abhigya Ts-Its over completed - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love it! But don't want a sad ending! Can't wait for next update !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Amazing . Loved it. Why all emotions changed for Pragya. Love Aliyas reaction after knowing the truth
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Would truly love to see something like this happening in the show...the accusation of her having an affair and her self respect...virtue being slaughtered by the bro due duo.,.being the last straw that breaks the camel back as the saying goes...making her leave Abhi to wallow in guilt remorse... and a living hell like the one she was in.
Great ...can't wait to rad the next part.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it
Superb and amazing.
What incident led to this scene? Can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing and really interesting...I Wish it could happen like this in the show ...I love your update ,pls do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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would like to watch sumthing like this happen in the serial
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Very well written.
But where is second part?? Update soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Very good!! 👍🏼 :)

Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER -2

Shock after shock as Abhi learnt the innocence of the girl he married. Everything she had done for him and his family.

Methili felt shame wash over her. Aliya was just stunned, She just wanted Pragya to feel the hurt she felt, the pain of betrayal but never expected that Pragya got nothing but that throughout her life. Her pain was immeasurable and Aliya knew that minute, had she been in Pragya's place she would have ended her life long back. Could she ever make up to Pragya?

Abhi wondered on the same line" How am I going to make up to her?"

Abhi felt himself shivering as he opened the door of his room. His eyes searched for her. As he walked in he found her sitting like a stone in the balcony.He wanted to talk but what he did not know for words had deserted him. He proceeded to open the door but stopped as she did not let him.

The rains were lashing out so heavily, the striking of thunder woke Pragya up. She tried to move but something stopped her. She realized instantly that she was in a bed hugged by her so called husband. Abhi's hands deep around her waist. She was under his neck, breath falling on his chest. Pragya closed her eyes capturing that moment in her heart forever. A memory etched in her heart forever ...

Aliya turned in her sleep as she felt hot air coming in and the it was gone in few seconds...

Abhi woke up wondering on the absence of the morning Bhajans...

He looked around hoping to catch a glimpse of her. But there was nothing but vacuum. An emptiness surrounding the whole mansion, it was suffocating in being. The loud banging of the door woke him completely. It was Aliya and Akash and as he opened a panicked Aliya began to open the balcony door, the washroom and finally an empty wardrobe..

A very confused Abhi-"guys what is it so early?"

Akash-"Bhai. Who.. Bhabhi is.."

Abhi-"What where is she?"

Aliya-"She is missing" in a trembling voice

Abhi-"What?"

Aliya-"I wanted to talk to her but she is nowhere to be seen in the house."

Akash-"I called her up in her house but she is not there, her university doesn't know either. Bhai I am scared ".

Abhi knew he was doomed.

3 hours later..

Bulbul tried to stay strong as the police left after promising to search for Pragya Abhishek Mehra. She watched as Dadi sobbed and her Mom weep silently. Abhi in a state of shock and Aliya emotionless..

Purab controlling himself from revealing anything about Pragya Mehra ..

50 miles away from Bombay..

She breathed in the fresh air... Her first step towards freedom as of now IT Was Over

Sorry for the delay but next part will be the concluding part hopefully. As the story is shaping up bit differently from the original plan...

Do you like it? Please give me your honest reviews...

Edited by smritiz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yes i do quite like it! so pragya made a break for it, and purab might know something? hhmm. i really liked the scene where she wakes up in his embrace...and how powerful that she decides it's not enough to make her stay. hoping for more soon, you've left us with so many intriguing mysteries! thanks for the update :)

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