The Black Anarkali | in progress | an AbhiGya SS by mina - Page 11

Originally posted by: hutanbandar

Yeay!!!!!! Tq.

Welcome 😃 Thanks for the comment ❤️ ⭐️

sigh - there's an obsessive part of me, the one that needs completion, that didn't want me to read until you finish it but the addictive part of me that just couldn't resist. obsession suffers, addiction wins. ah well

Originally posted by: frenzyy

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Prags and raghav friendship is something I adore here so much - so loved their light banter and the ease of their talking, silent reassurance, understanding gestures and communicating in a language which only a true friend can understand.. totally love the two!

True that, prags never realizes his jealousy is for her - she assumes it to be directed towards tanu - and aint she right in her conclusion? her hubby is "missing" for most of the nights and they haven't shared a single convo after the whole mms thing.. its not even like aalu-chashmish bonding where chashmish was persistent in her efforts to connect with the nanand.. she never did that with abhi - so although prags wanna abhi to be like a husband she is still somewhere trying to protect herself from another heartbreak and risks wearing her heart on the sleeve.. she is cautious, practical and doesn't wanna take chances knowing that this relationship comes with an expiry date.. But in spite of all this - she is captivated by him nonetheless - irrespective of what she is doing she always ends up checking on him from time to time -albeit silently to see what he is up to - hold his gaze forgetting the world around - even when the table is filled with other people - it is his thoughts, reactions, actions that have a direct impact on her and something she cares about.. she loves him no doubt, but still debating with her mind.. And your abhi broods more and talks less😉 and like chashmish says he has such a huge ego that we dont know what is running in his mind.. how will the poor girl understand him?😳 but looking at the way he said "haan, main" it would have sent a chill down her - totally excited for their dance, talk and with a jealous and possessive abhi you can simply expect everything!

Jus couldn't resist reading the both the chapters again before reading this update.. So take your time to update - shall wait eagerly.. Can never miss any of your stories!! Simply love them all - cant pick any favorites as its an extremely tough call but defo waiting for the next part of "hook up" as you said it would be up soon😳

Don't remember the number of times I have re-read your KB stories, your collabs with tia and yaariiyan.. speaking of yaariyan -Is it in the pipeline for update anytime soon? Simply captivated by all your stories, each one of them is soo soo awesome!! I take a bow!! Hats-off👏👏👏 Kudos to you!!

Aww frenzyy!! Where do I even start 😳 ❤️ 🤗

It's a challenge for me to write Pragya and Raghav's friendship, because I've never really had a guy friend like that, so I can't draw from reality. It means a lot to hear that reading it gives you a good sense of the bond between them!

You know, I really have to thank you for opening my mind to something...I never really thought about how Prags hasn't been making an effort to connect with Abhi, in comparison to how she tried to keep a relationship with Aalu. I was thinking more that after all that happened, she was just keeping a protective distance (as you also described quite beautifully), and the problem was with him not seeing her for what she is. But how can Abhi reach her, if she's closed to begin with? The rest of the story will still be more about showing how Abhi finally does start to want to reach her, but I'll be thinking about this Pragya side of things and maybe I can work something in about that too 😊

And yes, we have a very broody Abhi here...perhaps he's angry with me, that I chose to tell the whole story from Pragya's perspective, so that's why he hasn't been saying much? 😆 But yes, he has some savage things to say to Pragya during their dance, and eventually he'll have some kind of fight with Raghav...so we'll hear from him, when it's time 😉

Thank you so much for reading all my stories 😳 If you say Hookup is your favourite, I will be right there with you 😃. Definitely hoping to update that this calendar year...but I am running out of days 😲

As for Yaariyan, we wrote about half a chapter back in January, but neither Ish nor I have been inspired to finish it in all these months. So nothing coming on that soon, unfortunately, but maybe when she's back from break I'll check in with Ish and see if we can finish that part we started 😆

Thank you beyond words for your support and encouragement, frenzyy 🤗

Originally posted by: rutu83

sigh - there's an obsessive part of me, the one that needs completion, that didn't want me to read until you finish it but the addictive part of me that just couldn't resist. obsession suffers, addiction wins. ah well

awesome part - knew abhi would react like that but that end part surprises me. i didn't think he'd go after her in the party itself. i thought he'd drag her out.

i knew you were writing about aly lol. agree they'd make cute dancing jodi.

continue soon

Aww rutu...you know me of old by now, na? If you're going to wait for completion, it's going to be years. Lucky for me that your addictive part won out 😆

I totally get what you mean about Abhi trying to drag her out of the party, but as much as he wanted to, I couldn't let him. Need to take advantage of the setting for a few more scenes, and then we'll see what happens when/if they're alone together again...!

And lol about knowing it was Aly! Completely whimsical, but I'm so glad the thought came to me. Maybe someday we'll see that dance, if EK ever does some cross-network maha mash 😃

Thank you for reading and commenting. Will keep your suffering obsession in mind and hope not to delay completion much longer. 🤗

Wht a treat !! Mina finally updated blak anarkali 😊

What a wonderful surprise to find this update at last,it's an awesome chapter Mina

Wow after a long long looong wait u updated

hey Mina!!!
finally u updated this fiction 😛
I loved it very much 😊
I'm fan of ur writings
u left us hanging
pls do continue soon

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Wht a treat !! Mina finally updated blak anarkali 😊

Thanks for sparing time to write this Mina...🤗

Loved it ...raghav's way of revenge on abhi 😆...pragya danced !! That too with 3 guys including raghav😃...was grinning like this 😃 while reading it... Thanx for getting rid of one of the minus point of pragya ie dancing , which abhi used to hurt her ...now he came to her for dancing with her 😃...loved it...I don't care abt his intention..jealous or angry...I feel we r in treat in the next chapter ..

Waiting started for the next one

Heehee I am so happy you enjoyed! I am excited for the next chapter, it's like a treat for me too, hopefully that means it writes itself soon 😆

Yes, Prags dancing with three guys...I thought, you know, that is kind of normal for a gala...but not normal for the show, so I'm glad I could show something fresh 😉

Yes Abhi has come to her, but he might not be done hurting her...in some way or another. Let's see!

Thank you for the lovely comment viji!! Big hugs back!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Nora9497

What a wonderful surprise to find this update at last,it's an awesome chapter Mina

Waiting eagerly for the next one where Abhi will vent his Jealousy and Anger on her( maybe he discover that he loves his wife not his ugly supermodel

Heehee thank you so much Nora!! It wasn't in the original plan but now I am trying to think of if I can make Abhi and the supermodel break up before this story ends...you inspire me for that 😉 So glad you enjoyed, thank you for the kind words. Hope to have more for you soon 😃