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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrsArnavRajput



well even i was missing that and i was really pissed that the CVs never elaborated Rabul's intense feelings they just rushed it

so writing this OS is sort of a self-consolation for me but nevertheless i am glad even you guys are liking it 😊

Cvs have always used as rabul as a twist bringer or the one who could take the story ahead...they rushed their story like anything...but still because of Arnal's chemistry and my addiction for them I am still hooked up with the show...though they never get proper tracks or scenes...and expecting anything from cvs is like banging heads on the walls...!
Only hopes which are left that at least they get married in the first place...!!


Still Thank you so much for writing it !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3: Guroor


Was that actually her or was I imagining something
'Purab???'' called akash 'kaha khoye hai tu??''
'hai?? Nahi kuch nahi.''
'Acha chal class mein chalet hain''
'class??abhi??''
'haan yaad nahi vo naya course liye tha''
'o acha sorry yaar bhul geya chaal''

The two boys walked to their new class, it was their new semester and as expected the class was already crowded. Purab didn't even look at anything else he just moved towards his favorite seat...the first row. He always had to be in the first row ahead of everyone else.
The lecturer entered the room and a pin drop silent conquered the whole class.

'So class what's your opinion should the government decrease the corporate tax??''

'Absolutely sir'' said Purab and he presented his answer with such amazing points that even the lecturer was impressed and as always Purab was flying up in the sky but soon he was brought down.

'I beg to differ sir'' said a girl. Purab turned to see his opposition but he couldn't see her. However the girl gave even better answer so good that it made his answer look like a 7th grade student's answer.
Purab was moving back and forth to see her and finally he did...the same girl.
He turned around to his seat moving his eyes left and right like a robot.
'Akash dekh tou kya yeh vohi ladki hai'' whispered Purab
'Kaun si??''asked aksh in a confused way.
'Arei canteen wali'' said purab annoyingly he expected Akaash to remember her just the way he did but unfortunately Akaash was still confused.
And the bell rang. Everyone was getting out. Purab didn't bother to wait he jumped over the table and rushed toward his mystery girl..
'Purab kaha jaa raha hai??'' shouted Akaash
'mar ne''

Purab rushed outside the room to find that girl and as soon as he saw her he walked fast towards her. She was standing with her back towards Purab. He walked fast towards her and slowed down his pace when he reached her...he was standing behind her but there was one person between them Aliya.
Aliya was standing quite close to bulbul...lagta aliya janti hain usse
'Hey purab' said Aliya
'Heyy aliya kaisi ho??'' asked purab in an excited way...''baare dino baad nazar aaa rahi ho''
That girl was talking over the phone with her back towards them and then she hung up and turned back.
...aur pata hain maa tou mujhe yehi kehti hai'' Aliya kept on blabbering
Arei yaar yeh ladki baak baak hi karti rahe gi kya introduce kaun karaiga
Bulbul didn't even look up for once she was so lost reading something on her phone and purab was so lost into her.
baas bohut ho geya aab mujhe hi kuch karna parega
And purab intentionally dropped his book and fortunately it grabbed her attention. Purab and bulbul both kneed down to pick it up. And that's when she finally looked at him.
Her eyes...
They both stood up.
'Oh btw yeh purab hai''
Finally isne apna dimag tou use kiya
She looked at him and smiled.
'Aur yeh bulbul hai''
Bulbul...the name ranged in his head.
'Hey'' said purab.
'hi''
'Tum eco102 mein ho na??''
'umm ha..tum bhi usi class mein ho??''
Isne mujhe notice nahi kiya ya attitude de rahi hai...nahi notice nahi kiya asa tou ho nahi saakta
'mmhhmm..vaise hum pehle bhi mil chukhe hai...yaad hai??''
'we did?? Kaab??''
attitude...full attitude...varna mujhe yaad nahi rakha aisa tou ho nahi sakta
'umm umm canteen'' smirked purab.
'oh yeah,,I remember''
Baas itna hi?? ise kuch kehna nahi chahiye...phir se attitude
'ok aliya I have a class main chalti hoon'' said bulbul she gave him a smile and purab also gave a funny smile. She turned around and he made a disgusted face behind her back that was caught by aliya.
'purab??'' said Aliya hitting his arm.
'itna attitude kyun marti hain yeh'' purab was irritated.
'Attitude aur bulbul??come on yaar bohut achi ladki hain...so loving and full of life'
'full of life??'' as if someone told Purab that Barack obama was dead.
'Agar isse full of life kete hain na tou ajse mere life ka matlaab oats hai...tasteless''
'Purab'' giggled aliya ' nahi yaar sach main bohut achi hai kuch problems hai isiliye...
'I am not interested to know main chalta hoon bye''
Purab didn't even bother to hear about that girl behind whom he was running a few minutes back...why?? Because his ego was hurt not only cause it was the first time a girl didn't pay him attention but also cause that girl showed arrogance something he hates the most..arrogance.
Khamakha iss ladki ke piche itne dino taak bhaga she doesn't deserve it kis chis ka goroor hain use itna??apne khoobsurti ka?? Bullshit. Aj k baat main uske bare main nahi sochunga. Never

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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Beautifully written Ramisha 👏
Amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You should join kkb CVS team.
Really loved it Ramisha

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PtgFan

You should join kkb CVS team.

Really loved it Ramisha



aww thanks alot yaar...but if i join the CVs team there will be a problem for abhigya fans cause then all the episodes would be filled with rabul scenes 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow wow just wow...👏..!
Loved it...amazingly written...that also in typical rabul way...their emotions...attractions...ego clashes and everything.!!!
I wont mind if you join kkb cvs...it will be a bliss for all rabul fans..😆!

Will be eagerly waiting for next part...😳
Edited by ritzee967 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzee967

Wow wow just wow...👏..!

Loved it...amazingly written...that also in typical rabul way...their emotions...attractions...ego clashes and everything.!!!
I wont mind if you join kkb cvs...it will be a bliss for all rabul fans..😆!

Will be eagerly waiting for next part...😳



haha thanks alot yaar do stick around cause the next part is a bit interesting 😉

btw i actually wont join kkb cvs i will have my own rabul story for all the devoted rabulians 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: MrsArnavRajput



aww thanks alot yaar...but if i join the CVs team there will be a problem for abhigya fans cause then all the episodes would be filled with rabul scenes 😆

true😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: MrsArnavRajput



haha thanks alot yaar do stick around cause the next part is a bit interesting 😉

btw i actually wont join kkb cvs i will have my own rabul story for all the devoted rabulians 😃

If you will get time make Rabul vm.
I loved your time main tenu samjha Rabul vm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PtgFan

If you will get time make Rabul vm.

I loved your time main tenu samjha Rabul vm



arei yaar bol maat i am dying to make VM
but this YT😡 it just blocks all my videos😡
i dont know what to do

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