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Mina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: shivaniaroraji
superb stroyy👏
Please do write an epilogue for this😊

Thank you dear! Really appreciate you reading and commenting throughout this story :)

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rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

i think i was with pragya the whole time - half laughing half outrage 😛
loved the update and of course the story

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Anbhigya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Last part????? Noo nooo nooo... Plzzz nooo... I want more... Atleast one part more.. Pretty plzzz... End should be aftr dat year.. When they royally dump idea.. Not even a year.. Six months... Cum on.. Give it a thought!!*Look m givin u cute waala glare*.. Bas one more.. Request.. Plea... Everything.. Just try na one last time..

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Renukha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Oh, Mina such a cute ending!!😉

Okay, since you asked, I think why Abhi saw her as a future because somewhere all along he had already developed feelings for her. Hence all the doubt and confusion about her, even after she left the house. I mean, he was constantly thinking about her. So, when he knows she is innocent and he is guilty, he finally could admit it to himself and Pragya. That is why only now he can actually know for himself that Tannu has outgrown him. I don't think they are in love, yet. Somewhere along the way, they started to feel something, but never had the chance to reveal what they felt. Now, that all the misunderstandings are cleared and everything is (kinda) solved, they finally have a chance. There was once my mom told me, that you don't forget the good memories, just because there were bad ones too along the way. And that suits Abhi and Pragya in this story. Instead of holding grudges and feeling guilty, for the sake of good memories they are willing to bury it all and start again!!❤️

Don't worry! The ending is very nice!! And Abhi was consistent throughout the story. Immature and childish Abhi is fun to read too!!!😃

Edited by renukha871 - 11 years ago

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Mina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: rutu83
i think i was with pragya the whole time - half laughing half outrage 😛
loved the update and of course the story

hehehehe what a cute comment! thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts throughout the story, i really enjoy your comments 😊

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Mina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Anbhigya
Last part????? Noo nooo nooo... Plzzz nooo... I want more... Atleast one part more.. Pretty plzzz... End should be aftr dat year.. When they royally dump idea.. Not even a year.. Six months... Cum on.. Give it a thought!!*Look m givin u cute waala glare*.. Bas one more.. Request.. Plea... Everything.. Just try na one last time..

ok ok i'm sorry...when they royally dump the idea of waiting, you mean? lol. everyone wants them together fast right. ok your cute waala glare is powerful. i hear your request. and it scares me. but i'll try 😊 😉

thanks for commenting!!

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Mina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: renukha871
Oh, Mina such a cute ending!!😉
Okay, since you asked, I think why Abhi saw her as a future because somewhere all along he had already developed feelings for her. Hence all the doubt and confusion about her, even after she left the house. I mean, he was constantly thinking about her. So, when he knows she is innocent and he is guilty, he finally could admit it to himself and Pragya. That is why only now he can actually know for himself that Tannu has outgrown him. I don't think they are in love, yet. Somewhere along the way, they started to feel something, but never had the chance to reveal what they felt. Now, that all the misunderstandings are cleared and everything is (kinda) solved, they finally have a chance. There was once my mom told me, that you don't forget the good memories, just because there were bad ones too along the way. And that suits Abhi and Pragya in this story. Instead of holding grudges and feeling guilty, for the sake of good memories they are willing to bury it all and start again!!❤️
Don't worry! The ending is very nice!! And Abhi was consistent throughout the story. Immature and childish Abhi is fun to read too!!!😃

wheee thanks for your thoughts!! i really appreciate it. i agree, they've both developed the beginnings of some kind of feeling, and then it was just a matter of getting them both to see that they should give it a chance. and maybe since abhi had more bad behaviour to make up for, he was more insistent on pursuing this chance, as opposed to pragya being willing to walk away with a broken heart. i mean maybe that's not what you're saying, it's just what your thoughts made me think!

thanks for your comment! so pleased that you liked it! and lol at succeeding at portraying abhi consistently. i'm so glad it seems that way 😊

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vivkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Lovely update. You have written it beautifully. Abhi have to become perfect husband n take all nakhras of Pragya will be good. Feels like you should not end here.

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Simmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Loved it simply because abhi was abhi!! The story sounded so realistic !! Loved all of it !! Thank you!!

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Wonderfully written...very convincing...loved it...their conversation. . .their expressions...pragya trying to refuse...abhi very cute...his thoughts...his words...trying trying till he succed to convince her... just awesome mina...great work👏👏👏...vl b super happy if u write one more part...😉...thanku for the beautiful ss...