Confessing love to Chashmish -AbhiGya TS- 23/03 -Part 3- pg8-Completed - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: renukha871

Just read both chapters and I LOVE LOVE LOVE them. Can I just say Bulbul-Aaliyah-Purab are way more fun than Abhi-Pragya!!! Uff!! Loved it so much! Thank you Diahh for sharing this. Can't wait for the next chapter


Awww!! Thank you so much Renu!! 😳 Glad to know you loved it!

Haha! I agree the trio is more fun than AbhiGya here! Lol!

Originally posted by: MinMinMehra

Dhinglu! I love you! Soo cute!!!! Please let bb, aliyah and purab torture abhi abit longer...how cute he was listening to her talk about her research thing! Giving me such good feels ...thank you! Excited for the next part!


MinMin Mehra!!!🤗Love you too!! And thank you for this lovely comment!! Haha! Yes! The torture continues!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow awsm update

loved it
very nicely written
continue soon


Aww! Thank you Humzy!! Glad to know you loved it!! ⭐️

Originally posted by: sara7iris

wow diah!!!!!!! wonderful and perfect ...I love it
I love the conspiracy aliya and Purab bulbul and the confusion of pragya and when abhi has request 5 reason

I looked forward to read more from you


IRIS!!! 🤗 Thank you darling for this lovely comment!! So glad that you loved the update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Wow...awesome update😊

Loved it!!


Thank you so much!! 😃Glad to know you loved it!

Thank you so much! ⭐️

Originally posted by: bhanu_frn

Just loved it... Abhi's jealousy... Oh it's just makes the day... Update soon Diah...


Thank you Bhanu! 😃 Good to know you loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: simsim25

Hahaha! 5 reasons lol!! I loved this so much!! Can imagine this scene!! Your description of purab aliya and bulbul bonding is fab!! This was amazing!!! Defo worth the wait and can't wait for more!!


Simi!! 😃 Haha! Ah yaa DB being DB! 😆 Thank you so much for the lovely comment! Means a lot! 😃

Originally posted by: rbb1

Nice update Aww poor abhi so confused but he needs to let Pragya talk and explain what she is really happy about

I like how Aaliyah Purab and Bulbul are a team they are funny


RAY!! ⭐️ Yes! Abhi so confused ATM. But soon he will know..😉 Glad to know you like it! Thank you Ray! 😃

Originally posted by: abhigya2003

Update Soon I Love It , You should think about turning it into an FF😃😛😔


Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: kubare

Diah...Love You *hugs*

Love Min for getting you to continue with the drabble that we all loved because the Trio Aliyah Purab Bulbul are just too damn good and cute...to cute..and love love how you have carried forward their cuteness with their receptive personalities...Love Love Love them...

Awww...what can one say about Abhi...😆 5 Reasons indeed...😆😆😆


Pragya's reaction to Abhis odd behaviour...😆

DB (Suresh, not Dhusto Bums😆) uncomfortable with Abhi's stare...he should be...very very scared...😆

And what I loved Best...Bulbuls reaction on seeing Abhis reaction to DB...😆Everyone was worried she was excited to se him beaten...😆to cute

Could see it all...each and every characters reaction facial expression...you truly are wonderfully skilled and talented writer...👏

Till the next part then ...


KRISH!!!❤️ Love you too!! And grizzly bear hugs!!

Awww!!Your comments always make my day! And this is no less! Thank you for the lovely detailed comment!!⭐️ Means a lot!!So happy to read the points that you loved in the story and I am so glad to know you loved the update!

Finally finished the story after ages! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Thank you!😃

Originally posted by: lasyap3

🤣

Fantastic five 😆

Five reasons eh,?

Actually I am loving this ...

Jealous+Confusion+misleading = Abhi's State at present 😆

Great job Diyu..



Hey Lasya!!😃 Thank you! Glad to know you are loving this!


Thank you!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: quirky_senorita

Awesome loved it.

continue.soon...


Aww! Thank you! I am glad! 😃


Originally posted by: -kanishka-

This is sooo cute. 👏
❤️☺️
☺️



Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Nice story
Super cute
Thanks


Thank you!! 😃

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

awesome..

plz continue soon


Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: MarGan

OMG!! Diah...such an awesome story...You rocked👏...
Abhi is too confused and jealous when he thought Pragya marrying DB😆...
Pragya is also confused why abhi is asking all the nonsense questions😆...
Suresh is like 😕...

But the trio of BB,Purab,Aliya are like 🤣...

Love too see what awaits for Abhigya😳😛...
Please update soonnn ❤️...


Hello GB!!! 😃

Thank you so much Bhai for the lovely comment!! ⭐️ So happy to see you here! And glad to know you loved the updates!!⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Guys! 😃First of all so sorry for taking this long to update. And thank you all for the lovely comments and likes they always make my day!⭐️

So finally here you go with the final part! It was kind of long so I divided it in to two parts.

Okay, then do read and let me know what you think of the ending!😳

This one is dedicated to all of you, the amazing readers!🤗

Happy Reading!

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Confessing Love to my Chashmish...

AbhiGya TS

Part 3- I

What is going on?

Pragya wondered as she stared at Abhi.

He is such a drama queen!

Pragya internally groaned as Abhi continued to act oblivious to the deathly glares she sent his way.

