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Originally posted by: Anbhigya
well.. Yess m a colz goin old enuf to read mature stuff!!! But too much detailing puts me off yaar... N yes u should not expose me to the khatarnaak stuff:p:p:p he he he.. But i don't remember any OS f urs which made me cringe.. I even read sulbul wala OS coz it was urs...:) so i know u can handle it very well!!! N for dat m proud f u!! KHNH was one hell of a movie.. Perfect blend of tragedy n humour!! Waitin for next part.. Keep rockin my ROCKSTAR DIDU!!!:)
Love you my Shikhu babu! Adore being Rockstar Didu, best nickname ever! Hope you like the rest of the story, it shouldn't have too much cringe worthy stuff. Thank you for your compliments!! So touched you are proud of me 😉
Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh
Loved it!! It was sooo good!! I agree with Pragya.. Why are sex rules different for men and women.. Seriously..
The not-Ramadayal was so funny!! Wonder what happens when Pragya sees him at the conference.. Hahaha..
Looking forward to more.. :)
So glad you liked it Nitya!! I love your work so it's great to know you read this. Hmm, what does happen when she sees him? Not as much as he probably wants 😆 Thanks for reading and commenting! ❤️
Originally posted by: samarth300
Unres!!
Ok, first of all. I loved Kal Ho Na Ho back then!! So the Ramdayal thing was totally awesome! While reading it, Ramdayal, felt very familiar, and now I'm like OHH! And the not-Ramdayal part brought back a few memories as well. So, I had this math teacher that told us a story about his mother in law who was a teacher and in her preschool class there were twins. One was Michelle, and guess what the other one's name was?? Not-Michelle! And this is totally legit info! So it brought me back to the class and that year's math class was the most fun one I had yet. So thanks!
Okay, now I'll get to the actual story😆
So it basically was so amazing!! I loved the banter between Abhi and Pragya. I mean they were so in character the whole time with their sarcastic-ness. Abhi's possessiveness in the beginning was marvelously done. Some parts I loved: (and I might be missing a few)
P.S: Usually TOO much details in the mature parts without proper conversations and thoughts puts me off. But this was just perfect Mina
Haha ok so this random smut fic brought back cute school memories?? Too hilarious. So glad you enjoyed it and glad you liked the Ramdayal bit!! The lines you pointed out are some of my favourites too. Glad you liked Abhi's subconscious guardy feelings about Chashmish. And so pleased the smut part worked for you! And even gladder that you got the humour of the UTI part! Thanks for reading and for your awesome thorough comment!! 😃
Originally posted by: Asma-
Very nice concept and very funny how Pragya is desperate hihi
i really hope you will update soon
Good Luck 👍🏼
Aww thank you so much! Appreciate your comment. Working on the next update, great to have your luck on my side 😉
Originally posted by: putturani
Another excellent fic mina! I really like how you showed that Pragya has moved on with her life. I loved how you made the bolder Pragya more believable by putting in that exchange with Bulbul and making her be true to her original character. I'm really intrigued to see where this will go next, there are so many unresolved issues between them. I would also very much like to see the complete version if you don't mind!
Thank you for this thoughtful comment! Interesting that the exchange with Bulbul made her more believable to you. So glad you read both versions, really appreciate you taking the time. Not so sure if I'm going to be addressing the unresolved issues in a way that will satisfy you; please be sure to let me know! Working on the next update presently 😊
Originally posted by: columbia
K seriously how many us few more??? Like one like two what is your definition of few more I am now dreaming this FF I knew this would happen yet I am such a pain and I am sorry but wot to do you are a fab writer 👏 Tere ff pe dil aya tho mera kya kasur? 😳
I'm sorry it's taking so long my dear!! More than a few days after all...lekin kya karoon, story comes at its own pace 😳
Thanks for reading and commenting 😊
Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Wow an amazing, superb and fantastic start to this wonderful story.
I'm loving the concept its very interesting, unique and intriguing.
All four parts were written exceptionally well,
loved all the superb and beautiful moments between them both,
Cant wait to read the story further, also can you please PM me the full version.
Thanking you in advance xx
Thanks for this lovely comment!! Glad you liked the concept and the moments. Hope you will keep reading, working on the next update presently 😊
Thank you so much!! 😊
Originally posted by: swetamwari
The story kept me completely hooked up...so a great title for sure... Beautiful writing u are really talented can u plz plz pm me the original version
LoL what a cute way to put it! Glad you approve of the title...I just didn't want to be creative. Thanks for reading and commenting, really appreciate your kind words. 😊
Uff shivaniji can't even tell you how much I love this comment...mujhko rockstar bola!! 😃 😆Working on the update, even I want to post soon but...it's not ready yet!
Originally posted by: Tupimanmus
I love dark and sensual stories but stopped reading them after seeing writer's futile attempt to make it (have sex) meaningful like revenge and romance to include sex. I mean why try bringing some same old 'used goods' reason when you could make it meaningless. There's a word known as 'Nothing'.
"Subtlety be damned" Abhi's nature can be clearly seen from these words. Pragya's nature was not out of character, I thought so. When someone gets drunk, it's normal for the person to be different than usual. It's like they are in someone else's body.
Seriously hats off for penning the story so marvelously. For your friend " What an Idea ! Sir ji"
Thanks for reading and commenting. Not sure I understood your first paragraph? But glad you appreciated Abhi's bullishness, and that you could see that Pragya was a little intoxicated...I wasn't really sure how to put that into words so it's nice that you picked up on it. Thanks for your thorough comment and yes I'm sure even columbia will appreciate that tribute 😉
Edited by -mina- - 11 years ago
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