just her B.P is low because of stress . don't worry everything is alright . I gave her medicine . she will back to her senses in an hour or 2

DADI : Thank you doctor . Abhi doctor ko niche tak chodho .

ABHI : Ji dadi

AFTER SOMETIME EVERYONE DEPARTED . BULBUL STAYED OVER . IT WAS DINNER TIME . PRAGYA WAS BACK TO HER SENSES BUT SHE WAS VERY WEAK SO BULBUL TOOK DINNER TO PRAGYA'S ROOM AND BOTH OF THEM HAD THEIR DINNER AND AFTER SOMETIME BULBUL ALSO WENT TO ALIYAH'S ROOM TO TAKE REST . PRAGYA HEARD A KNOCK ON HER DOOR AND WENT TO CHECK.SHE OPENED THE DOOR AND IT WAS ABHI .

ABHI : HI . How are u feeling now?

PRAGYA : Much better . do u need something ?

ABHI : Yeah ... actually , if u need anything feel free to ask . that's my room [ pointing the room next to her's ]

PRAGYA : Yeah sure . Thank u

ABHI : Ok , then good night .

PRAGYA : Good night .

ABHI LEFT AND PRAGYA WAS GOING TO CLOSE THE DOOR . BUT SOMETHING STOPPED THE DOOR FROM CLOSING . IT WAS ABHI .

ABHI : Actually ... i forgot to tell that ... we share ...[cut by pragya]

PRAGYA : Abhishek , i want to be alone for some time please ... good night . [ Closed the door ]

PRAGYA WAS REALLY NOT IN A MOOD TO TALK TO ANYONE . ABHI WAS STUNNED AT WAY SHE JUST SNAPPED AT HIM.

ABHI : [In his thought's ] ... what happened to this chashmish ... she was just fine till now ... weird ... yeah i can understand she must be missing her maa .

IT WAS LATE NIGHT . SLEEP WAS FAR FROM PRAGYA'S EYES . SHE WANTED SOME FRESH AIR . THERE WAS A ATTACHED BALCONY TO HER ROOM . SHE WENT OUT INTO BALCONY . BUT SOMETHING WAS WEIRD . THE BALCONY DID'T LOOK THE SAME . IT WAS WAY TOO HUGE THAN BEFORE . SHE SAW SOMEONE STANDING . IT WAS DARK SO SHE COLD'T IDENTIFY THE PERSON . SHE STARTED MOVING TOWARDS THE PERSON .

PRAGYA : Hello somebody there???

SUDDENLY LIGHTS WERE ON . IT WAS ABHISHEK STANDING THERE .

PRAGYA : Abhishek ?? [ before she could question him anything ]

ABHI: I was about to tell you that we share a balcony . but you just closed the door on my face .

PRAGYA : Oh ! sorry

ABHI : Its ok , come sit [ there was same table with 2 , 3 chairs .

BOTH OF THEM SAT . AND STARED AT THE STARS .

LET ME KNOW UR VIEWS .😊
Edited by sparky03 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Awesome! Please continue soon, looking forward for the next update :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update soon it was really nice
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#25
CHAPTER 6
THEY JUST STARED THE STARS FOR SOMETIME .

PRAGYA : So , when did balcony got this big .

ABHI : Ahh ! just a few years back.

PRAGYA : But why?

ABHI : To enter bua's room whenever want .[looking at the room with pain in his eyes]

PRAGYA : You would had really missed maa right ? [ looking sharp into his eyes]

ABHI : [lost in her eyes for few seconds] Yeah [ getting up ] why don't u miss your maa ?

PRAGYA : I still can't believe that she is not there with us .

ABHI : I can understand . [ giving a hand to pragya ] come let's go it's late and u need rest , i will walk u to your room .

PRAGYA WAS ABOUT TO GET UP BUT SHE TRIPPED A LITTLE AND WAS ABOUT TO FALL BUT ABHI CAUGHT HER . BOTH WERE LOST IN THEIR OWN WORLD . THEY CAME BACK TO REALITY WHEN THEY HEARD BULBUL CALLING FOR HER DI .

BULBUL : Di .. di where are u ? [she entered the balcony and was glad to find her sister there] . Di mein kab se aap ko doond rahi thi . what are u doing here.

PRAGYA : Why you need something ?

BULBUL : No i just wanted to check on you weather u were fine or not .

PRAGYA : Yeah i am ok now . Bulbul meet ur rockstar abhi [ introducing abhishek to bulbul]

BULBUL : [With lots of anxiety ] HI , i am really a very big fan of u sir . It was my dream to see u directly . but then u just turned out to BE our relative . i still can't believe it sir .

ABHI AND PRAGYA THREW A SMILE AT EACH OTHER LOOKING AT BULBUL WHO WAS SO EXCITED TO MEET ABHI IN PERSONAL .

ABHI : Hi bulbul , actually chulbul ... that's how i used to call u when we were kids , iam so glad to meet u too . and please don't call me sir .

BULBUL: Ok then , i will call u rockstar .

