Abhi Kicks Pragya Out, Biggest Mistake Ever

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So I heard a rumour that Abhi will soon kick Pragya out, and well i began writing a little something this is the first part do enjoy :)

Part one...
Abhi grabbed Pragya's hand and began pulling her towards the door, everyone watched on in shock as he pulled her to the front of him, directly in front of the door but in the house, "Daadi trusted you" Abhi said in a low pitch "you betrayed her and you betrayed your mother, you helped your sister elope with Purab, didn't you?" Abhi shouted as everyone watched on in horror, Sarla, Daadi, Aliya, Tanu and the entire Mehra family looked on as Abhi insulted Pragya again and again "I mean what should I have expected from a shameless middle class woman right, didn't your mother raise you to have better behavior, than ruining other people li"v"e--.." but before Abhi could finish Pragya placed a tight slap on Abhi's left cheek "Bas, I have heard enough, I have stood quiet for the past month from my wedding night enduring the torture from a loveless, meaningless, relationship less marriage, given by you, Aliya and Bhara mahil Tanu, and tum? Tum refer to hum as shameless?" Pragya said in one deep breath with tears flowing out of her eyes, Sarla stood rooted to her spot as she remembered Pragya's rejection from this marriage and how she forced her, her heart shattered as she heard all the pain and torturous moments Pragya endured because she was fulfilling her duty as a daughter and now a bahu, Daadi couldn't comprehend all what was being said but she knew and felt the pain of every word that came out of Pragya's mouth and then Abhi interrupted "Cupa rah!! Shut the hell up chasmish" Abhi shouted as he grabbed Pragya's mungalsutra with his right hand and pushed her out the door with his left "This relation is over, understand OVER!!" as Pragya fell back out the door, Abhi's hold on her mungalsutra was so strong the chain broke as she reached out the house, Pragya dropped to the floor as the beads of her chain began to fall each one hitting the ground sending small shocks through Pragya's body as she watched on with bloodshot eyes, as tears soon began to block her vision she began grabbing the beads up desperately, as Sarla and Daadi ran towards her with tears in their eyes. Aliya and Tanu were smirking evilly as there plans were through, they had succeeded in throwing her out, as Sarla stepped out Daadi closely behind, Abhi stopped her in her tracks, as he closed the door, behind him, allowing no one to pass. "She did this to herself..Daadi, Pragya bahuta selfish, she ruined Aliya life not once but twice, she hid the truth and she deserves this" Abhi said angrily with a pinch of hurt in his voice "all she did was act Daadi trust me, it was all an act, she was just being nice because she knew..', and again Daadi slapped Abhi so hard it echoed through the entire house, "you speak of betrayal, you tortured her, fro something she didn't do he ill treated her, you broke ties with her, you disgraced her, and it was because she deserved it, Aaa----bb"h-I", and Daadi grabbed her chest as she began falling to the ground, but Abhi caught her, Aliya and the other members rushed towards her "call the doctor now" Abhi shouted in shock "Daadi, open your eyes, open your eyes. "Your Daadi suffered a minor heart attack she's in the clear, but as soon as she is up, you need to visit the hospital and check this out, and be sure to keep her away from stress understand?" "Doctor saap ill see you out" Akash said. "ek more, give her space, but monitor her for the night and get her to the hospital first thing in the morning" the doctor said as he walked out following Akash.

part 2 will be posted soon

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p.s part 2 page 2 posted enjoy http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4156325&TPN=2


part 3 page 3 posted http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4156325&TPN=3


Part 4 page 3 posted http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4156325&TPN=3&#p113040591

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intense!!!! I wanna know the next!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Daddi slaps Abhi and knows the truth...good going...lets see how the 2nd chapter forms up. Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it so much.
Loved that Pragya slapped him good he deserves that.
But the icing on the cake was Daadi slapping her beloved grandson and her dialogue was spot on.Glad Daadi know the damage her grandchildren has created and see their real face.
I think with Daadi being sick Pragya will have the upper hand
Hope that Daadi will be fine
Please do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and brilliant work dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow very intense n touchy start. do continue waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

Thanks to everyone, this is how I wished it should be. Do enjoy and leave me comments. J

