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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello People

So I am back with another One Shot😃

I know I should have Updated "Fix Me" but whenever I sit down to write this idea comes to my mind and I finally decided to write it down .. Hehe..

This actually is the result of how angry I am at Abhi right now, So if you think he is right then you might not like it.

Also, I will update the next part today in the evening, Or tomorrow latest.

Love

Nitya.

Prologue

"Sir, Pragya ma'am had asked for this footage before, well, she left. I thought it might have been important so I managed to restore this. " the security personnel said while handing Abhi a CD. Abhi looked up confused but nodded and asked him to leave. It was strange, he thought, tomorrow she is getting married to that double battery and still manages to make even the staff in my house feel for her. For some reason Abhi didn't have it in his heart to not watch the recording. "Well, anything is better than sitting idle." He said to himself. He was all alone at home. Daadi and her cousins had gone to Ludhiana. She said it was because she was missing home but he knew it was because that Chashmish wasn't here and she was missing her. He couldn't understand why his daadi was still so supportive of her. Aliya and Tannu were out partying. It was all they'd done ever since his divorce was finalized. Tayiji, Tauji and their family had gone to someplace, he couldn't care less about. Even Aakash was at Pragya's house helping them for the wedding. "To hell with everyone." He said to himself before starting the video and then all hell broke lose.

He saw Mitali Bhabhi putting the ball bearings on the stairs, Pragya falling down and then Suresh coming to her aide. The video was still running while the remote fell from Abhi's hands, he fell back on his bed, Oh God, what had he done?

So Do like and comment and let me know what you think.

In case you like it do check out my SS : Fix me

Edited by Nitya_Suresh - 10 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice the prologue Nitya can't wait to read the story

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Simmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is going to be awesome! Love the prologue and I'm sure I will love the story even more!!

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome nitya!! more soon please!

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roheena_d

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice one.pls continue 🥱 👍🏼

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indi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you, Nitya!!! Love the prologue!!! Please continue!!!!

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello people,
So here is the OS. On time haha.
I hope you guys like it. A fair warning though, it is a sad one because of all this hate I have for Abhi right now.. :/ I still hope you like this.
Do like and comment.
Love,
Nitya

Regrets

He stood there outside the window of her room. He wanted to see Pragya, to apologize to her. The drive from his home to hers had been the hardest in his life. All he had done to her ever since the MMS had been released, even before that started coming back to him, running in front of his eyes. It shamed him to no extent, when did he become such a monster. The taunts, the painful remarks, everything, every damn thing came back to him, finally his insistence on her marrying Suresh. What if he had seen the video after tomorrow, or not at all. He shivered at the thought. No! He got the video on time and now he is going to fix whatever he had done over the days, today. If only she gives you a chance, a voice inside his head said. "No, she will. I will beg her, get down on my feet and lick the very ground she stood on. I will do anything she says. Please, please just give me a chance Pragya, please. Just take me back." He had already seen the entire Arora family in the marriage hall. He didn't understand why they had left her alone a day before marriage but then he heard Bulbul say to Sarla Aunty that Pragya wanted to be alone. He saw how sad all of them were. And it is all because of you, the voice said. "And I will change it back."
He thought it was his best chance. He entered the house from the front door and entered her room. He looked around and saw her sitting on the floor next to the bed. He couldn't see her face only the back of her head covered with a veil. As he went closer he realized it was the same one she was wearing at their wedding. He almost smiled, she was thinking of their wedding. He felt hope bloom within his heart, maybe she will forgive him and come home with him. He went to her side and put his hand on her shoulder but suddenly she fell to the other side. He got scared and then he saw that the floor of her room was red, blood red. There was so much blood around that he felt nauseous. He checked to see where the blood was coming from and saw it. A huge slit across her wrist. "PRAGYA!!" He screamed. He took her in his arms and kept screaming for her. "HELP!! Pragya don't do this to me, please, Oh God please. Pragya!"

"DI?!" "PRAGYA?!" Her entire family came in. "Oh my God, what did you do to her? Di, wake up!" Purab screamed. Abhi looked on as they carried her away. Somehow, the veil got stuck in his wrist watch and fell into his hands. He looked at it and looked up. He saw them take her away from him and unconsciously followed them.

He didn't realize when or how he reached the hospital. He just sat there on the hospital bench and looked at the door of the operation theatre she was wheeled into. He just prayed and prayed that the doctor would come out any moment and tell him that his wife is OK and she can go home with him.

He didn't know how much time he'd been sitting there and then suddenly the doctor came out. He went up to him as did everyone else. The doctor looked at them sympathetically and said, "I am sorry, we couldn't save her. She is no more."

6 Months Later

Aaliya came out of her car and entered the facility. She went into a cabin. "Hello Ms. Mehra, please sit." The doctor greeted her. She sat on the chair and asked the same question she had been asking every week for the past six months, "Is there any improvement doctor?" "I am so sorry Ms. Mehra but no, he is the same." She just nodded and stood up. "Can I see him now?" "Yes, of course, but you know you cannot.." "I know." She said solemnly. They walked up to a small room with white walls and a huge mirror inside. There sat her brother, Abhishek Prem Mehra, the Rockstar but he wasn't him anymore, just the shell of a man she once called her brother. He was sitting on the same bed looking out of the same window holding on to the same red cloth mumbling, "I killed my Pragya." , like he did everyday since that day. She couldn't even go in because whenever he saw him he would go into a violent fit, throwing things, calling names and blaming her for conspiring against his Pragya and then he would start asking her to bring her back. So the doctor had refused to let her see him. Aliya wiped a stray tear and half walked, half ran towards her car. She sat back in ignoring the Doctor's calls. She sat in the car and cried, cried so loud that her shrieks scared the driver. She just wanted her brother to be alright soon because of how lonely her life had become. Tannu had left the day she heard of Abhi's illness, Daadi's fragile heart could not bear the news of Pragya's death and had a fatal attack and here she was, all alone. She didn't even have anyone to blame for this. It was all her and now nothing could ever fix this. If only she hadn't misunderstood Pragya, if only she'd seen the good in her, if only she'd not made that wretched MMS, she wouldn't have been so lonely. She had an entire family, a brother who adored her, a grandmother who had the kindest of hearts and a sister-in-law who was selfless. But she had destroyed it all. And now all she had as companions were regrets.

Do let me know if you like it.. :)

Edited by Nitya_Suresh - 10 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

Yay thank you for the update will read it soon

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Simmi

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Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow! Very heart touching! So sad made my eyes water! I liked it! The emotions and state of abhi at the end made me feel sorry for him and poor pragya!! Sad ending but I liked it!

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sarra

@sara7iris

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

wonderful, fab and it's very sad OS I really want to cry ...but I love it ...between the death of pragya and the state of abhi it's very touching this part of the story...I looked forward to read more story from you

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