ABHI : Nice .

THEY CHATTED FOR SOME MORE TIME AND WENT TO GET SOME REST . IT WAS MORNING EVERYONE GATHERED AT THE BREAKFAST TABLE .

ALIYAH : Oh shoot ! !

ABHI : What happened aliyah , is everything fine .

ALIYAH : [ got up from the chair ] i have to give something to bulbul . i will just come . [left to her room]

SHE CAME OUT WITH THE BEST YOUNG DESIGNER AWARD AND GAVE IT TO BULBUL . EVERYONE WAS HAPPY AND CONGRATULATED HER .

BULBUL: I wish maa was with us today [ a lone tear escaped from her eyes ]

PRAGYA : [Holding bulbul's hand ] maa is always with us bulbul .

ALIYAH : Bhai , don't you think its time for celebration . why won't we throw a party .

ABHI : Yeah aloo u are right . we will throw a party if everyone is ok with it . [abhi looked at dadi ]

DADI : [looking at pragya ] Pragya beta , kya tume koi problem nahi hain na .

PRAGYA : Nahi nani , mujhe koi problem nahi hain , if bulbul is ok with it .

BULBUL : If everyone is ok with it then i am ok .

ALIYAH : [excited] so the party is on !!

SUDDENLY EVERYONE HEARD A VOICE FROM THE MAIN DOOR AND TURNED TO SEE WHO WAS IT . IT WAS TANU .

TANU : You said party and see the party animal is here !!!!

MEHRA'S SMILED AT HER AND ALIYAH WENT TO HUG HER . SHE CAME NEAR EVERYONE AND ABHI GOT UP AND HUGGED HER . PRAGYA AND BULBUL SHARED A LOOK . BULBUL WAS SHOCKED TO SEE INTERNATIONAL MODEL TANU THERE . IT WAS HER DREAM TO STYLE HER ONE DAY . ALIYAH INTRODUCED HER TO PRAGYA AND BULBUL . TANU CONGRATULATED BULBUL AND TOOK A SEAT .

ABHI : Now u got time to meet all of us .

TANU : Abhi u know na , that i was busy ...

ABHI : You are always busy . [making faces ]

TANU : Awww looks like someone missed me a lot .

ALIYAH : So when u are here , u have to attend the party .

TANU : you need not invite me . i will surely be there .

AFTER SOMETIME EVERYONE DEPARTED TO THEIR WORKS . IT WAS A LONG TIRING DAY FOR PRAGYA . SHE WAS GOING TO HER ROOM . WHEN SHE SAW ABHI SEARCHING FOR SOMEONE . SHE WENT NEAR HIM .

PRAGYA : Are u searching for some one .

ABHI : Yeah bunty and bubuly . we are playing hide and seek .

PRAGYA : [saw bunty and bubly going into abhi's room to hide ] . They are in your room .

ABHI : Chashmish get your chashma checked . i looked for them in my room they are not there .

PRAGYA : [annoyed ] fine don't listen to me , be looking . [went to her room ]

ABHI WENT BACK TO HIS ROOM AND FOUND BUNTY AND BUBLY THERE .

BUNTY : Chachu how did u find us .

ABHI PICK THEM BOTH AND TOOK THEM TO PRAGYA'S ROOM TO INTRODUCED HER TO THEM .

ABHI : I found u because of chashmish , all thanks to her .

BUNTY AND BUBLY GIGGLED BY ABHI CALLING PRAGYA CHASHMISH . PRAGYA GOT ALONG WITH BUNTY AND BUBLY . THEY TALKED TO HER FOR SOMETIME AND THEY LEFT . ABHI WAS ALSO ABOUT TO LEAVE .

PRAGYA : Abhishek , don't call me chashmish infront of kids .

ABHI : [thought of teasing her ] ab chashmish ko chashmish hi boolaunga na .

PRAGYA : Acha mein batao tumhari nick name sabko . Golu rockstar .

ABHI : Hey ! don't u call me that chashmish .

PRAGYA : [teasing him] GOLU ROCKSTAR .

ABHI : Now your are gone chashmish , wait ...

ABHI WAS RUNNING BEHIND PRAGYA . WHO WAS RUNNING , LAUGHING SHOUTING HIS NICK NAME IN THE WHOLE MANSION . THEY WERE RUNNING IN THE WHOLE MEHRA MANSION . PRAGYA'S LAUGHTER WAS FILLED IN THE WHOLE MANSION . DADI WAS HAPPY TO SEE THEM LIKE THAT AFTER AGES . BULBUL WAS HAPPY THAT HER SISTER LAUGHING WHOLE HEARTEDLY AGAIN . PRAGYA RAN OUT IN TO GARDEN .

ABHI : Chashmish ruko ... tum aise nahi rukogi [abhi switched on the sprinklers in the garden]

PRAGYA STOPPED AS THERE WAS WATER EVERYWHERE AND SHE COULD'T EVEN SEE PROPERLY AS HER CHASHMA FELL DOWN .