Sarla helped Pragya into their home, Bulbul rushed out, "Di? Tum teek hai Di? Maa what happened, why is Di home? Di?" Bulbul cried out to her sister one last time as she walked towards her old room and went in and locked the door. Pragya fell to the floor crying continuously as all her good and bad moments flashed back into her head like an old cartoon playing, feelings consumed her as she remembered Abhi's words before the incident " I will make Daadi and Sarla aunty hate you so much you would kill yourself" those words kept flashing in her head over and over, as she curled up on the floor, "Maa, Daadi mujhe marv kar deje? Mujhe marv kar deje?" Pragya kept repeating until she fell asleep. "maa let me go check on her please maa?" Bulbul tried but Sarla refused "go and sleep now" Sarla shouted tensely as Bulbul retreated to her room with tears, knowing exactly what had happened, she saw Pragya holding her broken mungalsutra as she walked in, she saw her blood shot eyes she felt her pain, and Bulbul knew again she was the cause. Bulbul couldn't sleep, she sneaked out of the house, she needed air she needed to think and then she called him "Purab because of me, because I chose love and because I love you my Di is broken, her marriage is broken, and it's all my fault" Bulbul shouted in the phone, "but Purab itll all get better, ill fix it and Di will never get hurt again because of me..." "Bulbul what do you mean by that Bulbul? bulbul??" "PURAB!!!" bulbul shouted as the phone call got disconnected, as the car hit bulbul head on, sent her phone flying adjacent to her and sending her flying into the middle of the street, people gathered around her "Maam. Maam, someone call an ambulance" one woman shouted, the driver rushed out of his vehicle "I didn't see her, she came out of nowhere I swear" horrified at what had just taken the place the driver was in complete shock. Pragya fell asleep crying as Sarla sat outside her door, begging her to open up and then Pragya yelled "BULBULLL!!!!" as she woke out of her dream, she opened the door and grabbed her maa, "Maa where is Bulbul, maa where is Bulbul?" Pragya kept repeating over and over, as they went to check, Purab was trying again and again to get through to Bulbul but all his efforts went into vain, his last hope was Pragya after all that had occurred he was tense to call, "Namaste, Di", "Purab where is Bulbul, where is she?" Pragya yelled into the phone, "Di I don't know", as Purab explained his conversation with Bulbul and then what happened, as Sarla and Pragya were now about to leave, "Sarla ji, your daughter got into an accident, she's on her way" Bhai saap said as he saw Sarla and Pragya. Sarla stood rooted to the ground processing what she was told, she began to sway and then she collapsed, "Maa, maa!!" Pragya yelled as she fell down and held on to Sarla head. The ambulance came quickly as they rushed her in Pragya stopped shocked out of her mind as she saw Bulbul bleeding from her head, stomach, foot, "BULBUL!!!!!" Pragya shouted towards her sister, "maam, is she your bahin? And is she your maa?" "ji yes what happened to my sister?" "Maam she got hit by a car, she lost a lot of blood you cannot come in as Pragya tried to follow them "Bulbul youll be okay I promise Bulbul I promise." "maa tum teek hai I promise I promise" Pragya cried as the doctors rolled Bulbul into one theatre and Sarla into another. Pragya stood devastated, as she looked on in horror as she remembered seeing Bulbul's body, and seeing her mother fall to the ground unconscious. She couldn't phantom what happened but she knew that Abhishek Mehra was the one who was going to pay and Pragya was hell bent on revenge, she was determined to show his real face to everyone.

Thanks a lot for the kind words and encouragement I am not sure as to how long this fanfic will be but I guess where my thoughts take me so I shall write I do hope you enjoyed this and stick around cause part three is on its way J

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it so much Roxy J.

