Abhi-Pragya one shot fiction: Sound Proofing - Page 5

Originally posted by: -mina-

@bold - seconded!!

Originally posted by: -Martinski-

Excuse me! HI!!

AS EVER YOU TOO HAVE BLOWN MY MIND AND THE UFF PARTS TIA !!!!! Elegant and amazing !

AND CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE ONE FOR THEIR ROOM 🤣 PLEASE LOL

My fav were also

"I always wanted this, I always dreamed of you in my arms, even when I hated you" professed Abhi running his fingers on her thighs he had just bared. "And I found my solace in your arms even when you hugged me to just show the world" confessed Pragya hugging him tighter. "Who said those hugs were just to show the world?" chided Abhi making Pragya giggle. "There is something about you that fascinated me. Whether it was your glasses, your beautiful eyes, or the sexy frame that hid under those umbrella like dresses, I have been so occupied by you" Abhi said kissing her forehead. "And I have dearly cherished every little moment you were around me, whether fighting with me, or teasing me" Pragya added feeling emotional.pregnant today. It's not the middle of my cycle. But would you mind if we have a baby?"

The thought of a baby suddenly hit Abhi and his heart felt full at that. He had never thought about having children but the idea of her as the mother of his babies sounded perfect. "I want to make 100 Chashmish rockstar babies with Chashmish" smiled Abhi earning a similar smile from her. The next thought that crossed his mind thrilled him as he was going to enter her without a barrier.

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

Of course the show won't have that, my bad, I meant that they should finally get together and acknowledge their love and marriage. and then make love(not on tv though :P)

I'm frankly getting a little bored with the atyachaar on "chashmish"; everyone must be..

Originally posted by: deefan

Tia, what a delightful story...I loved how the characters were just like how we know them but with their romantic sides explored.

Please write one of them at Abhi's and one in Goa... 😆

You've taken us on quite a passionate dream, don't wake us up yet.

Originally posted by: sam78

Beautiful os. I loved it. Please give us second os with abhi's bedroom. Thank you.

Originally posted by: -mina-

TIA TIA TIA TIA TIA TIA!!

ok forgive me for being late to the party!! eesh!

first of all, this is so beyond what i expected!! i wasn't sure to what level you meant to write smut, and now i see that you really did mean smut, and it's absolutely fab! the best part was that throughout, you completely kept alive the initial humourous angle we talked about. to be sure it turned into something else, hot and passionate and tender and perfect, and thank you thank you so much for writing that - but what i was looking forward to in this story was the impossibly delicious humour of pragya being "too loud" at the aroras, and thank you even more so for building your gorgeous story around this!

Mina this FF originated from the idea of me thinking how come Abhi shouts so much on Pragya in his room and Daadi never hears, then I thought being a singer who also plays instruments he would have a soundproofed room and soon the idea got dirty and this fic happened.

Initially, I just wanted to write smut stuff with the soundproofing thing itself but then, I thought it had to be their first time to get them to do it in Sarla's house.. and if it was not their first time, it might end being just a quickie.. na.. and Abhi would know of her sounds.. lol.

So a whole story was built around this idea.😳

ok ok so what do i even tell you. it was all awesome!!

i loved the extended argument that we started with!! really set the tension but also brought abhi's aww-sho-sweet adorably-trying-to-make-up-for-stuff side, and gave a great opening to show how pragya was so totally ready to be moving on with things! our sweetoos are so ridiculous naa, don't even talk properly, but luckily the chemistry exploded and now at least they know they're so on the same page about this...!

At least here, Abhi didn't want to give away the surprise and Pragya was being modest lol.

LOVED beyond words Abhi being so repeatedly conscious of "ahh we shouldn't do this here" and "ack maybe we should stop now," and yet he also can't help getting carried away - it was so fun and exciting the way you wrote that!

Thanks.😳

and pragya just continuing to urge him on, trying to care that her mom's on the other side but really not caring...and good for you pragya, why care, you're with your husband after all, your mom-approved husband, not some school time boyfriend 😆

Pragya didn't bother much because she was way too taken over..

maybe neither of them realize how utterly gratified the elders would be to know that the two of them do have a healthy marital relationship...😉

I bet Sarla heard some stuff despite Abhi's efforts..😉

as for the actual sex, just, wow, superb! so many little moments of utter hotness. i really liked how you gave us back and forth of how they both felt, made the whole thing so much more engrossing and satisfying. it was sweet that they worked through the emotional background of their relationship too, with declaring and reassuring their love as they took this step forward.

