Abhi-Pragya one shot fiction: Sound Proofing

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sara7iris
I do not know how I did not see this OS...it is beautiful and very very hot..😳 they contain a lot of passion and desire it is really perfect I love it

Thank you Sara. 😛

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Renukha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

RES!!!

Very busy today. I will come back and read it aaram se and comment!

Unres!!

"Well, I hope it would have been a happy surprise for you, it definitely would have been for me" Abhi said looking here and there. 🤣

"listen to her reading Baabaji ka paath and ardaas? Bewkoof 🤣 🤣

"Baby, your mother can hear us, so please seal your mouth".😆 😆

Abhi ignored her protests and bent to kiss her feet taking her big toe in his mouth. 😆 ( I know this is meant to be hot, but it reminds me of Lk's punishment😆)

"You and your bed, both have a loud mouth"🤣

Oh, Tia this was amazeballs!!! 👏

One minute I was like into the stroy heated up at their hotness and the next minute burst out laughing!!😆😛

Loved this very much Tia! It was hot, tender, funny, and sweet all at once.

P.S. I think you're very good at writing Abhi. The dialogues are so apt to the Abhi in the show.

Edited by renukha871 - 10 years ago

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Oh wow

Just wow

Like wow

How wow

I mean wow

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: vivkriti
Wow amazing OS. After first night disaster this will be perfect to make it more memorable. So hot n lovely.

Thank you Miths!

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Sandrav
wow thatwas really an hot and amazing os...its worth the tym..loved it...😊

lol thank you!

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: illa8
that was a HOT one shot i think u should surely continue =)

Thanks. It will remain a one shot as of now.

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: columbia
Oh wow
Just wow
Like wow
How wow
I mean wow

😆
🤗

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grape777

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

You wrote the scene beautifully! It was passionate and intense and not many people are good at conveying this in their writing, but you did amazing 😉. Also, please do write more!