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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: simsim25

Oh my! I loved this! Such a cute update!

What is in the papers!

Please please update soon! Can't wait too long with this suspense! Loved it so much! <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: MarGan

<font size="3">Enjoyed the update so much😊...Abhi is taking so much care😛 ... Akash asking for a second chance...Dadi not talking with Abhi for his own good...So many emotions and so much drama...
You are writing the story as if you are a PRO in writing👏...
And you stopped with a suspense😉...So,obviously I'll have to wait for the next update eagerlyy...Please update soon😳...

Thank you for PM...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sara7iris

thank you for the pm your update was awesome, interesting and also we have suspense ...I love it ...I think the papier contains all the property of abhi and he want transfert everything to pragya
your story is amazing and I excited to know what will happen next ...pls update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Humzy

lovely update

loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: sam78

Amazing update. Abhigya are so sweet. Thanks for pm. Please update soon. Bhabi and devar planning get devarani for devar, so sweet.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice update it's nice to see Abhi taking if Pragya so well, I liked the scenes of Aakash and dadi with Pragya, also Aaksha's mum helping Pragya that was a surprise. Can't wait to read the next update and find out what the papers are, hope you post it soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Hello i read all the parts
Really I loved it
It was fab I like the way you get Akash
In the Story because onscreen I am missing him
I liked Abhigya of course
Abhi feeling concerned for his Fuggy really cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asma-

Hello i read all the parts
Really I loved it
It was fab I like the way you get Akash
In the Story because onscreen I am missing him
I liked Abhigya of course
Abhi feeling concerned for his Fuggy really cute

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys thanks a lot for the lovely comments.I am here with the next chapter.Enjoy reading...
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CHAPTER:5

