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I wrote something and wanted to share it with you.I know this is a domain of an elite .. but I hope you will not even try to compare me with mina,Tia, diahh or ishi.. that will not be fair for them or me I'm just a newbie trying to learn from the best.. If you liked my work let me Know and if not also let me know it will mean a lot to me and remember ( the bad is also good because it will make you appreciate "the best" more) said by me
Abhi is driving all of us crazy these days..no one can even guess what is he up to.. but we keep guessing any way.. I feel that he is setting the stage to reveal the truth about the MMS.. and I have a hunch that he is targetting Tannu.. even I find my hunch soo week sometimes and nothing of it will happen in the show.. but I like the Idea of expressing my self like this it help me vent and it is fun so why not
The wedding is cancelled
Abhi in a full black suit and a red tie standing upstairs looking down at the main hall of mehra mansion mentally checking the details
*important details ..
1- : all the Arora family members are here. (checked)
2-.. all his family members (except dadi of course) are here-he even invited Purab- (checked)..
3- the stage is ready ( lights, mandap, pandit ) (checked)
* small and insignificant details ( only one detail actually)
1- the groom (checked)
it took him 2 hectic days but he is so satisfied with the final results "now let me go get the bride" ...he was walking to his room when he saw Aaliya and Tannu coming his way and immediately put on his ( custom designed smile) made specially for them " girls.. are you ready? I'm going to bring the bride.. O.M.G I'm finally going to get rid of that chashmish for good"
Tannu hugged him and said " yes.. yes Abhi finally.. and then we are going to be together, nothing and no one will stop that.. "
" yes baby.. that is the spirit..chashmish will be out and you will be in you will make sure of that right " ? Abhi said with a mysterious smile and a more mysterious look .. she gave him the biggest and dumbest smile in her collection and said " of course ".. Aliya looked so uncomfortable but did not say anything.. she can smell a ratte but for the first time in her life she can not figure it out
Abhi goes to his room to bring Pragya down.
( there was a lot of drama, tears, emotions, a hug, and they were even busy taking things off and putting them on again - I mean Chashma, mangalsutra -😉 )
Abhi and Pragya came down..he helped her to sit beside Suresh and moved back to stand near by. he looked at the angry faces of the aroras and moved his eyes from one face to the other while whishpiring " I'm sorry,I'm sorry" then he looked at Pragya's face and a cold icy hand gripped his heart..the sadness can be defined by the look in her face at this moment.. but he can not stop now.. so he whispered again" I'm deeply sorry..but I'm doing this for you"
when the pandit was about to open his mouth Abhi suddenly jumped on the mandap in a very theatrical way and shouted " just a minute panditji.. how can you start the show without the rockstar.. I'm the rockstar.. let me perform" ( Abhi took about 10-15 minutes talking about true love and that Pragya and Suresh love each other and the MMS that prove their love. and how their story touched him and he wanted to help them Blah Blah Blah.." dramatic pause then proceed "that was the drama now let me show you tragedy... Pragya accepted to marry me but continue to meet her lover even in my house, and in my room and when I found out because there is someone good out there caught them red handed and exposed them to me.. she decided to divorce me and go back to her ashiq and here they are ready to get married... look at them are not they look so cute aww" ( another 5 minutes of Abhi talking nonsense ) then he said " to cut this long story short...I changed my mind.". another dramatic pause . Abhi 's eyes moving around, slightly focusing on Tannu's face and kept talking "why would I help them when they made fool out of me... if they just wait I was going to end this marriage my self.. but to do what they did in my house, in my room, in my bed..I will never forgive them for that." he looked at Pragya and Suresh's direction.. I will make you bay for that.. Suresh I will suie you and by the time I'm finished with you you will not even remember her name ( Abhi to himself : thank God I check IF , AT girls you are awesome and you deserve a hug from me),gave himself a mental shake, then proceed " and you Pragya your punishment is that you will stay here in this house and in this marriage for ever.. after what you did I will never ever give you a divorce.. you tow are not going to get married not today not ever." now facing the others "sorry guys the wedding is cancelled"
every body was shocked and silent.. Abhi took Pragya's hand and pulled her up looked deep into her eyes and said "ready ?" she was so confused but speechlessly followed him away from Suresh.. they only took about 3 steps when they heard the squeaky voice of Tannu shouting " stop..Abhi stop.. they did not make fool out of you.. that MMS was fake.. they are innocent.. Aalyia and mittali did it"... all heads turn to Aaliya.. " what rubbish Tannu..stop lying just because you want to get rid of bhabhi and marry bhai "
" I'm not lying Abhi.. I can prove it"..with another round of painful squeaks Tannu revealed the one and only clever Idea (after which 90% of her few working brain cells burned out severely).." she made a copy of the surveillance camera footage CD after steeling it from Pragya and before mittali destroy it"
The MMS mystery solved thanks to Tannu. End of the story now
near future (as in the same day )Aaliya, Tannu and mittali : huge cats fight so violent to tell about ( hair pulling , nail scratching every where, biting etc etc)
far future ( not so far though.. as we hate dragging ) Abhi and Pragya : lots of love ,love , happy love so hot to tell about ❤️ 😳
P.S :
1- Abhi gave the AT girls a long distance hug.. because the girls discussed the Indian marriage and divorce laws in the KKB AT and pointed that a man can sue another man if he had an affair with his wife 😡
2- I used some Hindi words.. sorry if I used them wrong😕
3- if you felt that Abhi's dialogue sound familiar..you are probably right I'm trying to mimic him as much as I could with my week Hindi )😛
4- I focused on the dialogue rather than actions and emotions ..but you know Abhi so just read and picture him...for Tannu I believe " squeaking" is enough to sum it up🤪
Abhi is driving all of us crazy these days..no one can even guess what is he up to.. but we keep guessing any way.. I feel that he is setting the stage to reveal the truth about the MMS.. and I have a hunch that he is targetting Tannu.. even I find my hunch soo week sometimes and nothing of it will happen in the show.. but I like the Idea of expressing my self like this it help me vent and it is fun so why not
The wedding is cancelled
Abhi in a full black suit and a red tie standing upstairs looking down at the main hall of mehra mansion mentally checking the details
*important details ..
