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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Diahh you know I'm a fan of yours so no need to tell you again.. I like it so much specially the last line (I step into Mehra Mansion.) so powerful and terrifying

I know that you are talking about the fire accident but nevertheless I feel the anticipation..and the fear of what is going to happen when bhagya make a direct intervention... so poogy

please continue



Awww Nuha!! 😃 So sweet of you!! Thank you for this lovely comment!⭐️ And yes first I was thinking of fire incident when this idea came to me. But then I thought I really dont want it to go that far. So changed it a bit. Wrote a second part to this. Would love to know what you think of that as well.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: OindrilaVirgoan

Diaaahhh...this was brilliantly done..totes fab and rad!!! I had this huge smile through out reading this!!


Bhagya really needs to step up her game..so glad you presented us bhagya's pov..also good to know that she has been trying to go all out for the two idiots here rather than vacationing in the Bahamas with a pincaolada, as I was wondering..!!!
You go, Bhagya..rock it gal!!!



O!!! So glad to know you enjoyed it!! 😃 thank you for the lovely comment! And lol!! Bhagya vacationing in Bahamas with a pinacaolada!!👍🏼😆 What even!! 😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MinMinMehra

Omg Dhinglu! I love you! Beautiful bhagya os! Very creative..no one would have known you're sick if you hadn't mentionned it...the magic is still there...absolutely loved it...private message me formula 4-998...

Big tight hug and kiss for you!



MinMin Mehra!😉 I posted this for you!! Told you I am not going to post this crazy story but then suddenly thought hmmm lets see what others say about this!😆 Thank you MMM! Glad to know you loved it!

And yeah I will PM you the other formulas!😆😉😆 Lots of love and hugs to you behena!❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara7iris

diah it's was fab and awesome ...I love it... Diah you are really crazy girls ..I laugh when I was reading your OS... 🤣...I can't wait to read more from you



IRIS!!😃😉😆 Thank you! Glad that it could make you laugh! 😉😆 Wrote a second part to this! Would love to know your view!😛



Originally posted by: indi

Thank you Diahh... I so enjoyed that ... 😆 ... loved the insight into the workings of Bhagya!!!!! Maybe we can now appreciate all the hard work 😃... What a relief from all the current drama !!!!!



INDI!!😃 Thank you so much for the lovely comment! Glad to know you loved it!😃 Haha should appreciate all the hardworks of Bhagya! I agree!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diahh

😛

DMB!!😆😆😆

Abhi's baby sister!!?? She is definitely a part!😉 And you never know there could be new entries too! 😉😆


Indu Daasi will be there na? I mean me!😛
Very interesting idea! Can't wait for your to ultimately have the last laugh Ms Bhagya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys!😉 So this is the second part! Can't keep it in! So thought of penning it down and letting it go!😆

There is another final part to this story. So this will be a TS! 😃

Happy Reading!⭐️

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Bhagya Intervenes...

AbhiGya TS

Part II

I walk in to the mansion.

Amidst all the flower baskets and workers I see one of the complications' actually working for a change. She is putting roses while standing in a stool. But what is this? More than the flowers she is interested in the person or rather with our Rockstar standing nearby so engrossed in his phone. Hmm... Okay so this is the plan! Well too bad Miss ex- super model you won't succeed!

The said ex supermodel falls into the ground. Hmm... That was too easy! If it was some other day I would not care at all but since it is Direct Intervention day why not go all the way?

Now where is her Bhagya? Oh there he is! Robin! Take the hint Miss Ex-Super Model!

I was just about to follow Rockstar and Chashmish when I heard the other complication' enquiring about food! Huh? Since when is she so interested in all this? Of course! The wedding preparations!

I should probably go and intervene with my two idiots but my feet carry me towards the complication, only to realize that it is a mini reunion of the Complications. Okay! So what have we got here! Oh ya! A slight bumping into the workers and an Ouch' later I hear the ex super model speaking of some Saazish! I froze!

What after all this time you are telling me the dumbest girl in earth recognized my presence! I am surprised! I am surprised that she got some brain hidden underneath all that make up! But no! False alarm! Biggest complication assures that nothing could go wrong in their plan and the other two sigh in relief! Well, Aaliyah never underestimate the power of... okay, okay common man and Bhagya!

And enough with these distractions! They are fun! But I better focus on the main target!

I walk upstairs.

Chashmish sits on the bed silent tears running down her pretty face. Uff! Where is that girl who challenged me and respected me at the same time! Where is that fierce tigress that made an impression on me!

"Chashmish! Get up!"

She looks at me startled.

