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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice
I like it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys thank you so much for reading it
Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzee967

Ohh my goodness...Ash take a bow for this👏, I just loved it..loved it...read the full SS in one go and fell in love with the plot...!!!

Seriously the way you bring out the emotions in small small interactions is amazing, the bond which characters share here...is too pure, all the characters have some flaws , no one is perfect but everyone is correct in their own way...!!
Hearts got connected of so many couples but then the way they tested the time again and again and finally met together was way too awesome...
The best thing I liked was that Villains were there in the story, but the planning and plotting was to a limit , reality could be connected between the scenes...to maintain the distance between the soulmates and to show them hardships of life their inner turmoil as well as time was enough..no need of filthy planning...
It was nice that after all the big brawl , happy and light moments returned in the end with the party, bet and that small mouse...! Everyone got married to their beloveds...life is a biggest teacher...everything seems perfect here...but then again it will keep giving them their required dose at right time..
Loved the happy ending...it just brings the smile and your faith in goodness increases...
Great suspense, strong characterisation, golden hearts , amazing feels...this SS was just mind blowing!
Keep the work going friend...!!!!!!


Thank you so much dear friend, I appreciate your long comment but I am curious to know about flaws you talk about 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow a nice story! so many twists i was hooked! glad it ended nicely! nice story ash!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome yaar..that was a great story ,so many twists and turns too good!!👍🏼
It was very nicely written ,all the love stories were so cute and the amount of drama was just amazing!👏
Good triumphs over evil..that is such a nice theme and is always there in your stories..😉
I liked it so much but in some places the story went too fast I feel ,apart from that whole story was fantastic!😃
Keep writing ,you are a Fab writer!👍🏼
Edited by Starsfireflies - 9 years ago

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3 months ago

The police came and did not ask..whether prathana agrees with the wed

This annoyed me so much how comes she did not say anything no consent or asking what she wants what the hell

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