1- : all the Arora family members are here. (checked)
2-.. all his family members (except dadi of course) are here-he even invited Purab- (checked)..
3- the stage is ready ( lights, mandap, pandit ) (checked)
* small and insignificant details ( only one detail actually)
1- the groom (checked)
it took him 2 hectic days but he is so satisfied with the final results "now let me go get the bride" ...he was walking to his room when he saw Aaliya and Tannu coming his way and immediately put on his ( custom designed smile) made specially for them " girls.. are you ready? I'm going to bring the bride.. O.M.G I'm finally going to get rid of that chashmish for good"
Tannu hugged him and said " yes.. yes Abhi finally.. and then we are going to be together, nothing and no one will stop that.. "
" yes baby.. that is the spirit..chashmish will be out and you will be in you will make sure of that right " ? Abhi said with a mysterious smile and a more mysterious look .. she gave him the biggest and dumbest smile in her collection and said " of course ".. Aliya looked so uncomfortable but did not say anything.. she can smell a ratte but for the first time in her life she can not figure it out
Abhi goes to his room to bring Pragya down.
( there was a lot of drama, tears, emotions, a hug, and they were even busy taking things off and putting them on again - I mean Chashma, mangalsutra -😉 )
Abhi and Pragya came down..he helped her to sit beside Suresh and moved back to stand near by. he looked at the angry faces of the aroras and moved his eyes from one face to the other while whishpiring " I'm sorry,I'm sorry" then he looked at Pragya's face and a cold icy hand gripped his heart..the sadness can be defined by the look in her face at this moment.. but he can not stop now.. so he whispered again" I'm deeply sorry..but I'm doing this for you"
when the pandit was about to open his mouth Abhi suddenly jumped on the mandap in a very theatrical way and shouted " just a minute panditji.. how can you start the show without the rockstar.. I'm the rockstar.. let me perform" ( Abhi took about 10-15 minutes talking about true love and that Pragya and Suresh love each other and the MMS that prove their love. and how their story touched him and he wanted to help them Blah Blah Blah.." dramatic pause then proceed "that was the drama now let me show you tragedy... Pragya accepted to marry me but continue to meet her lover even in my house, and in my room and when I found out because there is someone good out there caught them red handed and exposed them to me.. she decided to divorce me and go back to her ashiq and here they are ready to get married... look at them are not they look so cute aww" ( another 5 minutes of Abhi talking nonsense ) then he said " to cut this long story short...I changed my mind.". another dramatic pause . Abhi 's eyes moving around, slightly focusing on Tannu's face and kept talking "why would I help them when they made fool out of me... if they just wait I was going to end this marriage my self.. but to do what they did in my house, in my room, in my bed..I will never forgive them for that." he looked at Pragya and Suresh's direction.. I will make you bay for that.. Suresh I will suie you and by the time I'm finished with you you will not even remember her name ( Abhi to himself : thank God I check IF , AT girls you are awesome and you deserve a hug from me),gave himself a mental shake, then proceed " and you Pragya your punishment is that you will stay here in this house and in this marriage for ever.. after what you did I will never ever give you a divorce.. you tow are not going to get married not today not ever." now facing the others "sorry guys the wedding is cancelled"
every body was shocked and silent.. Abhi took Pragya's hand and pulled her up looked deep into her eyes and said "ready ?" she was so confused but speechlessly followed him away from Suresh.. they only took about 3 steps when they heard the squeaky voice of Tannu shouting " stop..Abhi stop.. they did not make fool out of you.. that MMS was fake.. they are innocent.. Aalyia and mittali did it"... all heads turn to Aaliya.. " what rubbish Tannu..stop lying just because you want to get rid of bhabhi and marry bhai "
" I'm not lying Abhi.. I can prove it"..with another round of painful squeaks Tannu revealed the one and only clever Idea (after which 90% of her few working brain cells burned out severely).." she made a copy of the surveillance camera footage CD after steeling it from Pragya and before mittali destroy it"
The MMS mystery solved thanks to Tannu. End of the story now
near future (as in the same day )Aaliya, Tannu and mittali : huge cats fight so violent to tell about ( hair pulling , nail scratching every where, biting etc etc)
far future ( not so far though.. as we hate dragging ) Abhi and Pragya : lots of love ,love , happy love so hot to tell about ❤️ 😳
P.S :
1- Abhi gave the AT girls a long distance hug.. because the girls discussed the Indian marriage and divorce laws in the KKB AT and pointed that a man can sue another man if he had an affair with his wife 😡
2- I used some Hindi words.. sorry if I used them wrong😕
3- if you felt that Abhi's dialogue sound familiar..you are probably right I'm trying to mimic him as much as I could with my week Hindi )😛
4- I focused on the dialogue rather than actions and emotions ..but you know Abhi so just read and picture him...for Tannu I believe " squeaking" is enough to sum it up🤪
Anupamaa
