~*~RanKan Short Story Contest Voting~*~

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Kuchh Is Tara'ians to the Voting Round of Ranbir and Kanya Short Story Contest.

Like all other contest this contest was not as successful, but thats okay.

I know you all are excited to read the entries we have recieved so I'll stop talking.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ENTRIES:

Entry # 1

so we start off kanya wakes up in the middle of the night
she realizes that she had a dream in which ranbir broke up with her
kanya then starts crying seeing that its reality
and he did leave her
kanya goes down where she sees a candle
and she suddenly turns into natasha
she goes to the nandas
and sees if ranbirs there
but we notice that ranbirs behind her
natash then starts laughing
and says
"what did u think,i dont noe anything about kanya"
we then realize that kanya noes that shese natasha
and shese BAD!!!
ranbir is shocked
ranbir-soo u noe ur kanya?????
kanya-yess i noe im kanya, and i also noe im natasha
i have no split personality im just natasha!!
ranbir-Y????
kanya-because u ruined my life, u ruined my familys reputation, i loved ayaan, and u ruined the engagement
kanya-YY ranbir y???
ranbir-but that dosent mean u can kill me???
kanya-i hate u ranbir, loveing u and likeing u was a trick
ranbir-crying
kanya-laughs and says, today i realized ur weak, i noe u love kanya, but kanya dosent love u she will never love u
ranbir-sadddd= [
kanya-then says, my family is all in this too, we hate u!!!


Entry # 2

Kabhi Toh Mileingey

So the story starts with Ranbir sitting on a sofa just thinking abt wat life has done to him.He loved his wife then y the hell is this happening to him. Before marriage Ranbir met a girl named Mukti. When he saw her he was in love wid her lets say it was love at first sight. And then they got married but Ranbir duz know tht everything will changed so early. His wife don?t give him time he is always on parties and they have no kids. Ranbir was so lonely he want someone to listen to his problem.He realized that his wife was after his money after marriage she was completely changed.Ranbir was a business his father died when he was 10 yrs old.His mother looked after him nd she was also a business woman she was a very strong person.But she also died few months bach.Ranbir was her only child.But his life was so depressing nd sad tht he hardly talks to someone.He just wish that someone will come in his life who will love him for who he is.

Next Day At The Office:

Ranbir was working in the office.And there was a lot of work he cant do it in just one day.So he decided to hire a PA(Personal Secretary) so that she could help him. Lots of girls came to work with Ranbir Nanda. But they were all after him and his money no one was interested in working. Ranbir was tired of taking interview of each and every girl.

As he was looking a girl came running into his room she needed the job badly. So she came into his room without even asking his permission and it was none other then Kanya.

Kanya was a sweet middle class girl. She lives with her mom her father left her and her mother alone. She has a little brother name Harpal. But he was little so he cant do any job. They were not very poor. Kanya?s mother do the job of tailoring. She sew clothes of people living nearby but still they don?t get enough money to run the expenses of the house nd demands of her little brother. So Kanya decided to do a job in a big company. She wants to apply for the manager job but as she saw this job in the newspaper she just went for it without thinking.

So back in the office

As Kanya entered Ranbir?s cabin he was surprised that someone entered his cabin without taking his permission. But he was a good and calm boss so he said to the girl:

R:Excuse me miss the first rule of this office is to enter into my cabin by taking my permission btw who r u I haven?t seen u here?re u new or what?

K:I m sorry sir but I m here for the job of PA.I m sorry I m lte but sir plz give me a chance I really need this job.

Ranbir was staring at her continuously. He didn?t know what was wrong with him he kept looking into her eyes when she talks her beautiful long hairs. He never felt this way before for anyone not even his wife. But he just came out of his thoughts and said:

R:So miss sit down let me take ur interview first then I?ll see if u r able to do this job or not. First question are you married?

Kanya was shocked to hear this and said: Excuse Me

Ranbir:Oh m sorry I mean whats ur name?

K:My name is Kanya sir

R:hmm Kanya nice name so tell me Kanya wud you do anything for me I mean wud u do anything for this office nd to take this job

Ranbir doesn?t know wats wrong wid him y is he asking such stupid questions.

K:Yes sir I will work really hard nd I wud never disappoint you sir plz I really need this job.

K:OMG!Really thank u so much sir so when shud I start

R:today

K:thank u sir

And then they shake hand.As they touched each other?s hand Ranbir and Kanya both feel the current going through their body.But Ranbir was not leaving her hand she was saying again and again:Sir plz leave my hand but Ranbir wasn?t listening and he was just staring into her eyes and they have a eyelock.After few moments Ranbir?s cabin dorr was knocked so they both came into their senses.

As Kanya sees Ranbir crying she felt really bad and confused. She thought that every rich business man is very happy in his life. But Ranbir was different he was not like other rich people who feel very proud of themselves. He was a normal person who loves to live normally and who loves to have a great personal life.Ranbir didn?t know that Kanya was still standin there he just walk right into his chair nd put his head down on the table and he started crying.Kanya didn?t know wat to do to stop him first she decided to go but she don?t know y that she cant leave him like this he is crying like hell.Finally Kanya said:

Sir are you ok?

