Break of Dawn: Abhi-Pragya One Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Amazing beautiful superbly written Tia. Passionate. Loved how you wrote both Pragya n Abhis thoughts n loved how you made Abhi waiting for Pragya to make first move n reason behind it is great. Hope in show also we get like this. I always enjoy reading your writings.👏

Originally posted by: athirakt

oh my god...

i wish ur were director show...

Originally posted by: Diahh

Wow Tia! This is so beautiful! Loved it! 👍🏼

Especially loved how Pragya is willing to give herself for Abhi for their love and how Abhi waits for her..

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Originally posted by: -mina-

Tia!!! Thank you SO much!!!! This is amazing and lovely and perfect and thrilling and also very satisfying to read. You've executed the idea so beautifully! And there are so many really excellent phrases and expressions ❤️ 👏 ⭐️

Thank you, sincerely.😃

Loved the careful way you explored Pragya's thoughts and explained about her googling. You conveyed her vulnerability and self-consciousness in such a subtle way. By the time she was thinking about dressing differently for him, I was convinced that it was something that made sense for her.

Glad that was convincing.

The post-conflict stage of relationship that you described seems so sweet and really fitting to how it might be when they finally just get to be friends. The strong sense you created of Abhi taking care of her and cherishing her just stole my heart honestly! It was more than just words on the screen, you really made me feel their good new dynamic. Left me swooning. Aapas mein banti hain, finally!!

Even in the soap, Abhi is already caring for her. Thank you, I didn't have much Abhi in there. But I am glad his stand was conveyed.

Uff the lace satin gown! Thanks for making it green btw, my favourite colour! Heehee.

Aww really? I made it green, just because we saw that green thing she wore at Andy's.

Idk why but I really liked the moment of Abhi impatiently knocking on the closet door. Maybe because there was no special reason for him to do it, just an everyday moment of AbhiGya friction, but in the best possible way. Sweet and innocuous. Idk I just really liked that moment!! Haha 😆

Assume that he needed to change as well or a towel... Or we know he just likes to hang out there.😳

Ok and then the hot turn at the end! The build up was just beautiful and then this part was something else, thrumming with energy and tension, and such a satisfying resolution!!

I really liked the detail of locking his fingers with hers. And the whole visual of against the wall!!

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Aww Abhi's explanation was great. Waiting for her to make the first move out of self-doubt!! On the one hand it's hard to imagine short-fuse Abhi being that patient, but on the other hand it's perfectly easy to imagine how he would hold back because he wanted her to actually want him. The way you have explored this contrast was really compelling to me! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

He is not the one to wait, but since there is this heavy guilt on his head, he wanted this to be her choice first.

Uff chatri-wala line!! *dead* Like you know that picture Riyyu always posts with the suit guy's feet 😉

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Oooh interesting idea about the letter. I wonder what she wrote! How steamy did she get? Because she was really frustrated right? 😲 But then I'm sure it was full of love and affection too. Oh how I would like to know what she wrote and what Abhi thought!

Hmm, I would say not much steamy.. just what I described in the fic..her dilemma and wish..But the letter is irrelevant now. Abhi might still read it aloud in front of her to embarrass her later in the morning.😳

But omg thanks for not making them wait until morning to move forward! Pragya feeling like she finally had a right on him was...honestly, I felt triumphant along with her, if that makes any sense. And finally she had the confidence to just claim what is hers! I love it!!

I kind of felt after all that dressing room stuff.. how can they even spend a night...😳...Or I gotta admit.. I was too sleepy and wanted to finish the fic off. I am very impatient.

Abhi's sleepy response to the kiss! I can just imagine that! Silly and adorable, coming from the deep sense of comfortableness they have with each other. But good thing she shocks him out of that and they move on to more exciting things. Sweetness has a time and place...hotness has a time and place 😃

Inspired by "Kya kar rahi ho Chashmish" line in the soap.

Aww dog tag mention!! Nice!! 😆

Ishaa was in my mind as I wrote it.😉

And the ending. The loveliest fade to black I have ever read. I wasn't even annoyed that you didn't show further; it felt perfectly right to leave them at that moment, and I could imagine just how much they enjoyed and discovered together and how it brought them to a new, even more fulfilling stage of their relationship. You built the story so strongly and ended it on just the right note ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Thank you. I really wanted to stop it there. Glad it's a nice ending.

Oooh Tia I wish I could extract all these delighted feelings/thoughts I am having about this lovely story and like, give them to you in a bottle or something, because words don't seem enough. That was probably weird, forgive me. Anyway this was a really meaningful gift for me to receive and I am so so so grateful! Thank you so much, really!!

Like a Genie?😃 So sweet!! I am glad you liked the gift.

I feel that this had a bit of a different tone/style than your other pieces and I would love to see more of it! Well, more of your writing in general, of course. Remember once you had mentioned a "getting carried away" scene at Arora house with someone's inability to control their vocalizations??? Came up in my mind the other day...make that story your next project?! Hee if the muse cooperates of course. But yeah after seeing how you have managed to balance emotionally fulfilling development with pure hotness, I am even more eager to see that scene from your hands!!

Can you please tell me what was it? See, I am not a literature student and I don't understand much about writing. What was that difference?

The carried away thing, I must right.. I will some time. But it's so hard to get the words right for it.

So ok, thank you thank you thank you! I will print this out and keep it on hand to read when I need cheering up. It's just a beautiful little bite of suggested romance and sensuality, with so much satisfying emotional heft to support it. Love it beyond words and feel so thankful that we have connected over the last few months on the forum! You're the best, thank you again!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

It's my pleasure!🤗

Originally posted by: riyya6

Beautiful 👍🏼

Originally posted by: samarth300

Aww!! I really wanted to see Abhi saying that he loves how she is, and loved how you left us to wonder what happens next 😳 But I love how u explained Abhi's POV, it all felt so real. And Pragya looking up his previous gfs on Google was soo cute

Originally posted by: -Martinski-

ASDFGGHJKL!

Twin!!!!!!! This is Love! This is everything!

How beautiful!!!

And DUDE OMG

. Pragya held his dog tag chain that was dangling on her face and pulled him closer. "Love me till the break of dawn" she said in barely a whisper.

WHY WHY WHY YOU KNOW WHY!!! 😆 that dog tag image.

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Originally posted by: rbb1

Amazing story beautifully written I like how he said he likes her in the Anarkali dresses, it's was nice to see Pragya taking charge, I wish we could read the letter