AbhiGya FF ~ Destiny's Children caught in a Web - COMPLETED - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful and amazing update ...I love when abhi went to the hospital for Aaliya but when he saw pragya he forgot why he had come to the hospital it's really great...also I love the dialogue between pragya and abhi it contains an intensity of emotion between them ...abhi wants to know his place in her life it was really magical moment... I love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a great update! Fraught with emotion! Loved it! Thanks for sharing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow wat a grt updaye dear
firstly sorry for not commenting on last 3 updates so lets start
oo god I loved pragya n abhi masti n maza wat a day our chashmi plan a grt day for poor abhi .
dey were so close d whole day loved dat 2 wo bhi hand in hand.
suresh kyu bapas aaya.
ye dono (abhiya)pagal hai kya tanu or suresh k saath relation sudhar rahi hai jabki ek dusre k saath relation bnane chaheye .

Oo god abhi dont like when dat suresh get close 2 pragya grt rock star.
Finally volcano futa abhi ka us suresh pe thank god pragya was der 2 handle


Wat a kiss first I was so upset I even complain 2 u ki kiss kyu roka in before update but ab jab finally kiss huva
vo I hope dey dont regret der movement.
abhi tho nahi krega but pragya ka pta nahi she is still confuse.
I dont wat 2 say anything about rabul or suresh or aliya bez right now I m in abhigya land .

I know jada bada comment nahi hai but next pakka bada comment krungi.

Ab bolne ki jrurat tho nahi lekin phir bhi bol deti hu
update soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
They kissed! 😲

Great update! This Aliya needs psychological help...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sara7iris

beautiful and amazing update ...I love when abhi went to the hospital for Aaliya but when he saw pragya he forgot why he had come to the hospital it's really great...also I love the dialogue between pragya and abhi it contains an intensity of emotion between them ...abhi wants to know his place in her life it was really magical moment... I love it


Glad to know you liked it saara!
COnsidering it will be a bit darker from here - the story 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aafrah


Glad to know you liked it saara!
COnsidering it will be a bit darker from here - the story 😳😳

I love the dark it gives you a lot of idea
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update aww all Abhi wants right now is for Pragya to support him and I like how he forgot everything when he saw her at the hospital

The way he kept saying your suresh poor guy feel bad for him and when he stopped before he could say his name sad

But now I can't wait to read what happens next they both know that they have feelings for each other
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Abhi has so much trust on pragya. Hope BB is going recover soon. With pragya, abhi forget everything, he even forgot that his sister is in jail. Both have fall in love with each other, but does not knos about.hope they do aviod each other after their first kiss. Thank you, please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ooh Ooh Ooh
I'm back again to comment at your fantabulous update.

So it's starting. They kissed so aggressively, it took the life out of me. How Abhi felt at the time when Pragya wasn't by his side and her also, not able to watch him sad, it showed how both mattered to each other more than anyone else. Both fill the empty void and knows how they feel. Their loneliness all gone, just by looking at one another. When someone fills your life with hope and happiness, they also fit in your line of fate.

I just... one word... 'heart-wrecking' 'sniffs'

Back to the story. What a cliffhanger ! I want to see both of their faces. Will be fun reading the next update. You fills my mind with hope that the next update will be far more better than its predecessor and it does. The update only had 2 scenes. I want more 'whining like a baby'...

Heh 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am completely bowled over. Emotions that have been so effortlessly poured out in your story seems so so real. Could feel most of it. Looking forward for more. Brilliant read.

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