One Shot : Best Is Yet To Come - Page 2

Originally posted by: MinMinMehra

Renu I'm going to be the first to say...

WWOOOWWW!!!!!

I lvoed it!! It was soo cute!! The flshback of how they became friends and lovers, while still being married. Then not wanting to go ahead with the divorce everything. I could picture everything! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful scene with us!! Wish there was a small epilogue as to what happened the next day when they went to get a divorce...who knows :)

But loved loved it!!!

Everything. I'll come by and comment again in detail!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

fantastic one shot

wow they were making new memories to start their life together again, awesome!

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Ahh, that was very nice, Renu. It all read so normal and real. I loved that they "separated" but bonded later on. Aaliyah's apology was so Aaliyah.

Thanks for including Pragya's snooping... lol. They never do that in the soap, so at least got to read that in a FF.

Originally posted by: rbb1

wow this is brilliant I like how you changed things and it was nice how they became friends first and get to know each other before they fell in love and said it to each other

I think it was nice how they kept everything quiet from the families and

didn't say anything to anyone it gave them the privacy they needed

it was nice how she says she feels young when she is around him

hope we get to read more stories from you

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Amazing Renu. Loved how you made fresh start of Abhigya relation after divorce drama that started as friends who shared everything about their childhood moments n all. Also loved they have kept their relation in dark . Loved how you made Abhi knowing truth from Aliya itself. Abhigya drive was awesome .

Renu! (can I call you that?) this was such a wonderful fic! How could you have thought this was blah?! like someone said upthread, it was so natural and real the development of their relationship. No fuss, no muss. Loved the line when Pragya says love feels so right and calm (not dramatic). I also really liked how your Pragya says many times "It's none of my business" - it's a trait that show-Pragya (and most TV serial heroines) sorely lack so it was nice to see a practical Pragya here! And that shirt scene was so delicious! Hope to read an epilogue to see what happens when the family finds out.

RENU!!!!! THIS WAS JUST PERFECT!!!!!

Originally posted by: -mina-

Adorable adorable adorable and perfect Renu! What a surprise treat thank you!! I loved Pragya's wry voice, loved how she went back to work and regained her sense of self, love how the thing with Abhi just started slowly, loved rebonding with Daadi and Aakash being instrumental and positive throughout. Of course loved the Aaliya scenes!! Difficult apology and a glimpse into the changes in her uff yay! Oh Renu the whole thing is so beautiful, it really got to my heart. And ultimately made me so happy. Thank you for a gorgeous start to my day/week! So much love to you!!! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: Diahh

RENU!!! RENU!! ADORABLE!!! SWEET!! DREAMY!!! ❤️

these are the words that come to my mind right now!!😳

Uff!! AbhiGya separation and then starting again as friends then lovers!!!!!Love it!!! going to beach!! Pragya loosening up! both happy! Laughing!! Oh I love this story!!!

Thank you so much for this beautiful story Renu and I am glad you shared it with us! Love to you behena!!🤗 ❤️