''Abhishekh where you left this morning.When i asked Akash he said .You didn't tell anything to anyone.I was so worried Abhishekh ,is everything alright?''asked pragya with concern.
''Pragya everything is fine.But i want you to sign in these papers''said Abhi and handed her the file.Pragya was confused by his behaviour.
''What is in the file Abhishekh?''asked pragya.
''See it by yourself ''said Abhi and pragya opened the file only to get shocked and stunned once she read printed content on the paper.
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Pragya read the papers couple of times again to amke sure she is reading correctly .Then she closed the file and glared at Abhi.
''What the hell is this Abhishekh?''asked pragya with anger in her voice.
''Arrey its legal document fuggy.can't you see it.Is there any problem with your chasma Fuggy''asked Abhi with a smile but pragya continued to glare.
''Abhishekh i am serious.From did the idea of transfering all your property on my name.Are you out of your mind or something else?''asked pragya with annoyance.
''Pragya i know what i am doing so please sign this paper''said Abhi ''Abhishek i can belive you are doing this after all this.I though you trust me now but i think i am wrong.I mean why would you do something like this if you trust me .Its feels like another test for me to prove myself again.Why can't you just trust me like i trust you Abhishekh.''asked pragya with pain in her voice.
''That the problem damn it.That the main problem.Trust. Trust is the main problem between us now.I didn't gave you this paper coz i didn't trust you pragya coz if i trust someone more than myslef in my life its you.But the problem is you didn't trust that i trust you .If you thought i will trust you you would have never kept Tanu and Aaliya's involvement in the kidnapping when you Tanu herself told you the truth.''said Abhi and pragya looking him with shock seeing the raw pain in his eyes and feeling it in his voice.
''Abhishekh what are talking about ?Ofcourse i trust you''said pragya in a soft voice and Abhi kneeled infront of her and took her hand in his and looked at her with pain in his lovely eyes.
''Pragya i know you trust me.But just answer me for one question ok?''asked Abhi in a soft voice.Pragya just nodded as she can't find his voice seeing the emotions playing on his face.
''Why didn't you tell me about Aaliya and Tanu's involvement in your kidnapping pragya?''asked Abhi looking into her eyes .
''I thought you will not trust me Abhishekh''said pragya in a low voice.
''See that is why i want to do this.I want to you to tell me anything if you want without the fear that i will not trust you.If Neel didn't tell me the truth and i heard everything with my own ears i would still believed Aaliya changed for good and Tanu would be still in my life as Aaliya's friend and this would have put your's or Bulbul's life in danger again.And if something like that happened again i could never forgiven myself.pragya from the moment i married you i called you a gold digger,manipulative and by many names.If i am not a singer now i would have cut my tongue coz it will be perfect punishment .So as i can't do that i want to transfer my properties on your name coz i don't want you to even a small doubt sharing something with me.I know you will not like this pragya but its the only way i can feel like was atleast trying to makeup to verbal wounds i gave you.And even i can feel that my savings and properties are safe with you coz if someone who will not change under the influence of money.So please pragya sign this paper and let me out of some of my guilt and regret''said Abhi caressing her hands and pragya looked at him with teary eyes as his words really touched her heart.She know Abhi was feeling guilty for what he did to her but she never thought it will eating him to this this extend.
''Abhishekh ''whispered pragya and pulled him into her chest and rested her head on his head while Abhi too hugged her back and Abhi ran her hands in his hairs.
''Oh Abhishekh i am so sorry.I know i must have trusted you but i didn't thought you will believe me over Aaliya and Tanu like you did in the MMS matter''said Pragya and she can feel his body tense when she mention the MMS and he hugged her closer.
''I know pragya and that's why i want to make you believe that i trust you and will always trust you.Even if i tried to make up for what i did to you my whole life it will not be enough .But pragya i want to do all this atleast to face myself in the mirror.''said Abhi and pragya can feel her top getting wet from his silent tears .Pragya though its enough Abhi hurting himself like this and his guilt eating him alive.She broke the hug and cupped his face wiping his tears.
''Abhishekh please its enough.You already had enough with self guilt eating you form inside.I know you did a mistake but its not your fault Abhishekh.Even you didn't like me then you helped my family a lot and treated them as your own.You may did some mistake Abhishekh but i know you have a heart of gold.so please let it go and stop with this self guilt.Its hurting me to see you like this.''said pragya .
''Then please sign these papers pragya ''asked Abhi with an innocent face which made pragya unable to say no.
''ok Abhishekh i will for you''said pragya with a smile and this bought a smile on Abhi's face too.
''Really?''asked Abhi like a child .
''Haan really''said Pragya with a smile.Abhi then stood up from the place and gave her a pen from his pocket and opened the file.As pragya was about to sign she stopped at the last moment and looked at Abhi.
''Abhi what about Aaliya and daadi and others if you transfer all your properties to me ''asked pragya with concern and Abhi smiled at her thinking about others after before her.
''Meri cutie fuggy you don't worry about it .I already took care about it already so now sign without asking twenty questions''said Abhi with fake annoyance and pragya gave him a pout and signed the papers.Once she signed all the required papers she handed the file to Abhi.
''Abb kush?''asked pragya with a smile.
''Bahut khush''said Abhi with a goofy smile.
''ok now lets get up and lay down on the bed as the nurse will be here to change your dressing within few minutes''said Abhi and helped pragya to stand up and they entered the room.
