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abhiya23

@abhiya23

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is the only I wrote when I started writing stories and then fictions

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very nice..😊

I'll comment more later as I did not finish reading everything yet..😆

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abhiya23

@abhiya23

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apple123flower
Very nice..😊

I'll comment more later as I did not finish reading everything yet..😆

you can comment anytime, this was just to share with all of you

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abhiya23

@abhiya23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nobody wanna read the story 😭

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abhiya23

@abhiya23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys please like and comment on it if you want

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res, I'll finish reading and comment soon 😃

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Arjittaneja_fan

@Arjittaneja_fan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome story ash I really loved it. Please right more on RaBul...

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abhiya23

@abhiya23

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: xladki.2015x
Awesome story ash I really loved it. Please right more on RaBul...

I will continue writing about Rabul in my other FF, I pm you the last updates of FF, you can read those and comment on them

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ritzee967

@ritzee967

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Posted: 10 years ago

Ohh my goodness...Ash take a bow for this👏, I just loved it..loved it...read the full SS in one go and fell in love with the plot...!!!

Seriously the way you bring out the emotions in small small interactions is amazing, the bond which characters share here...is too pure, all the characters have some flaws , no one is perfect but everyone is correct in their own way...!!

Hearts got connected of so many couples but then the way they tested the time again and again and finally met together was way too awesome...

The best thing I liked was that Villains were there in the story, but the planning and plotting was to a limit , reality could be connected between the scenes...to maintain the distance between the soulmates and to show them hardships of life their inner turmoil as well as time was enough..no need of filthy planning...

It was nice that after all the big brawl , happy and light moments returned in the end with the party, bet and that small mouse...! Everyone got married to their beloveds...life is a biggest teacher...everything seems perfect here...but then again it will keep giving them their required dose at right time..

Loved the happy ending...it just brings the smile and your faith in goodness increases...

Great suspense, strong characterisation, golden hearts , amazing feels...this SS was just mind blowing!

Keep the work going friend...!!!!!!