Refer to the first paragraph of my comment to your comment...

ok favourite bits:

- "Baby, your mother can hear us, so please seal your mouth". 😆

- foot kissing!! bahahaha! 🤡 😛 😊

- Pragya was trying to grab his arm, shirt or whatever she could, trying to survive her rushing hormones. 👏

-By now, realizing Pragya could make heavy noises he brought his fingers to her mouth and said "suck on to them and let me have fun with you, but don't scream alright?".🤣

-"He is yours for life, just like me" Abhi declared as he started to get her off of her remaining clothes. <---UFFF!! *dead* 😆 👏

-"100 Chashmish rockstar babies with Chashmish" smiled Abhi earning a similar smile from her.

-The next thought that crossed his mind thrilled him as he was going to enter her without a barrier. ☺️ 😃

-Abhi didn't realize when he had entered her completely but when he had he felt home as she had held him there securely. ❤️

-Pragya had never felt complete like this. ❤️

-Pragya was complementing Abhi's slow thrusts with the movement of her hips. The kissing had continued and the crescendo of passion was quickly building up for both of them. Soon, Abhi had started to move erratic inside her for it was out of his will now. He could feel that she was building up to it as well, but he wanted to make sure she had her relief before him. <---yayyy; love how Pragya in enthusiastic and acting instinctively! love the way you describe the buildup in a few well chosen but so expressive words. and aww very good gentlemanly Abhi, making sure she gets hers first 😉

-Lovemaking to his wife had turned out to be a million times more exciting and fulfilling than he had imagined. 👍🏼

-He felt proud of his woman as he tasted his own blood on his lip as a proof her passion for him. <--ufff what a visceral detail...messy and perfect 😃

-It thrilled him that his wife was an uncontrollable moaner. He hadn't expected this from his demure Chashmish but was very delighted with the pleasant surprise. ⭐️

-He couldn't wait to make love to his wife again in his room where he could get her to scream as loudly as she could. 😲 🥳🤣

-Finally, he too joined her in sleep as his thoughts kept on playing out the ways he was gonna make love to her and an impish smile plastered on his face... <--SO ABHI OMG

Glad it felt like Abhi and thanks for noticing all those lines.😛

so anyway yes Tia...I know you told us this one gave you much trouble to write...but for us, it was oh so worth it!! This was such a fun and hot read, and soo what we wish AbhiGya could have, and basically I love it beyond words. I know it can be annoying when readers say this when you feel like you're done with the story but - oh I do hope you write more!! The idea of his room, you know...your fault, you left us with that idea!! Although come to think of it that should be their room, naa? 😉 BTW I also loved the small moment where he became enflamed by the idea of "her" room...and I'm kind of glad that they ended up not doing it on the bed she shared with BB, even though at first I was like, "floor mat! no!" hahaha. anyway yeah while reading the beginning I was really thinking of pagphere episodes and the quality time they spent in her room...so awesome to imagine them going back like this!!

Mina, two things-

I initially thought Pragya would had her own room? No? I haven't carefully watched the soap before AbhiGya wedding happened, but yeah the pic of BB-Prags.. I should have known they shared the room. Yeah kind of awkward especially if Pragya shared it with BB before.. nevertheless I am glad it didn't happen on the bed!

I wrote it as "his" room intentionally. Although Abhi would totally share every bit of his life with Pragya, I thought it would be very Abhi to keep claiming- his pillow, his room, his this his that.. etc.

ok what else can i say. thank you thank you thank you for writing and posting this!! thank you for challenging yourself to complete this story and pushing ahead until it was done!! yeah, just, thank you!!!! now let's do a victory dance!! ehehehe 😃 👏

Thank you for your support in PMs when I was like no I can't do this.. and your FF hook up definitely gave me more confidence to write this.

Thank you, Tia 👏!!!! Wow!!! Wow!!! and Wow!!!! Enjoyed it!!! Loved the passionate scenes ... a work of art!!! The heat factor was sizzling!!!! Hot, sweet and very romantic!!! Pragya, is that you??? demure innocent turned into a vixen??? And Abhi ... acting like any red-blooded guy, yet thinking about the family in the middle of those heated moments ... had me laughing!!! The chemistry was undeniable!!! You wove a wonderful story!!! It embraced every facet of a truly wonderful coming together of a beautiful couple very much in love!!!! Characters that wrap around my heart, sizzling passion, a true romance. What's not to love 😛? Perfect culmination of a wonderful love story 😃!!!!...

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you, Tia 👏!!!! Wow!!! Wow!!! and Wow!!!! Enjoyed it!!! Loved the passionate scenes ... a work of art!!! The heat factor was sizzling!!!! Hot, sweet and very romantic!!! Pragya, is that you??? demure innocent turned into a vixen??? And Abhi ... acting like any red-blooded guy, yet thinking about the family in the middle of those heated moments ... had me laughing!!! The chemistry was undeniable!!! You wove a wonderful story!!! It embraced every facet of a truly wonderful coming together of a beautiful couple very much in love!!!! Characters that wrap around my heart, sizzling passion, a true romance. What's not to love 😛? Perfect culmination of a wonderful love story 😃!!!!...