Abhigya FS:THE PASSENGERS(note on page 1... updated final part-page11) - Page 3

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Part 2-They had been walking now for almost an hour but couldn't find a hotel or any open shop!! It was around 12 in the midnight.. Abhi was silent n prags thought why is the chatter box not sayin a word!! Then he broke the silence n said- i have never been to places like dis.. Silence at every corner..:) so peaceful.. He said admiring the roads.. Suddenly prags spotted a coffee shop.. N to their surprise it was open 24*7!!! They got there n d place was almost empty.. They ordered coffee n sat on a table near the window!!!:) silence prevails again! Prags broke the silence.. So Rockstar why did u left the train? A- u were all alone walking like a zombie in the dark so just wanted to help!! N besides my daadi would not like if she finds k i left a girl alone in a station n didn't tried to help!! P(smilin)- u have a daadi.. A- yup.. Daadi.. Sis(aali) n a best buddy(purab).. Dis is my family!!! P- so why did u boarded a train when u hav private choppers??? A-umm... Its complicated!! P-try me.. I can understand... A- u already know so much.. U know.. Dumped by gf... Music not working.. Lack of inspiration... I am so damn frustated!!! P-my sis is a big fan f urs.. She hav some f ur pics on her laptop wid ur gf... What went wrong??? A- i don't know man!! Dats exactly i am askin myself.. I was going to propose her n she started this modelling shoot n after two months she said ITS OVER!! Her husband.. I know him.. He is one of my sponsors!! I attended their marriage.. N she didn't have an iota of guilt.. She even looked at me as if she is the most happy person... Appologise karna toh door ki baat h!!! N now media n all they don't leave me alone!! N he went silent... Lekin main ye sab tumhe kyu bata raha hoon???? U are yourself in problem! U looked normal first but then u started walkin alone in the dark!! Where were u going??? P- i don't know!! I guess far away from all the tensions!! A- tell me about it!! She kept mum.. A- oh come on!! I told u everything.. N besides i can keep secrets!! So tell me!! P- well i have faced 10 marriage refusals.. N one failed engagement!! I met tarun n both our families decided our marriage.. A- so u didn't liked d guy??? P- no i liked him.. A lot... We met for almost six months.. A sorted out practical guy he was... Just like i wanted but two days before marriage his parents asked for my mom's marriage hall as dowry.. We refused n to my surprise he didn't protested his parents!! N i broke d marriage cause he lacked spine!! He wouldn't stood for me in future too!!N then my mom became ill... She is hell bent on gettin me married. N now i was going to mumbai to attend a seminar from my college... I have moved on but still i am angry.. I wanted to slap tarun for letting me down after promising me so many things... Both sipped their 3rd cup of coffee... A- u know i want her to get out of my life!! But her memories haunt me.. He showed some of their pictures on his phone.. We were so happy!! But i hate her for letting me down. P- Dude! how the hell are u supposed to forget her when u literally carry her with urself!! A- so what do u want me to do??? Haan.. These are our memories.. P- there is only you now.. No 'our'... I think u should delete all her pics from ur phone laptop n everything.. Unfollow her on twitter.. N delete her number!! U will feel good.. Make new memories!! Start afresh... He resisted but gave up n did what she said... N said if this can give me peace i will try this too... After moments he looked at her n said- u know what!! I actually feel good... N smiled.. P- wainse dikhne me bure nahi ho.. Handsome ho yaar.. Aage aage bahut acchi ladkiya milegi.. Ye toh bas ainvayii(useless) thi.. A- that i know k m handsome n grinned.. A- so u were saying k u are angry on dat guy.. Umm.. Tarun.. P-yes A- u should convey this to him.. U know i have tried n it works.. P-its stupidity.. A- come on!! Shout on him.. Take your anger out.. U will feel fantastic!! Just let go.. Do u have his no.?? A- tell me the no. Lets call him.. N he dialled... A- lo baat karo... P- no... A(glares)- cum on.. N shout.. Abuse if u want to.. Tarun picked... P- he... He... Hello.. T..aruuun... Main pragya... Abhi held her hand n asked her to continue.. P- tuje kya laga kamine... Tu muje chod dega toh main tadapungii tere liye... Louder... Itni si himmat toh hain nahi tere andar!! Mummy ka chamchaa.. Abhi grinning...P- ja pehle thodi insaaniat or himmat laa phr shaadi karna... Agli baar dowry maangega toh saale jail hogi tuje!! Samjhaaa... Chal kaat phone... B****... Jack***... N cut d call... A- phewww.. U know abuses... Veryyy good.. How r u feelin nw?? Gud??? P- awsome... M feelin sooo relieved!! She held his hand n said Thnk you abhiii.. Abhii liked it when she addressed him like dat... For a moment they stared at each other... A- see.. I told ya... Prags removes her hand.. N both of them laugh loudly.. N they chatted n chatted whole night not knowin how much coffee they drank...:):)
Edited by Anbhigya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Translations: pragya-wainse dikhne me bure... Ainvayii thi-'' looks wise u r not that bad!!! U r handsome n will get a much better girl.'' Pragya- tuje kya laga... Phone kaat.- '' what the hell were u thinkin?? U will left me n i will cry for u... U mamma's boy.. First learn some human decency n courage.. Next time u will ask for dowry.. U will rot in jail!!! Now cut the call..(guys the abuses are only meant to take out prag's frustation... N i think i have tried to make it minimal... If any of u felt offended den m sorry in advance)...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res! heading out for the day so can't comment for a while but will be back later for my second serving of pakwaan 😃
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kya shikhu you are an awesome cook naa! 😉 loved this so much. very funny and sweet but with the deeper emotions too, with them talking about their pain and helping each other. can't believe prags actually called tarun and told him off, abhi's dangerous influence! so glad they found friendliness with each other, hope they will find more in the future too. if you wanna write on that you should!! 😃