Is was sad, hope that BB and Sarla maa will be fine.
Please do update soon can't wait to read what is going to happen next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 Do enjoy I hope it's good, let me know at the end. Pragya was shattered all she could think of was his words "I will make Daadi and Sarla aunty hate you so much you would kill yourself". "oh Mr. Abhishek Mehra I tolerated every insult, every torture quietly but now you've gone too far" Pragya thought as a tear rolled down her eye, thinking about the states her sister and maa were in. Purab ran towards Pragya, "Di what happened, where is Bulbul is she okay, Di Di answer me Di" but all Pragya did was looked at him and walked away. "Nurse, is there any news on the girl, and where is her mother?" Purab asked impatiently, "Are you family? Sir I will ask you again are you family?" the nurse repeated, "Yes he is family, Knna m" ch" bh'" Pragya's voice shook as she stomached the words out, as she moved towards him and hugged him crying coherently "Purab its all my fault, it's all my fault, maa is unconscious and Bulbul?..." Pragya said as she drifted off into a sleeping spell. When Pragya awoke she was in one of the rooms, hooked up to an IV cause she was severely dehydrated, as she got back to her senses Pragya ran out into the hall and there she saw him, "Abhishek Mehra, your sins will catch up to understand and you will pay severely, you will never be happy in life and the people you love the most will betray you the worse, this is a daughters promise and a sisters curse understand look AT ME" as she shouted in his direction. "Abhi turned in horror as he saw Pragya in a state of shock, as she looked at him turning with a wheelchair, she saw Daadi, Pragya rushed over to her, "Daadi whats wrong, what happened?" "Pra"g"y" "CHUP!! I didn't ask you" as Abhi was about to tell her, "don't even say my name or my family's understand" Pragya shouted, Daadi reached out towards Pragya and held her hand "Bacce, mein teek ho" Daadi said in a weak tone as Pragya pulled away realizing Aliya and Tanu were approaching, "Pragya why are you here bacce?" "vo, Daadi this is all Abhi's and Aliya's fault, all their fault, they were hell bent on destroying me for something I did not do, and because of them my sister got into an accident she was wondering aimlessly thinking bout what Abhi and Aliya would do me and then she got hit by a car, and maa when she found out she.." and she paused as it finally registered to her that her mom was unconscious (Pragya please marry, I may not have that long again, and Abhi, Daadi said he is a very good lardka please Pragya for my sake at least let me see you marry.) FB ends "maa fell unconscious" Pragya said crying uncontrollably, Abhi stood rooted in his position as he heard every word come out of Pragya's mouth. He couldn't believe his ears, nor could he understand. Aliya and Tanu stopped directly behind Abhi, "and tum Tanu, you said you misinterpreted me, and you said you would tell Abhishek where I was going but I should have known better to trust a vile woman that would see another woman's husband behind her back, you lied to him in the name of love? Everything is fair in love and war right isn't that what you said, because you felt Abhi was getting close to me huh speak nah? Nahi to right? Im lying again? Teek hai, Abhi ask her where she found that letter, I dare you, and Aliya you will never be happy in life, ruining relations will never get you anywhere and love will never come to you this is my promise" "Daadi see, she did this on purpose she hurt me on purpose", "Chup raho Aliya, just leave and take that woman with you" Daadi shouted "Daadi please its all that behenji's fault Daadi mere baat suno" Aliya pleaded "Aliya didn't Daadi ask you to leave, go now and bas this nonsense and take your friend with you" said Abhi in a harsh tone. "Daadi mujhe marv kar deje for everything, I tried but I failed, they failed me", Pragya said as she reached down and touched Daadi feet for blessings. "Pragya? Pragya suno.." Abhi said as Pragya looked at him with venom in her eyes, as she wiped her tears looking at Daadi then at him as she walked away...

Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely
Chhan Se Jo Toote Koi Sapna
If a dream breaks in a single moment

Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely

Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely

Chhan Se Jo Toote Koi Sapna
If a dream breaks in a single moment
Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely
Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely

Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna
When no loved one remains
Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely
Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely
Soona Laage Re
Seems lonely

Roothi Roothi Saari Raatein
All the nights seem upset
Pheeke Pheeke Saare Din
All the days are colourless
Viraani Si Viraani Hai
There is immense loneliness
Tanhaayi Si Tanhaayi Hai
There is immense solitude
Aur Ik Hum Hain Pyaar Ke Bin Har Pal Chhin
And I am here spending every moment without a trace of love

Jag Soona Soona Laage

The world seems lonely

Jag Soona Soona Laage
The world seems lonely


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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb.. plz continue soon.. :D

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