AbhiGya SS - Shortening Distances

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Posted: 10 years ago

I started writing the fiction. But I don't exactly know whether it's nice or not? Whether I should continue or not? So, I decided to post it here. It's actually a very small part.. I hope you like it...

Please let me know whether it's nice or not. Please.

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Chapter - 1

"Bulbul, please. I can trust you right? Can't I can rely on my sister? Please don't tell this to your Jiju. I couldn't prove my self innocent so i have to this." said Pragya

"Yes Di I understand but Di... How can you? Didn't you think about me, maa, daadi? Di please don't do this." protested Bulbul

"Bulbul, please don't make my work more difficult than it already is.. "

"But.."

"Take care of yourself , daadi, and maa. Try to see that in your Jiju's family also everything is fine."

This conversation flashed back in Bulbul's mind as she thought what reasons she would have to make to convince her as well as her di's in laws family. She definitely would have to make up a fiction, she could no way tell the truth to them except for Purab, as she had to tell someone about this and Purab was the best person she could share this with. But as for now she has to convince both the family members about Pragya.

First, she decided to go to The Mehra Mansion and to face Daadi, Dasi, Abhi Jiju, Aliya and of course the so called family member Tanu..

Edited by apple123flower - 10 years ago

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smala

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved the start Apple.
Please do continue .
Can't wait to read what is going to happen next.

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sarra

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice and interesting start... pls do continue

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is very interesting I can't wait to read more, I like how Bulbul is there for her sister and she knows she can only trust Purab

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Posted: 10 years ago

Previous Part : Chapter 1

Part - 2

On her way, she met Suresh. She told Suresh that she was going to The Mehra Mansion. Suresh was adament that he too wanted to come with Bulbul.

On reaching The Mehra Mansion, Bulbul suddenly stopped near the gate. Suresh asked her " What happened Bulbul? Why did you stop? Are'nt we going to tell the truth to them? "

Bulbul sighed and answered " I don't think you should come with me, Suresh. It's our family matter. I suppse you can wait outside or go back home. I'll talk to them and tell you later."

"I'm not going back Bulbul. If you're not comfortable, I'll wait outside." said Suresh

Bulbul went inside The Mehra Mansion and the first person to see her was Aliya.

Definitely Aliya got furious.

"How dare you come here? Oh yes! You must have come here to take that behenji with you. But she is not here. I've not seen her for a long time. I think she lost hope after all the drama and she left without informing anyone.

"Aliya. Where is Abhi jiju? Where is dadi and everyone else? I want to talk to them about..."

"Of course about Pragya. Right?"

"Yes. So, Can you please call them? I would prefer talking to the elders of the family than you."

"No. You can't. Tell me what you have to say about that behenji. I'll convey it to them. I can definitely do this job for you.." said Aliya trying to control her anger.

"No. It's okay Aliya. I can do it myself."

Bulbul walks past Aliya ignoring her completely while Aliya just looked daggers at her.

Bulbul was about to open the door of the room in which daadi was lying down when the door opened and she found herself facing Abhi.

There were a few seconds of silence between the two but Abhi broke it first by asking " Bulbul? How are you? I mean what are you doing here?"

"Jiju actually... hmm.. I wanted to talk to you and daadi about Pragya di.." stammered Bulbul

"Shh, slowly Bulbul. Daadi is not well. She is critical. So I can't let you talk to her."

"It's okay jiju. but I need to talk to you atleast."

"Ok fine. Come with me."

Abhi closed the door slowly and walked to the main hall with Bulbul.

Next Parts : Chapter 3 || Chapter 4 || Chapter 5 || Chapter 6 || Chapter 7 || Chapter 8 ||

Edited by apple123flower - 10 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice update, so Bulbul is gone to talk to Abhi lets hope he listens to her

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smala

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved it Apple.
Thank you for the speedy update.
Glad that BulBul completely ignored I am Rockstar sister Aaliyah.
Wonder what does BulBul wants talk to Abhi about.
Please do update soon.

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sarra

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice and amazing update...cool BulBul ignored Aaliyah Looks like she is a maid or an stranger...nice one ...bulbul will speak with abhi Now is the time for truth...I'm really excited to know the subject of their talk...pls update soon