loved the whole story my dear, thank you very much!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

res! heading out for the day so can't comment for a while but will be back later for my second serving of pakwaan😃

ha ha ha... Pakwaan!!!! No probs buddy...:):) hav an awsum day ahead!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its beautiful. ..enjoyed ur awesome update...lovely. .. eagerly waiting for next. ... thankyou. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhasini2727

Its beautiful. ..enjoyed ur awesome update...lovely. .. eagerly waiting for next. ... thankyou. .

aww.. Thnk u buddy 4 these gracious words..:):) m glad u liked it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww!!!! That was just amazing Shikhu!!!! So filmy, but I love filmy stuff! It's bringing back the old memories of JWM😳 Loved how Pragya was abusing Tarun. And Abhi deleting all of Tannu's pics! Just a request: If one the way, Abhi and Pagya go on a train or bus afterwards, I want u to show Abhi relaxed and he sings "Aao Milo Chalo" song from Jab We Met and this way he's starting to get inspirations for his songs by being with Pragya. It's very filmy, but what do you think about the idea?
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Originally posted by: samarth300

Wowww!!!! That was just amazing Shikhu!!!! So filmy, but I love filmy stuff! It's bringing back the old memories of JWM😳 Loved how Pragya was abusing Tarun. And Abhi deleting all of Tannu's pics! Just a request: If one the way, Abhi and Pagya go on a train or bus afterwards, I want u to show Abhi relaxed and he sings "Aao Milo Chalo" song from Jab We Met and this way he's starting to get inspirations for his songs by being with Pragya. It's very filmy, but what do you think about the idea?

awww trishh... I so wanted u to read this coz u were the first one with whom i shared my JWM memories... N yess dat is in the plan to make abhi sing 'aao meelo chale'!!! Dis TS is inspired by JWM.. Its gonna hav some scenes inspires by d movie other will be a bit different..:) n thnks 4 commenting...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anbhigya

aww.. Thnk u buddy 4 these gracious words..:):) m glad u liked it...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anbhigya

awww trishh... I so wanted u to read this coz u were the first one with whom i shared my JWM memories... N yess dat is in the plan to make abhi sing 'aao meelo chale'!!! Dis TS is inspired by JWM.. Its gonna hav some scenes inspires by d movie other will be a bit different..:) n thnks 4 commenting...:)

Yay thx Shikhu! Waiting for your updates!

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