Pragya turned her glance to the trio, letting them know her frustration through unspoken words. They gestured her to go along with whatever he was doing.

Yeah! Right! Let's all feed Rockstar's ego!

If it was any other day Pragya would have dealt with his ego in a totally different yet so amusingly satisfying way. But no! Not today! She didn't want to create a scene. Especially not in front of a colleague!

Her stubbornness was reserved only for him. Or rather to his ego.

"Okay so give me 5 reasons!"

He repeated his insane demand once again.

Okay Rockstar! If you are Abhi Mehra, then don't forget I am Pragya Arora! I am not going to let you get away with this that easy!

"Well! You want 5 reasons, right? I will give you 5 reasons!"

"Excuse me Pragya. I just remembered I have got to leave now. It's urgent!"

Suresh tried his best to avoid the impending confrontation. These two definitely have some issues to sort out.

"No Masterji stay where you are!"

"No Suresh! I am sure you can wait 5 minutes more!"

Both Abhi and Pragya spoke at the same time trying to stop Suresh from leaving. He settled back in his chair looking uneasy.

"Well! Reason 1! He is smart!"

Pragya almost laughed out loud seeing his reaction to her words.

Ha! How is that Rockstar? Pragya knew for some stupid reason Abhi always felt insecure around Suresh. She really couldn't understand the reason for his insecurity till slowly it became evident that Abhi envied Suresh for being "smart".

Pragya knew Abhi is not the smartest person she knew. But that does not mean he is any less! He is definitely not a bookish person. But smartness didn't lie in books! Smartness lies in the way you deal with life.

He hated what he heard but he didn't respond. Okay Rockstar let's check your patience!

"Reason 2! Suresh is the most hardworking guy I have ever met! He gives his 100% to everything he does."

"Eyyy Chashmish! Hello! Abhi Mehra!" Pragya kept her expression blank as Abhi pointed at himself.

"Abhi THE Rockstar! 25 years! Several chart toppers! Hits! Awards! Music Company! All achieved from scratch! And still you say he is the most hardworking guy you have ever met!? Can you guys believe this?"

Abhi finished his rant by directing a question at the trio.

Of course he IS the most hard working guy she has ever seen! Abhi!

Hasn't she been right there with him all these years as he struggled day after day to achieve his dream!? Didn't he know she was the happiest when he achieved it all!? His accomplishments mattered more to her than to him!

He knows it! Then why all this? And why is he comparing himself with Suresh? Suresh out of all the people...

Strange!

Pragya tried to make sense out of his actions.

It's almost as if he is jealous of Suresh! Is he jealous? Jealous of Suresh? But why? What could be the reason?

"Okay Di what is the third one?" Bulbul's question broke Pragya's train of thoughts.

"Huh? What? Oh! Third one! He is dedicated!"

"Dedicated? Well, maybe to his work! But what about you? Dedicated to you?"

What dedicated to me? What is going on? Pragya's confusion continued to escalate.

"Huh? Abhi, what is going...?"

"Hey Masterji what is her favourite colour? Song? Book?"

Suresh looked from Pragya to the trio. When no help came he decided to face the devil alone.

"I... I don't know. How would I know...?"

"You don't know?"

Suresh gulped nervously hearing the intensity behind the question directed at him and shook his head at the Rockstar.

Abhi turned his gaze to Pragya.

"Are you out of your mind? I thought you are a smart girl! Smartest girl I knew! Didn't you even think once about this? He doesn't know anything about you! And he doesn't even pretend he is interested!"

"What are you talking about Abhi!? I don't know for some reason... It's as if you are taking this in a wrong way and overreacting and..."

"Overreacting?"

Hearing the intensity in Abhi's voice, Pragya stopped mid sentence.

"You think I am overreacting?" He repeated the question.

"Of course! What is wrong with you Abhi?"

"I can't believe this Chashmish! What is wrong with me!?? Really?"

Abhi gave a mirthless laugh looking at everyone present, before turning to Pragya.

"What the hell is wrong with you Chashmish! First you didn't even think of me once and went and agreed to get married to this idiot."

Suresh shifted in his chair and wished he was invisible to all seeing the delusional Rockstar with obvious anger management issues pointing at him. What made him think he and Pragya are getting married? Obviously, delusional!

"And then you tell everyone about it except me! Didn't you even think once about me before deciding all this Chashmish!? Once! All these years there is nothing hidden between us! But you very conveniently choose not to tell me that you are getting married! Your biggest decision in life! And after all this you are asking me what is wrong with me!"

Abhi waited for an answer but seeing that she wasn't going to respond anytime soon turned away in frustration, trying to calm down.

Pragya stared at Abhi trying to make sense of his outburst.

What! I am going to marry Suresh!? Marry? SURESH? What made him think like that? How could he even think like that? And what did he say... Everyone knew? Who?

Her chain of thoughts was broken by the noise of Abhi's hand thumping the door in anger as he left.

She heard Aaliyah gasping and turned towards her.

She narrowed her eyes suspiciously seeing the glee in Bulbul's face and discomfort in Purab's. Wait! She knew those looks!

The trio tried to compose themselves but Pragya's narrowed eyes already told it would be in vain now.

She shook her head disapprovingly as she followed Abhi.

Suresh paused only for a second before dashing out of the door away from all this drama much to the amusement of the trio.

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