The Hookup | in progress | an AbhiGya FF by mina - Page 2

Ok this is by far your best work because you actually took the abhi and pragya we loved we hoped for in the show and put those characters into a lovely story that you have weaved beautifully!!! Throughout the story you had them at equal levels almost maintaining a sea saw of passion! Even in that raw act of passion a certain amount of understanding comfort between them wonderfully penned!

wow Mina this is really good and really well written, some of the lines are amazing, can't wait to read the next update

loved it. cannot wait for the next updates.

Heyooo minaaa...:):):):) hmm... Mature stuff haan... Since m ur adopted sibling m i supposed to read the whole OS?????:p:p:p:p he he he.. Jst kiddin.. It was jussst subtle, super n fun.. U know at first i decided to skip the mature part.. But just after 10 min i opened it..*out of curiosity* *human nature* n yeah it was subtle.. I like d protectiveness abhi had for her even when they were seperated!! He he.. D story he cooked up.. She is my sis.. Rebeling against her fiance... Nly abhi can come up wid stuff like dis.. U know generally the detailed mature stuff puts me off but thank god u conveyed whatever u wanted to n still made it bearable to read!!! N kal ho na ho reference made it so fun.. Ayee ramdayal my gf is leaving me 4 u!! U dog ramdayal(sumthin lik dis in da movie).. Kudos sissy!!! Gud job...*hugs*

Res, Mina!! In need of cold shower after reading your complete version!😉

Mina! First of all, splendid, flawless writing. Makes it so worth it.

It was liberating to see a liberated Pragya. Carrying on with her life, after a joke of a marriage and finally wanting to cater to her needs too.

What a Kumkum Bhagya/destiny moment that Abhi ends up in the same bar as hers when she gotten desperate enough to say hell with you to her virginity!

Abhi Oh Abhi! His Ramdayal stuff was so him. He called Pragya his sister to get the guy off. How possessively protective he was of Pragya.

Ah, their weird connection worked out and they make this deal to do it.

How lucky Abhi is, after everything he did to her, she still allows him to be her first. Oh Well, shows how she had not let him go.

And the lovemaking itself.. Oh dear.. are first times so fulfilling.. really? So dreamy! The way he took care of her.. and how she let herself loose.. Uff! Mina, the writing of this part was soo sooo good. With all the hotness, it had his care for her, her yearning, her appreciation of him.. and their connection.

But my favourite part was the after sex stuff. Loved that he wanted to cuddle with her, she and her UTI thing was freaking hilarious. They are not gonna let go of each other now, will they?

Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us. A dream first time for Pragya with a dream man!

Omg u have to continue asap
i'ma buddy u right now so that u can PM ur updates

OMG Mina! Still blushing...

oh wow!😲😳😳😳
i lol hard at uti info from dr. chashmish 😃

Haylo where is next part??? Haylo pls pls pls I know I am pressuring but pls pls understand your readers heart condition now if like this story you post and leave midway what will happen to us????