abhigya Ts-Its over completed

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Abhigya OS-Its Over

A sound slap echoed the hall as Aliya looked stunned as Dadi was glaring at her furiously. The anger in her eyes terrified everyone for a second.

Dadi in cold voice-"What did you say about Pragya again?"

Aliya stammering-"She is having an affair with Suresh.."

Abhi-" Dadi why is it so hard for you to believe the truth about that Chashmish"

Dadi-" I find it hard to believe why Pragya would choose Suresh when he broke his marriage with her for Bulbul."

Aliya and everyone else gasped.

Abhi-" Dadi... what are you saying?" fearing he made a very big mistake..

Dadi-"What you heard Abhishek.. Aliya you wanted Pragya to feel the pain you did when Purab left you.didn't you.Well you would be glad to know that Pragya faced two broken marriages One because of dowry and the next was because Suresh broke her heart at the final moment because he loved her sister instead.."

Aliya felt as if she was doused by freezing ice.

Dadi -"You blamed her for Purab running away from your marriage, but the truth is this". she handed a torn letter .

Abhi and Aliya read the letter again and again and Abhi felt his heart stop..

Dadi-"Your dear friend Tanu here changed the letter for her advantage"

Dadi moved to a tear stricken Pragya, her heart bleeding at the pain she was going through

Dadi-" I am sorry beta all this is my fault. I ruined your life by getting you married to Rockstar Abhi. Please forgive me." folding her hands.

Pragya was just staring at empty space blankly. There was nothing more in her to feel. She wanted to cry, scream, howl but nothing came out. She felt frozen, the love and any other emotion she had felt in the past few days, dying completely along with her. She did not know why but her feet begin to move and she walked without any idea.

Aliya looked at Pragya who moved like a zombie and felt emotions she never felt in her life.. Emotions of guilt, self hatred , regret and much more washed her...

Pragya tripped by the table and was immediately caught by someone. she turned to look at her so called husband..

What she felt that second was pure disgust and she pushed him away with such a force that he toppled back.

Pragya-"I would really appreciate if you would stay away from me Rockstar. The very sight of you, your sister and girlfriend makes me feel as if bugs are crawling all over me."

The tone she used was so cold that Aliya felt herself shiver.

So was IT OVER?

A second part will come but length is not determined. Might be an epilogue as well..

Update time cannot be said as my exams are going on...

So a penny for your thoughts please

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rbb1 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing thank you for posting it wish it happened for real
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Posted: 10 years ago
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more please!! very interested to see this reaction from aaliya. and what has happened to shut down pragya like this! i see hints but i want more details pls!! thanks for starting another great story :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HOW I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN!!!

Lovely! Please do continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb 👏!!!! Thank you, Smiritiz!!!! I Wish it could happen like this ... loved Prgaya's cold attitude!!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!!
Superb...loved it!!!
Wish it could happen in the show like this!!
Can't wait 4 u 2 continue!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This seems really interesting! Please pm when you update.
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very nice plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it!! Aaliyah repenting!Pragya walking out! Waiting for more!😃
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Originally posted by: Diahh

Loved it!! Aaliyah repenting!Pragya walking out! Waiting for more!😃

same here can't wait to read the next part

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