Abhigya:SS:The Girl Nobody Loved: COMPLETE

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palbhar

@palbhar

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Could really feel the pain she was going through!!!! Good job!!!!

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WittyFlair

@WittyFlair

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

That was so slow and teasing and agonizingly angsty. And boy do I love angsty.

Brilliant work, can't wait for their confrontation to start!

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-Nimmy-

@-Nimmy-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

i am wordless fantastic awesome great excellent all these will be a understatement for u i really love the story looking forward to the next part

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Simmi

@--simmi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Loved this very much!! Do update soon!! <333

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richa1792

@richa1792

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

You are a poet, you know that?

And I love poets. :)

There's a beauty in the way you put up words.

The line about how time had actually stopped and hence couldn't slow down has to be my favourite from the whole update.

I love that Abhi realizes that he has no right to be there, I love that he still is. I love that Pragya tried to hate Abhi for what he did, I love that she wasn't successful. I love that Abhi looks up at her like she is a dream come true, like Venus coming out of the sea just for him. I love that Pragya looks at him like it's a nightmare and wonders if she is insane. I love that although Pragya still loves him, she is not a doormat. That her love is not a deterrent for her self respect. I love that your Abhi has enough depth to get the nuances about privacy. I love and I love and I love.

Just update the next chapter so I can gush about that too. :)

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

awesome update.. please update soon.. :)

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Pratyusha

@pratyu29

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Awesome update

I love the way you penned it

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advena

@advena

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -DA-
Omggg this is really good

Thank You!!😆

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advena

@advena

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Martinski-
Okay wow wow wow!
The way you have written it and presented it with those beautiful poems/excerpts and the descriptions are all oh so lovely !

Exciting to see this kinda stoey!

The excerpts are actually lyrics from a song called Unbreakable by Jamie Scott, but they are achingly beautiful aren't they? Thank you for reading and reviewing!😳