Rabul OS: Ek ankahi si daasta updated Capter6 page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys just wanted you all to know that i have changed the name of this OS it was previously called khwayishen but now i have changed it to Ek aankahi dastan and the reason i did it is cause i think the actual story of rabul in KB is actually an untold story... though my one is completely different from the actual rabul but i have tried my level best to insert the intensity in it that the CVs of KB have missed out. So i just hope you people will like please do comment😊

Ek ankahi si daasta

'Bol purab truth or dare??'' asked Aakash
'chaal dare'' said purab
'Dare?? Ohkaaay...ummm ha...vo dekh vo ladki dekh raha hai??''
'kaun sa??''
'Vo dekh corner mein bathi hain humare thik ek table baad...blue jeans or white tops..kano mein earphones''
'voo silky baal??''
'haa vohi...uskei paas ja aur ussei dat...aise jaise ki tui uska boyfriend hai''
'thoda easy nahi ho geya??''
'nahi ja aur yeh kaar''
'thik hai''
And purab started to walk towards her.
Yeh bhi koi dare hua...ek blank look degi bohaat zyaada hua tou daar jayegi aur saaru huyi tou dat degi aur main? Main ek cute sa smile deke sorry bol dunga aur kya...yeh akaash bhi na purab thought ...rolling his eyes he sat infront of Bulbul.
She looked up and frowned. A cute guy wearing a black polo shirt was sitting infront of her but why??
Purab showed some hand signs which meant 'take out your earphones''
Bulbul did.
'TUm samajh ti kya ho apne ap ko??'' asked purab
Blank look thik jaise maine socha tha'' thought purab.
'Tum kya samajh ti ho tum apna phone band kar k rakho gi aur main kuch nahi kahunga?? Phone band kyun tha tumhara??'' Purab scolded her loudly. 'Answer me!!''
Bulbul got up and walked passed purab.
lagta hai daar gayi'' thought purab and giggled.
He stood up 'tum mujhe javab diye bagair kaha ja rahi ho??'' screamed purab.
Bulbul turned and got near purab.
'You really think I should answer you??after everything you did I should answer you?? You??''
Purab's eyes widened bol kya rahi hai yeh.
even his friends' laughter vanished and was replaced by amazed looks. The whole canteen was staring.
'Tumne mere saath jo kuch bhi kiya uske baad tumhe lagta hai main tumhe maaf karungi??tumse phone pe baat karungi??''
'Maine kiya kya??'' asked purab like a 4year old kid.
'Kya kiya ?? kya kiya?? Tumne mera bhaoisa thod diya mere pyaar mere pyaa ko khatam kar diya''
Yeh starplus ki koi heroin hai kya
'tumne mujhe dhoka diya hai aur main uske liye tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi...aur ha aj k baad tumhara mera rishta khatam mujhse kabhi baat karneki KOSISH BHI MAAT KARNA TUM...SAMJHE??
'Haa'' said purab in a shaky voice
She turned around and walked away her silky long hair dancing behind her.
And purab?? Well he just couldn't understand what happened.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue soon dear... it was good...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz continue soon...!!!
Loved this small part...!!!
Bulbul' s pranks and Purab's cuteness are always welcomed..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start..👍🏼

Is this a humshakal type chakkar? Well, whatever it is continue soon because I am hooked!😃

PM me if possible. ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pookhi

Interesting start..👍🏼

Is this a humshakal type chakkar? Well, whatever it is continue soon because I am hooked!😃

PM me if possible. ;)



haha you never know 😉😆

Well i was waiting to see the response so hopefully i will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start. Pls continue soon... 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start..
Shocked Purab!! 😆

Continue Soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pagal ladki saab ke samne mera tamasha bana diya ek baar mil jaye badla tou main zaroor lunga samajh ti kya hai apna aap ko...looser kahi ki pataa nahi kaha kaha se aa jate hai

Purab was lost in his thoughts no idea where he was heading indeed he had no idea what he was doing at that boring wedding but he had to come for his dad...purab never said no to his dad.

Kya vo mujhe janti thi?? Mujhe tou nahi lagta..whatever why am i...
'Oh my god shit...can't you see'' shouted Purab, someone spilled a glass full of coffee on him..his sherwani,his favorite sherwani was spoiled. With a motive to beat that person blue and black Purab looked up...

A gorgeous red lahenga, pair of big earrings and a mang tika
but her hair why did she tie it up??
'Tum??'' it was the same girl who embarrassed him infront of the whole canteen, who was shouting at him for reasons unknown but now there she was all quite staring at him with those notorious eyes.
Her face was expressionless as if she had seen a ghost as if Purab was the last person she wanted to see but then again why was she staring at him just the way he was staring at her??
Suddenly someone called him from the back he turned to response but when he returned to his position that girl was gone...vanished in thin air but this time he couldn't see her hair dancing behind her but she did leave behind something.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...loved it...👏!
I was really missing initial rabul nok jhok and their accidental bumping into each other...but this os is a relief..!
Continue soon dear...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzee967

Awesome...loved it...👏!

I was really missing initial rabul nok jhok and their accidental bumping into each other...but this os is a relief..!
Continue soon dear...!



well even i was missing that and i was really pissed that the CVs never elaborated Rabul's intense feelings they just rushed it

so writing this OS is sort of a self-consolation for me but nevertheless i am glad even you guys are liking it 😊

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