BB & Aaliya SS: A Tale Of 2 Friends (Finished)

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Hello guys! I am back again with a new story. Actually, it is a TRUE friendship to break-up story of me and my best friend, I mean my former best friend, Tanvi. I have just placed BB in my place and Aaliya in her place. This story shall focus on how BB and Aaliya who were best friends in their school times turned against each other. This story will be presented from BB's (mine) point of view and will contain feelings and emotions of BB towards Aaliya. This is not our complete story but I had to make a number of changes keeping the serial's story in mind. And this can seem a little kiddish cuz it is a story of two Grade 6 friends. So here is its character sketch...

Bulbul Arora: An 11-year old, Grade VI girl who is quite intelligent and a fun to be hang around girl. Her best friend is Aaliya Mehra.

Aaliya Mehra: A 11-year old, Grade VI girl who is a great artist and a jolly person. Her best friend is Bulbul Arora.

Saumya, Vani, Manya, Vishakha, Niharika: Aaliya's old friends who were with her from Grade 1. They all came in VI- A after distribution of French and Sanskrit classes. Aaliya used to hang around with them before Bulbul became her best friend.

Pragya Arora: A 13-year old intelligent girl who is the sis of BB Arora. Her best friend is Abhi.

Abhishek/Abhi Mehra: A 13-year old naughty boy who is the bro of Aaliya Mehra. His best friend is Pragya.

I know it is a small CS but more characters will come in future.
Like this post so that I can make a list of people who wanna be PM when I release this story's first part.

With loads of love,
Adah

Chapter 1: Pg2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kumkum-bhagya/4332904/bb-and-aaliya-ss-a-tale-of-2-friends-finished?pn=2

Chapter 2: Pg3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kumkum-bhagya/4332904/bb-and-aaliya-ss-a-tale-of-2-friends-finished?pn=3
Chapter 3: Pg4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/121146541

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Sounds interesting. Looking forward to read this one..😃

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People to be PMd when a new part is released
(like it to get yr name added in the list)

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Originally posted by: apple123flower
Sounds interesting. Looking forward to read this one..😃

Thanks dear. Glad u liked it 😳

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Like the sound of this!

Awww thanks dear 😳

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Originally posted by: smala
Sounds interesting.

Thanks dear. 😳

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Chapter 1: How it all started...

It is mine, Bulbul's story who never thought that someone could make such a big change in my life. I broke up with her, never thought I would. I broke up with her, Aaliya who was the only friend whom I thought loved me unconditionally. It all happened like...I even don't know how. I had spent a wonderful time with her. I had had a few small quarrels with her before this big break-up. I repent this but whenever I try to say sorry to her, my ego comes in between. Of course, I am not egoistic, but there is some kind of internal energy that stops me from even looking at her. I believe that as she is at fault then why the heck should I apologize. So it all started like this...
Our exams were finally over. I had read the full Harry Potter series and she was reading it in those days. Directly or indirectly, it was Harry Potter that brought us close and made us good friends. I always laugh while thinking of it. 😆
"Hey! I have read the whole Harry Potter series. I believe you are reading Chamber of Secrets nowadays. So where have you reached?" I asked.
Aaliya replied,"Oh! I have reached chapter 7. It is a great series. Just enjoy reading it. Hats off to Joanne."
I said,"Yup! Peeves dialogues are just amazing in it."
She said,"Quite right. I..."
Unfortunately, Saumya, the main b**** of our friendship story came there and took her away from me and of course, I was left alone, sitting on the bench, staring fruitlessly at the ceiling. My blood boiled whenever any of her 4-E friends separated us. I don't know why but I beginned having a feeling that she had become my best friend. There was definitely something special in her, that I loved her presence around me. It was soothingly calm. Whenever I saw her with her 4-E friends, I felt jealous, duh! Now let me continue our story. In the recess, me and Aaliya used to go to the stage in the ground to have lunch and obviously with her "so-called old" friends. Huh! Couldn't they just give us some privacy? They and their stupid talks, I didn't like facing them because I couldn't face the glaring rays of stupidity that came out of them. I wish that they left us alone. I had to join their so- called group to stay with Aaliya. Day by day, this continued and we really had a fun time together (excluding moments when her 4-E friends were around). She had finished the Harry Potter series and we used to discuss them and other novels that are famous or novels we'd like to read. Both me and Aaliya were the biggest book worms of our class. There were other similarities between us:

Both were book worms.
Both were really good artists.
Both were good in studies.
Both hated commenting on other students.
Both listened to Hollywood Songs.
Both were fans of Harry Potter. (and J.K.Rowling)

I still remember those days which were one of the best days of my life.

This was the end of Chapter 1. Chapter 2 to be updated soon. Hope you all like it. Do read & comment.
With loads of love,
Adah

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Really nice.. It's something very new and on top of that it's a friendship story of Aliya and Bulbul.. Liked this chapter..😃

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Originally posted by: apple123flower
Really nice.. It's something very new and on top of that it's a friendship story of Aliya and Bulbul.. Liked this chapter..😃

Glad u liked it dear. I was afraid that people might not be interested in it cuz it doesn't contain AbhiGya but I think some people like u would like this.

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Very different and new! Great work!

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