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Pragya was rested her back on the bedrest and was doing some work in her laptop as Abhi was sitting beside her writing lyrics for his next album resting his head on her shoulder after the nurse left chancing her dressing.
''Yaar Fuggy i acn't even write a single line properly''said Abhi with irriation and placed the clipboard with paper on the bed with a pout.Pragya shook her head seeing his childish antics.She placed the laptop on the bed and looked at him.
''Is there any way that i could help my rockstar in this?''aksed pragya with a smile which bought a naughty smile on Abhi's face.
''Ofcourse you can.''said Abhi with a goofy smile and pragya raised her eyebrow with a smile.
''How can i to that?''asked pragya .
''By giving some modivation''said Abhi and pulled her closer looking into her eyes with passion,love,admiration for her.
''How can i motivate you?''asked pragya as her breath laboured seeing as Abhi moved closer to her face looking her rosey lips to her eyes.
''Like this''said Abhi with a soft smile and pulled her into a kiss which started slow and soft.Pragya on the other hand felt a bolt of thunder on her whole body the moment his lips captured hers in a soft and slow kiss.Though it was her first kiss pragya felt like she waited for this for many centuries.Then she felt Abhi pull away and looked at which apologic expression.
''Pragya i am sorry i thought you will be ok with this''said Abhi and pragya understood that he thought she is not ok with this coz she didn't respond to the kiss.Though she was to say she was more than ok and she too needs this and she was just shocked to respond ,she know today she must speak with action more than words.so he pulled Abhi closer by wrapping her hand around his neck and crushed her lips on his pouring all the love,passion,longing she had for him.At first she could feel Abhi's shock then after few seconds Abhi responded with same love,passion.For the next few minutes both of them continued to explore each other's mouth .For Abhi even though its not his first kiss he felt like it the first time tasting a kiss which will be filled with love which made him belonged for the first time in his life.For pragya though it was first kiss she was happy that it was happening with her husband though it not happening under the stars or in the rain like in the romance novel or fairy tales .She never believed in fairy tales before but after realising her love for Abhishekh and him returing his love for ther for the past days she felt she was living in the fairy tale itslef.Then Abhi made her lay on the bed and continued to kiss her down her neck covering each and every bit of her sking with his lips while pragya felt like burning in the fire of passion.Then after few seconds she felt Abhi slinding his sleeve from her shoulder and became suddenly tensed as she is really not ready to take their marriage to the next level.Its not that she didn't trust him with this ,if there is someone who she trust with her body and soul it will be her Abhishekh.But still they didn't about each other properly and felt it too soon .Abhi on the other hand who was lost in her felt her body tense under him while he romoved her sleeve from her shoulder and understood she is not ready for this now.Even though he wanted to lost in the passion with her and made her his in this moment he know they have to understand each other before becoming husband and wife in all sense .so he moved her sleeve back to her shoulder and placed a kiss on her neck.
''I know you are not ready for this Fuggy and i will wait as long as you want''said Abhi and placed a kiss on her forehead.Pragya was glad that he understood her and smiled placing a kiss on his cheek then they rested their forehead on each other closing their eyes
''So how was the motivation?''asked pragya with a shy smile.
''Hmm not bad Fuggy.Even though you didn't match upto my expectation you are not bad''said Abhi with a smrik and pragya looked at him with a glare.
''Haan haan how can i match up to your expectation ,alferall its not like i am your first kiss like you are mine''said Pragya with a huff and Abhi smiled at her cuteness.He then cupped her cheeks and made her look at him.
''Fuggy this is the best kiss i ever had coz there is something i felt in this kiss which i never felt before.Its your love pragya. In my life for the first time i felt what is meant by true love from you.You may be not my first kiss Fuggy but i promise you you will be last''said Abhi and pragya smiled hearing this.
''I love you Fuggy''said Abhi with a smile .
''I love ...your phone''said pragya
''Kya ?''asked Abhi in confusion and pragya laughed seeing his reaction
''Arrey you are getting a call''said pragya and Abhi looked his phone on the bed which was in silent and saw he was receiving a call .He with a huff took the phone and attend the call.
''Hello''said Abhi with irritation for disturbing his romance with his Fuggy.
''Hello sir we are calling from prince jewellery to let you know that we have polished and cleaned the manglasutra you gave us and you get it today''said a polite female voice .
''Thanks a lot for informing .I will come and get it today''said Abhi.
''Ok sir .Have a nice day''said the girl and disconnected the call.
''What is it Abhishekh?''asked pragya.
''Well i gave your manglasutra to polish and remove the blood stains from it.They called me to inform to get it back as they finished the work.But fuggy i was really suprised when you didn't ask about it as i though you will ask me immediately once you notice it was missing''said Abhishekh .
''Well i asked about it to Bulbul in the hospital and purab said that it was with you.so i didn't worry about it anymore coz i know you will keep it safe and will give it back once the reason you are keeping with you is over''said pragya with a smile and Abhi smiled back knowing how much his fuggy trusts her.
