Abhigya and Rabul SS-'Tabah' CHAPTER 3 Pg 6 updated

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Hey guys! if you remeber i made a post saying that i will write a story on the couples.And so here it is. . .
I know someone wanted OS and someone wanted FF. . . but the story in my mind was not too short niether long so i decided to write a short story.Here is the first part. . . Enjoy :D

(please forget the real track going on. . . our rabul are in love deeply. . . and abhigya wohi milke bhi mile nahi. . . as all wanted suresh and aliya are married and are happy or unhappy. . . whocares!!)

CHAPTER 1

Pragya- bulbul . . mujhe nahi jana. .our dekh kharcha bhi kitna ho jaye ga.

Bulbul- oho di. tu paiso ki chinta mat kar.wo sab mein sambhal loongi.

Bulbul wa taking her somewhere and they finnaly reached their destination.They sat in front of 30-35 aged man wearing a specs.It was eye doctor

doc- yes,how can i help you?

Bulbul-ji hammen lence lagwane the,hamne appointmenet bhi liya tha Pyagya Arora ke naam se.

doc- yes. . yes. . do come in ms.pragya arora

Pragya nodded and followed the doctor.Bulbul waited outside only.
After sometime, Pragya came outside.Her eyes were looking so beautifull without the specs.

Bulbul- wow di!tu to badi acchi lag rahi hai,are ek baar bahar to nikal yanha se dekhna sare ladke tujhpe latto ho jaenge. . .
Pragya-haan. .haan ab theek h. ab chale
Bulbul- haan chalo mene kab mana kiya. . .

And both the girls walked away gigling.

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He was walking.Thinking how lucky he is.Bodygaurds behind,media in frond and fans all around.But everyone don'nt have luck. He waved a last bye to all the people around and walked up to the car and sat in

"he abhi"he knowed that voice.He turned his face tp the left to see who was really sitting beside him in the car.
"Purab"he smiled.

Purab- just give a minute.Driver is just coming. Abhi nodded.

"beta?"
Abhi looked at an old lady peeping him from the window
"beta bhagwan ke naam pe kuch dede"
The lady was having a 1 year old child in her arms.A 5 year old child standing beside her. And they were looking pppr and hungry.
Abhi was about to say something but a strong hand pushed the lady away.It was the driver.

D- eee.nikal yahan se.Pata nahi ye kiski gadi h,chal nikal.

Purab watched the whole scean and was angry now.He was about to scold the driver but abhi stoped him

Purab- Bhai par. . .
Abhi-nahi purab. . . not now.
And they drove away.Whole time purab was thinking why abhi stopped him .Does he have really a heart of stone.

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Pragya and bulbul were at home now.Everyone was busy in somework.Just then bulbul got a massage.She smiled after reading it.

Bulbul- maa. . . mujhe ek kaam yaad a gaya. . .karke aati hoon.And she ran away out.

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PRECAP-A lil bit rabul romance and abhigya meet.

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And here it is the chapter one.Please like or comment if you liked it.If you would like or comment then would be deppressed and could be not able to write more.Thank you.
Like this post if want pms of my updates.
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watsup thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey its a nice start... please carry on and update soon.. 😉 😉
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heyyy awsmeee start update sooon
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what happen guys only two comments
you are free to write anything
kuch to likho
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: watsup

Hey its a nice start... please carry on and update soon.. 😉 😉


Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum...nice start...all the best...continue sooon
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Amazing start yaar. Loved it. waiting for the next part.
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awesome !!!! 👏👏 update soon ❤️
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Originally posted by: Komal1004

awesome !!!!👏👏 update soon❤️


thank you kiran
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow finally
beautiful strt yaar plz continue

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