PRAGYA : Abhishek what are u doing ... switch off the sprinklers .

ABHI WENT NEAR PRAGYA AND HELD HER BY HER WRIST AND PULLED HER CLOSER . PRAGYA BANGED INTO HIS CHEST . THEY WERE JUST INCHES AWAY . ABHI WAS NOW LOOKING INTO PRAGYA'S EYES DIRECTLY THERE WAS NO CHASHMA . HE WAS LOST IN HER EYES . AND SO WAS PRAGYA

PRAGYA : [noticing the proximity between them ] Abhishek leave me please .

ABHI MOVED FORWARD . PRAGYA AND ABHI WERE AFFECTED BY THIS CLOSENESS THEY FELT SOMETHING NEW .

ABHI : [in pragya 's ear] Be smilimg chashmish , you look good when you do .

SAYING SO HE LET GO OF PRAGYA AND WENT BACK INTO THE MANSION . LEAVING A CONFUSED PRAGYA BEHIND .

HOW IS IT . LET ME KNOW YOUR VIEWS .😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Abhi sharing pragya room
Nice sparky
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Loved it dear. 👏
Edited by -kanishka- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww just caught up with the chapters! I love this story! Very cute!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi it's so great their scene was so good :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Sorry was away for long time due to exams now that all r finished i am back .
CHAPTER-7

THE CELEBRATION FOR BULBUL WAS TOMMOROW THE WHOLE MANSION WAS GETTING DECORATED ALL THE MEHRA'S WENT OUT FOR SHOPPING EXCEPT ABHI HE WAS BUSING COMPOSING A NEW SONG AND PRAGYA WAS NOT INTERESTED SO SHE WENT TO WORK .

ABHI : Arghhh!!!!! i cant even think of anything ... its just so annoying ... fine i need some fresh air let me go to balcony ... ok now concentrate ...[started to tune his guitar]

PRAGYA WAS BACK HOME SOON AS THERE WAS NOT MUCH WORK AT COLLEGE . SHE WENT TO HER ROOM . THOUGH SHE WAS IN MEHRA MANSION FOR QUITE FEW DAYS NOW SHE DINT PROPERLY SET HER ROOM SO SHE THOUGHT OF SETTING HER ROOM . SHE SAW AN OLD CUPBOARD AND WAS CLEANING IT WHERE SHE FOUND A OLD PHOTOGRAPH OF HER FAMILY . SHE SMILED AT FIRST THEN SUDDENLY HER EYES FOR BLOOD RED . SHE THREW THE FRAME SO HARD THAT IT BROKE INTO PIECES . HEARING THAT STRONG SOUND ABHI RUSHED IN .

ABHI : What happend ... [looking at pragya who was seeing the photo with rage]

ABHI UNDERSTOOD THE REASON BEHIND PRAGYA'S RAGE . HE CALLED OUT FOR ROBIN .

ABHI : Robin clean this [showing the glass ] ... [he turned to pragya ] what is all this ???

PRAGYA : That person has no place in our lives ...

ABHI : Chashmish relax ...[giving a glass of water ]

ROBIN : Sir iss photo ko kaha raku ...

PRAGYA : Burn it .

ABHI : Are u crazy ??? Robin put the photo in my room .

PRAGYA : Abhishek u know everything na , then why ???

ABHI : Yes i remember everything which has happened but u cant escape the fact that he is your father.

PRAGYA : He is nothing to me .

ABHI : Then dont let him control ur life . look at u he still a effect on you . [he took her hands into his ] chashmish let things go ... let him go ... away ...far away u are still holding him in thoughts let it go ...

PRAGYA WAS ABOUT TO SAY SOMETHING BUT WAS STOPPED BY BULBUL WHO WAS EXCITED

BULBUL : Di ... dii [seeing her di and abhi she understood there was some tension in there] Is everything fine ?

ABHI MOVED AWAY FORM PRAGYA . PRAGYA TURNED AROUND .

PRAGYA : Everything is fine ... how was ur shopping [heading towards bulbul]

BULBUL : Di shopping was awesome ... di come down everyone is checking their outfits and i have a surprise for you .

PRAGYA : What surprise ?

BULBUL : Check it by yourself ... now come down ... you too rock star [looking at abhi]

PRAGYA : Bulbul u go down i will there by a minute .

BULBUL LEFT . PRAGYA TURNED AROUND ONLY TO SEE ABHI LOOKING AT HER QUESTIONINGLY .

ABHI : Dont tell me that bulbul doesn't know about her father .

PRAGYA : She doesn't

ABHI : How can u do this she needs to know everything .

PRAGYA : I know that she should know everything ... but i fear she may not be able handle the truth .

ABHI : I guess bulbul is mature enough to handle the truth u should tell her as soon as possible . she would be hurt if she gets to know from others .

PRAGYA : Yes . thank you for being there .

ABHI : [smiling] i will always be there . now lets go down .

THATS IT FOR TODAY PLEASE LET ME KNOW UR VIEWS .😊
Edited by sparky03 - 10 years ago

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