"Huh? Who are you? Please just go away!"

"What you are telling me to go away after I came from this far for you?" I can't believe this girl.

"I don't care how far you came from. I don't want to get married again. Just let me be!"

"Okay Chashmish see here! It is like this! I agree! You don't have to get married again. But I can't just let you be like this! Well, it is not possible! See, I am your Bhagya!"

I try to make her understand.

"Err... Okay Bhagya. I am sorry I don't recognize you. But there is so much going on in my life right now..."

"Whoa! Wait! I am not any Bhagya! I am THE Bhagya! Well, you have been having monologues with me for the past few months..."

"What do you mean? Like in Kumkum Bhagya! Bhagya Bhagya?"

She asks surprise written all over her face.

"Well... Yes! Hello!" I extend my hand.

"Where the hell have you been all this while? Huh? I called you many times! And now you come when there is nothing left to be saved!"

"Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! Slow down Chashmish!"

This is so not the response I expected from a direct intervention case! Maybe that is why this Formula is never used till date!

"Okay Chashmish! Let me make few things clear to you! Come sit here!"

She obliges.

"Let me tell you a story. Nah... It won't take long and you really need to hear this story."

I tell her when she tries to protest.

"There was this girl I met once. A highly educated 28 year old girl. You wouldn't have stop to look at her twice. But that doesn't mean she was not a beauty. Oh she was a beauty. But it was hidden. Her inner beauty exceeded her outer beauty. She went through lots of hardships. She didn't have a father figure when she grew up. She didn't have suitors running behind her when she reached her age. Her engagements broke one after the other. There were new problems to deal with each day. But you know what she never gave up! Never!

She was never afraid to stand up to what she believed to be the correct thing. She cared for her family more than anything. She would appear as a fragile young girl but she had the strongest willpower in the world.

So one day I met this girl! I saw her walking away from a marriage which demanded her mother's marriage hall as the dowry. No need to say how impressed I was. I decided to personally look into the girl's case. And what I found was nothing short of mind blowing! I kept tabs on the girl's story checking once in a while to know what is happening. Well, I made interventions where it was necessary, of course! And you can't blame me because I was just doing my job!

The girl got married. Moved to her sasural. Continued to spread her beauty there too...

So, I was very happy with all this when suddenly the girl I knew disappeared in to thin air. I looked for her all over the place. But couldn't find her anywhere."

"What happened to her?"Chashmish ask me hesitantly.

"Well, you tell me!"

"What?" She asks me.

"Yes. You tell me! You tell me what happen to this girl? I would like to know too."

"But how can I know? You are the Bhagya! You decide it all. You know what happens to her! Please tell me what happens in the end!"

"Well, true! I am Bhagya! But that doesn't mean I write your story. It is your story! So it's you who write the story. Well, it is true that I intervene in your story every once in awhile but that does not make it my story. Do you get what I mean Chashmish?"

She looks at me blankly.

"Oh come on Chashmish! I know you are a Mehra now but that does not justify you acting so dumb. Come on focus! I showed you the way! Now you decide what you want to do! Follow your heart and I promise I will help you!"

"I don't want to get married to Suresh!"

"Okay! Good! So then make it stop! Fight back!"

She looks at me for a second and nods her head determinedly.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-


Indu Daasi will be there na? I mean me!😛
Very interesting idea! Can't wait for your to ultimately have the last laugh Ms Bhagya.



Thank you DMB! Indu Daasi will be there in the final part! 😉 And lol @ Ms Bhagya! 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You wrote another part...just when I was thinking in my head
*min, Dhinglu is sick, you cannot be so demanding as to have her not make this a one shot...she is sick...you want to know what happens but you can't ask right now*


Yes Dhinglu that is the conversation I head in my head...with my self... And you heard it! Thank you thank you...loved it...bhagya is going all out to help stupid rockstar and his crying chashmish!

Any chances of changing it to a three shot(you don't even have to change the title😆)

I want to squish you with my love!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you for the update 2nd part spite you are sick...Finally bhagya put some sense into the head of pragya ...amazing and wonderful TS ...I looked forward to read the next part ...thank you again for this update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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diyuuu!! fever and crack go hand in hand, hain na?!! heehee love this story, especially pt 2 and bhagya talking to pragya. maybe the silly girl will get some himmat now, some daring?! and i looove how bhagya refers to the "complications" 🤣 very fun, funny, smart and witty story chotu!! brava and yay! and more soon please ;) ps take care of yourself!! lots of fluids and rest right! for my part i have been sleeping instead of writing and i finished a 1.75L jug of orange juice all by myself in the last 24 hrs XD
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