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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Diahh

Awww MinMin Mehra!! 😳 This is like so sweet!!! It's pretty short compared to your other writings, but still the effect is the same!! So beautiful! I loved the way you show how their bond is deepening. How Abhi trusts and respects Pragya's opinions! Not entertaining any female attention thrown his way!😆 Waiting to go home to Pragya, his Daadi's choice!! And the song!! Awww!! I love it all!!

Good job MMM!! Lots of love and hugs!!

P.s. I had totally forgotten about this song Fic thread! It felt good to read another song Fic after so long! 😃


Dhinglu yes comparatively shorter but only because the song itself is so short...plus it was supposed to be a Drabble...but couldn't resist putting in the song! It's still stuck in my head! So happy you liked it! I seem to do a lot of writing to songs!

*hugs and love to you.mwah mwah*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simsim25

MIN! I loved it! That's all I can say! Simply superb! <3


Thank you sim darling!
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Posted: 10 years ago
MMM'U good work with that songfic!!!!

I like the whole feel of it...how his songs changed from what they used to be. I think we might get to see this concept or theme on the show too 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'll ask Mina to post my songfic soon. It's almost complete 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

"Numb"

By Linkin Park

I'm tired of being what you want me to be
Feeling so faithless, lost under the surface
Don't know what you're expecting of me
Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)

Abhi is tired of being what Tanu wants him to be. He can't do everything that she wants him to do. He is pressurized by Tanu to do things. He doesn't know what Tanu expects from him. He is tangled in an underlying tendency or force that runs in the opposite direction to the apparent one. Everytime he goes near her is a mistake towards her.


[Chorus:]
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there
Become so tired, so much more aware
I'm becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you

Abhi has become so anesthetized that he can't feel her there. He has become so weary that he is has become much conscious. All he wants is to be by himself, not the thing that Tanu wants him to be.

Can't you see that you're smothering me,
Holding too tightly, afraid to lose control?
'Cause everything that you thought I would be
Has fallen apart right in front of you.
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you.
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
And every second I waste is more than I can take.

Abhi thinks that Tanu can't see that she is suffocating him. She is too close to Abhi that she thinks that she'll lose Abhi. It is because whatever she wants Abhi to be, that Abhi hasn't fulfilled cuz of confessing his love to Pragya. He wants to be away from him. He feels that any step he takes towards her or every second he'll spend with her would prove futile.

[Chorus:]
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there,
Become so tired, so much more aware
I'm becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you.

Abhi has become so anesthetized that he can't feel her there. He has become so weary that he is has become much conscious. All he wants is to be by himself, not the thing that Tanu wants him to be.

[Chorus:]
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there.
(I'm tired of being what you want me to be)
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there.
(I'm tired of being what you want me to be)

Abhi has become so anesthetized that he can't feel her there. He is tired of what Tanu wants to make of him. He wants to break-up with Tanu.

My first song-fic ever. Hope u liked it.
Love,
Adah
😊
Edited by -kanishka- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow Min awesome and the song is beautiful ...it was perfect for abhigya ...you have done a very good job
I can't wait to read more from you
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Adah! Great exploration of some Abhi angst. Really liked it. Do write more songfics! Thanks for adding to this thread :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Adah!
Loved your song Fic!

Abhi feeling suffocated because of Tannu! Loved the song and the scene! Great job! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww thanks guys..I read Mina's songfic and as always, i was inspired to write it from her. Numb is actually one of my favorite songs so I decided to write on it. And it came in my mind very well too. And I'll dedicate this song-fic to my former best friend, Tanvi because of whom I developed an interest in english songs. Thanks Tanvi and thanks Mina for being my inspiration.
Love,
Adah
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted in AT 76

So What by P!NK - Pragya OS

Soon after Lohri, Pragya learns that Tanu and Abhi have finalized their engagement . Daadi doesn't know yet but otherwise "It's All Decided", or so TaAbhi claim.

I guess I just lost my husband, I don't know where he went

Between Bulbul, Purab, Raghav, and Aakash, Pragya decides that eff everything, she's gonna have a wild night to celebrate her freedom. BB and Raghav encourage her, Purab tries to be a voice of reason, Aakash is quietly supportive and decides to hang around to clean up any messes that might need cleaning because he's mad at Abhi...

I got a brand new attitude
And I'm gonna wear it tonight
I'm gonna get in trouble
I wanna start a fight


Since Abhi's not there to stop her and BB and Raghav are there to keep her from losing her mind, Pragya has a peg or two of whisky and resolves to enjoy herself

So, so what?
I'm still a rock star
I got my rock moves
And I don't need you


Raghav takes her out dancing and...damn it, they run into TaAbhi...but Pragya decides to show that she doesn't care, Chudail is welcome to her new fiance, Pragya is so over the whole fake marriage nonsense, she never loved him and she doesn't miss him and she doesn't need him...

And guess what
I'm having more fun
And now that we're done
I'm gonna show you tonight

I'm alright
I'm just fine
And you're a tool!

So, so what?
I am a rock star
I got my rock moves
And I don't want you tonight

Of course, Abhi damn well does have a problem with this greaseball Raghav appearing from nowhere, bringing Fuggy who is STILL is biwi because there hasn't been a divorce yet thank you very much, to this kind of club of all places, and letting her drink alcohol, and - oh, yes, Abhi has a problem...and Pragya finds that maybe she has a problem, too, because ok Chudail, he's your fiance, but you could have the decency to wait until he's legally free before sucking his face in public, don't you think?

I'm gonna get in trouble
My ex will start a fight

Na-na-na-na, na-na, na
He's gonna start a fight
Na-na-na-na, na-na, na
We're all gonna get in a fight!


TaAbhi and RaGhya get kicked out of the club and the still-married couple get into a screaming match on the street, completely forgetting about their companions...luckily Aakash is still around to keep the press away as AbhiGya air their grievances...

You weren't there
You never were
You want it all
But that's not fair

I gave you life
I gave my all
You weren't there
You let me fall

But argument leads to confession and suddenly in the most sordid sad moment they both realize that it isn't true...they're not done...they're not better off apart...they're not rockstars without each other...

No no, no no
I don't want you tonight
You weren't there
I'm gonna show you tonight

And...writhing with tension, on the brink of something new, confused and mistrustful but breathing openly for the first time in months...they go home. Together.

the end
Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago

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