I knew there had to be a reason that I couldn't remember this SS!!! I was away from IF...Did you send me a PM about it?? and if you did...shame on me for not commenting...not too sure what happened here(I'm cheekily blaming IF for eating my Messages!!)
Ooo Myyy Goooddd (Janice Style)
DHINGLU!!!!! I cannot believe how cute this is!!! I'm going back to read it again!
Chapter 1
Love brooding Abhi!! He's thinking of not thinking about Aliyah...him wanting coffee and being surprised that someone's ordering one (Duhh Abhi it's a coffee shop...other people drink the same style coffee you know!!)
And then into of the cute girl!! Loving her outfit..I can soo picture it and someone who would definitely pull him in...And wanting to be like her..how he put it ..Free!!! obviously there is some baggage there!!
Seeing her at the park and those playing kids who remind him of his younger self and Aliyah(who he is still trying not to think about! I want to know what she's done!!!!) and her saving the girl...
And third time's a charm...meeting her again buying flowers(orchids...LOVE!!!) and then running after her!!! Kya baat hai rockstar!
Chapter 2
I'm loving the confident Pragya!!! air quoting, telling him roses are cliche.Him getting shy about her thinking of him as a stalker and trying to explain himself...rambling...finding her cute!!!
OMG you're killing me with feels!!!
Giving her his autograph and number!! I hope hope hope she calls him
Damn...I wanted to give you a better review for the second chapter but I just have this big smile on my face and my thoughts are out of my head!!!
When are you continuing???(Goli mar RL ko...and just do it!!!)
Please continue jaldi jaldi!!!
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