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Its was 20 past 4 in the evening while Aaliya was sitting in ther room with puffy eyes resting her head on the headrest of the bed looking at the wall .She felt like lost in her own house after the outburst of his brother as she never though Abhi will stop talking to her like this and didn't even come to visit her once after it even though everyone in the house know she didn't leave the room from yesterday morning.But what shocked her most was how Tanu told she has nothing to do wih her anymore as she can't risk her going to jail by keeping friendship with her.Now Aaliya understood how selfish Tanu is and her bhai would have never been happy.But she also know she was even more selfish than Tanu coz she is the one who asked his own brother to marry the girl whom they though was purab's love interest and a gold digger though its not true.She remembered how pragya forgave her easily even after everthing she did and how she used and played with her trust.Aaliya can see the love her bhai and pragya shares and even Bulbul and purab shares and she decided to let go purab for real this time.She know it will hurt like a hell for sometime seeing him happy with Bulbul but it will safe her from a lifetime of pain coz she now understood purab only loves Bulbul and will never love her even if they get married.Though others will not believe her this time she will try hard to gain their trust back especially her brother's,bhabhi's,daadi's and Rabul's .She know how much pragya sacrificed and loves Bulbul and wish she had a elder sister like her who loves her younger sister like a mother loves her child.Though her brother loves her having a elder sister will make a great difference.She know if she really want to change for good and gain others forgiveness she must start if from her bhabhi .Aaliya wiped the tears from her eyes and left to talk to her bhabhi.
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Pragya was sitting in the balcony and was talking to Bulbul and purab who came to visit her about the marriage preparation.Basically they are aruging than talking.
''Di Bulbul is right i think we must postpond the wedding .I mean how can we get married when you are not well''said purab .
''see di even purab is agreeing with me.We can't just get married when you just came from the hospital di''said Bulbul amd pragya had enough pf everyone treating her like a doll make of glass.
''Enough guys i had enough you all treating me like a doll made of glass.I fine nothing happened to me.Yes i was still hurting from the bullet wound but its healing and i will be completely alright in few weeks so please stop talking about postponding the marriage.Its will happen in 10 days like planned already so shut up you both''said pragya with a stern voice
''But di...''started Rabul to protest.
''No but and if.See if you guys pospond the wedding i will feel bad and guilty so this is what you guys want then go and pospond the wedding''said pragya with a sad face and Rabul didn't have the heart to deny her request even though they know she is emotionally blackmailing them.
''Ok meri we will.Now stop giving us that face for which we can't deny anything ''said Bulbul and pragya smiled.
''Good .I would never want you guys to give up your happiness for me.I love you both and want you to be happy so don't even think something like this again''said pragya and Rabul hugged her with a smile.
''Thank you di.We love you too''said Rabul with a smile as pragya hugged them back.After few seconds they broke the hug and pragya looked Rabul with a smile.
''Ok now you both go and spend sometime alone and Bulbul i want some help from you ''said Pragya.
''Haan di.What is it?''asked Bulbul .Then pragya explained about Rachana and Akash how Akash finally realized his mistake and want Rachana and their baby bakc.
''Sure di i will help you.Akash already asked my advice in this in the hospital but i asked him to talk to you as I know you are the only one who can help him .But don't you think Rachana will get angry if she comes to know about it''asked Bulbul.
''I know Bulbul she will be angry at first but i will make her understand.We both know how much we all of us went through when dad left us and how much our maa struggled as a single mother.so i didn't want Rachana go through the same and Akash suffer for a mistake which was not completely his fault.I can see how much he regrets for what he did to Rachana and how much he is longing to a part of his child's life.I consider him as my brother as much as i consider Rachana as my sister.so i want them to be happy .''said Pragya and Rabul smiled.
''Ok di i will help you''said Bulbul with a smile .Just then purab mobile rang and he attend the call.Once purab finished the call he turned towards pragya with a smile.
''Actually di we have to go.Maa chachi called us to her house for discussing about some wedding preparation''said purab.
''Ok then you both go and enjoy''said Pragya with a smile.
''Ok di .But you please di take care of yourself and calls us if you need anything''said Bulbul and pragya nodded.
''Bye di''said Rabul and left her room with a smile.
Aaliya who saw everything from behind the curtains wiped her tears of regret for loosing someone loves like her bhabhi's.she can she how much she loves everyone in this house even about her and decided to keep Rabul's wedding somewhere else thinking it may help hurt her more.But she being the stupid and selfish one refused to see the god in her.But today she is going to talk to her and ask her forgivness or atleast try .Then she moved to the balcony with a determination.
''Bhabhi''called Aaliya and pragya looked at her with confusion.
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Sarla was preparing pragya favourite dishes as doctor prescribed to take it with her as she was going to visit her with RSD.Just then she heard the calling bell and went to open the door.Once she opened the door she was confused to see Abhi standing outside .
''Betaji app.Come inside''said sarla with a smile.
''Betaji is everything alright.Is pragya alright?''asked Sarla with concern.
''Auntyji everything is fine and pragya is good and healing fast.I came here to talk with you and RSD about something''said Abhi.
''What is it betaji?''asked sarla with confusion.
''I came here to tell you real reason i married pragya ''said Abhi and sarla became concern hearing the seriousness and regret in his voice.

-To Be Continued.

With Love,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update :)
I love Abhigya that are so cute and lovely
Aliyah is repenting that's good
I don't know how Sarla will react after knowing the truth about Abhigya
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