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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tanu leaks Pragya's MMS video on internet. People taunts her by calling her from bad names. Pragya decides to gives Abhi divorce.


Abhi is shocked by her decision.


Before leaving Pragya gives a piece of mind to Aliya and Tanu.


Pragya : You know what Aliya, I feel pity for you not angry


Aliya : Oh really its you who need to be pitied


Pragya : You have wealth, richness and family but


Aliya : But


Pragya : There will be time when you will not have love and that day you will be embarrassed to see yourself into mirror


Aliya : How dare you


Pragya : Don't you dare show me that finger, you will understand that one day and that day you will hold yourself responsible for ruining the life of your brother


She goes to Tanu and taunts her.


Pragya : You are very happy na I am leaving this house but remember one thing that your marriage will never last long because you are jealous and insecure and your would be husband is same like you (looks at Abhi who is in tears)


Tanu : Wait and Watch our marriage will definetly succeed


Pragya : Well all the best then


She seeks blessing from Dadi who controls her tears. She finally goes to Abhi and looks at him emotionally.


Pragya : Till today I thought you will understand me one day but you will never understand me


Pragya leaves the house and goes to her house


Abhi : I am ashamed to call you my sister


Aliya : Bhai , why are you taking her side


Abhi : You chose your revenge on a innocent girl over Dadi, but you know what you did will always embarrass me forever


Tanu : Abhi you should be happy that we kicked her out


Abhi holds her hand and drags her out of house.


Abhi : Don't ever show his digusting face ever to me or this family


Arora house


Bulbul tries to console Pragya who is like a broken soul showing no emotion.


Sarla : Beta please don't sit like this say something


Abhi comes to Pragya's house but Bulbul stops him.


Bulbul : What did you to come to see that my sis is alive or not , for your kind information she is alive


Abhi : Please let me see her once


Bulbul : No you already left her now you don't have right to see her , dadi you know di was begging her but he did not trust a little bit


Dadi : Bulbul calm down


Bulbul : No dadi, I know my sis never asked for big dreams, she always asked for life partner who will trust her and genuinely care for her but he don't deserve my sister


Purvi :Dadi pragys di is not in her room


Abhi : What


Everybody goes out to look for Pragya but does not find her. They lodge the complain in police. After sometime they find her injured on the road. The girl was bleeding from her whole body. Her family and Abhi are devastated to see her in that state. The police informs them that she had an accident from truck and she is no more.


The last word striked in Abhi's mind. He and Bulbul were not ready to accept the truth. Purab tries to control Bulbul and Abhi. Sarla is not able to bear the truth of her daughter's death. Dadi tries to console her.


Bulbul : No di, you cannot leave me and go please wake up


Purab : Bulbul please calm down


Akash : Bhai please say something


Abhi is in deep shock after realizing he lost his life forever. Akash gives Abhi the letter which Pragya left for him


Abhi,


I compromised this marriage for my mother. Even though we had many fights but I will take some of our good memories with me. You teached me how to live life for our own, how to laugh which I forgot in all these problems of my life. You gave me pain but with that taught me that life will be beautiful when we live for ourself sometimes. After staying with you I realized one thing that wishes never come true but I still thought I will make place in your heart one day. But when I saw that you did not trust me my faith was shattered, I have no complaint against you. I still won't hold anything bad for you . I freed you from this marriage for your happiness. Just remember this chasmish will always be with you.


Pragya


Aliya realizes her mistake when she sees her brother dying thousand death everyday. She remembers Pragya's words that she will be solely responsible for her brother's pain.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I absolutely loved this OS though the ending was extremely sad and made my eyes watery. Thank you for sharing such a heart touching and meaningful OS! I loved the last few lines where you explained aliya realising her mistake saying she saw her brother dying a thousand deaths every day! Words can't explain how sad I felt for Pragya who died thinking abhi didn't trust her and loved the letter she wrote to him!! Really felt for all of the characters in the story!!
Thanks for sharing!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! poor Pragya!! beautiful story Ash!⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you, ashpat, for yet another beautiful story!!! So heart rending, but yet so beautiful!! Also reminded me of what life is all about 😳!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi

Thank you, ashpat, for yet another beautiful story!!! So heart rending, but yet so beautiful!! Also reminded me of what life is all about 😳!!!




I never wrote such an intense story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing and very sad OS ...I love it ...abhi has paid a high price with the death of pragya... at the end I was sorry for him...I looked forward to read more OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sara I updated new part for the FF
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3

Sara I updated new part for the FF

ok ...I'm going to see it now...thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara7iris

amazing and very sad OS ...I love it ...abhi has paid a high price with the death of pragya... at the end I was sorry for him...I looked forward to read more OS



Glad to hear you liked it, I love writing OS more than FFs because in FFs you have to think a lot

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