Tia's Drabbles: New drabble on pg 35- PraNu version 3 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Drabble: I want to be yours forever

He tossed and turned for an hour on the bed, but had made sure he made minimum noise.


A couple of feet away from him, slept his wife on the other side of the pillow border, facing away from him.

He was regretting it. He was regretting building the border. What was he thinking?

She had told him love is not when you want to live with someone but when you can't live without...

And he couldn't live without her anymore.

He wanted her, all of her for himself.

But that was not the problem. He knew she was his, always his.

It was him who needed to be hers. He had denied himself to her all this while.

Eventually he had realized it was the reason he was ready to die for her, the reason he broke up with his girlfriend for her.

He didn't know how to tell her that though. But that night he had crossed all limits of his patience.


He didn't care if she was sleeping, he didn't care if it was past midnight.

He quickly set aside the pillow border and slid towards her to hug her from the back.

"What are you doing?", she was in for a shock.

"Enough of it, Fuggy. I can't be not yours anymore. I know you never hold anything against me. And please don't hold this against me either. I was a mess, Fuggy. It took me all this while to know what I wanted. Now I know it Fuggy. I want to be yours, yours and only yours forever. Please make me yours" he said hiding his face in her hair.

She slowly turned around to face him, "I don't understand, what are you saying?".

"I meant every word I said. I love you and I want to give myself to you. My body, my heart and my soul. You own it all", he said sincerely.

Her eyes filled with tears. She hugged him tightly.

"I love you so much", she said sobbing into his chest.

"I love you Fuggy. I love you more than I will ever realize", he said running his fingers in her hair.

When she felt content after a while, she looked into his eyes and smiled.

He smiled back.

She shivered when his hand gripped her waist.

"Love me Fuggy, make me yours. I can't wait anymore to be yours", he begged.

She hugged him again.

He laid on his back and brought her on the top of him. Her fingers drew circles on his bare chest as her lips lightly touched his neck.

He locked his fingers with hers and she looked up to see his smiling face. He was adorable.

She couldn't resist placing a shy kiss on his cheek.

He turned his face asking for a kiss on the other cheek too. And she obliged.

He threw his head back letting her trail kisses on his neck.

He then met her eyes and placed his finger on his lips, demanding a kiss there.

She smiled and looked away. He held her face in his hands and demanded again, "kiss me Fuggy".

The passion in his eyes took away her inhibition for a moment. She met his lips with hers in a feather light kiss.

He closed his eyes and basked in the feeling.

And then he started kissing her back with all his desire, and loved her until he became hers- body, mind and soul.


Edited by -Tia- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome tia as always...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome and Fab Tia ...and hot ☺️ ...I really love your Drabble
you have done a very good job 👏

Edited by sara7iris - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So hot n it's beautiful Tia... Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tia!!! Your drabbles are truly AWESOME!
Keep it up, girl! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
So very beautiful ...love, love, happy love 😛!!!!
Thank you, Tia!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww- I liked the sort of role reversal. He became hers!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Drabble: Confession (not to happy with the way Pragya confessed, so here is my own version).

Pragya saved Abhi's life by taking out his toxic bullet. She took the uttermost care of him making sure he recovers as soon as possible.

The next morning he became conscious and slowly he realized his bullet had been removed, he was not at the edge of death anymore and he just beat death.

But he sure did know it was his fragile Fuggy who fought him back to life.

He wanted to say something to her but his throat was so dry that he could only cough.

She came running to him with a bowl of water, sat by his side and took his head in her lap and helped him sip water.

"Fuggy. How many hidden talents do you have? How did you do all this? I had thought I almost died. How did you manage this, all alone?" he said holding her hand.

"I didn't do it alone", she said.

"Then?" he looked at her in confusion.

A tear drop fell from her eyes on his forehead. He tried to wipe the tears remaining in her eyes.

She held his hand and kissed it. "My love for you made me do it. It gave me the strength to drag you in here, to dare to take out that bullet, to keep my hope that you will be okay"

"Love?" Abhi's voice shivered.

"Yes love and I love you. Don't give it some other name and deform it. Don't try to repay it and defame it. Let my love for you be just love. Nothing needs to change between us", Pragya slowly settled his head on the cot and went to attend her cookpot.

"I will get you some green soup. Be a good boy and drink it, alright?" she said as if nothing had changed.

Abhi couldn't see her clearly with his tears fogging his eyes.

Edited by -Tia- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hehe green soup

so glad you wrote this!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tia this would have been better to see than the shows confession, the show was good but this was better! <3

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