Ranbir was shocked to hear Kanya?s voice nd felt really embarrassed nd wipe his tears and said:

Ya I m fine you can go now

Kanya don?t know y but she waas quite concerned abt Ranbir.She has never seen a man crying like that but she just left and Ranbir was sitting there sad and lonely.Ranbir?s wife again called him and said:Aaj jaldi ghar aa jao nd wat abt the servants tumne unhein bta diya na

R:Han don?t worry maine bta diya hai I will be home soon.

By saying this Ranbir left his office.As he was going he saw Kanya working for few mins he was just standing there looking at her.He thought she was the most beautiful girl tht he has ever met.Then Ranbir left his office.Kanya went in Ranbir?s cabin to collect some files as she was collecting them she saw Ranbir has left his coat there.She ran after him but he was gone.She asked one of his employee to give it to him when he comes back but they said they are very busy and she shud go to his house nd give it to him.Kanya was very scared of the thought of going to his house.She thought he was a very angry man but then she said:Ok don?t worry I?ll just go when all my work is done.

When Ranbir reach home he saw that his house was decorated he remembered the day he got married and tears filled his eyes.He then saw his wife coming down of her room.

Its time for the party and on the other hand Kanya was about to come to Ranbir?s house.Ranbir house is now full of guests and music is on and all the people were dancing.

Kanya knocked the door but no one answers.Kanya saw that the door was open so she went in.It was very crowded Kanya was quite scared to go in.She is scared that someone will insult her at any time.She was searching for Ranbir but he was not there.She than saw a waiter and asked him:Where is Mr.Ranbir Nanda he said that he is up in his room u can go and meet him there

Kanya went upstairs and knocked the door but no one answered so she again went inside.It was quite dark there except for one lamp which is lightening on Ranbir?s bed side.She saw that Ranbir was sitting on his bed just crying and praying that please God do some magic I want someone to love me truly.Kanya didn?t hear wat Ranbir was saying.She wants him to stop crying she cant see him like this anymore.So she went to him and sat down on the floor.She holds his hand and said:Sir plz don?t cry if u want to tell me the reason of ur crying I m ready to hearb it but plz don?t cry like this I m feeling terrible plz sir stop crying.

Kanya was now feeling his pain. She just wants to hug him tightly but she cant.She was helpless.Ranbir was just crying crying and crying.

Kanya was quite upset now she didn?t know how to comfort Ranbir.She was still holding is hand.She wants to know the reason of his crying so that she could help him.But Ranbir was doing nothing else crying.Finally he said in a very angry and loud voice tears still running down his cheecks and he let go of Kanya?s hand he was now standing

R:Why?Why God Why?Why is this happening to me?i havent done anything wrong I?ve never hurt anybody.I loved my mother and father then y r u doing this to me?.Every person I loved has taken away from me.First my father then my mother.My mother always wanted me to be strong nd face the difficulties.But I just cant face this I m lonely and I m alone.I don?t have anyone to share my feelings with.Why God Why me Whyyyy???

Kanya was quite shocked abt his behaviour she now stands up and say:

Sir its ok plzz control yourself like ur mother said be strong and face the

difficulties

Its ok sir I can understand you are really hurt.And in this position everyone needs someone to talk to or someone he can hug and just cry.Dont worry sir I m always there for you if u need anything or any help I m always there for you just give me a call.And now I think me and you should become friends.Ranbir smiled

Kanya was quite happy to see him smiling she never saw him smiling.Wenever he sees him he is just crying.Now finally Ranbir is smiling.

K:So sir are we friends

R:Ya of course but don?t call me sir u can call me Ranbir.

K:Well ok,can I ask you something Ranbir

R:Ya of course wat u wanna ask

K:Sir downstairs is a party going on can I ask y u r not in the party?

Ranbir was silent he wants to tell Kanya everything but he cant.He was afaraid that something bad will happen

K:Sir if you don?t wanna tell then its ok but promise me one thing

R:Wat?

K:You will never cry again you will be strong very strong to handle these small situations.Difficulties are part of our life we just cant give up becoz of them.We shud carry on wid our life and make it as beautiful as possible.

As Kanya was saying this Ranbir was staring at her with such a great passion.Ranbir wants to listen to her for all night.Then he said:

I promise

R:Ok then Take Care Bye Bye

K:Bye

Next day Ranbir was quite happy.He kept thinking abt the last night.He thinks aabt Kanya and thought she?s so beautiful and caring she is so sweet.Ranbir was usually in Kanya thoughts he don?t know what is happening to him is this love?.He cant say that this is love becoz he cant love someone he is married.The thought of marriage makes him very upset.But the night where Kanya came and console him.

Ranbir was getting ready for office.His wife came in his room.They don?t even share the same room anymore.His wife saw tht Ranbir was different today.He was not tht quite he was wearing his new cool suit she was confused but she duznt care abt him anymore so she ignored it but she wants to know wat is on Ranbir?s mind.

Next day Ranbir went to office really fast to meet Kanya.Kanya was there she was so involved in her work tht she didn?t noticed Ranbir has come.

Ranbir Kanya was standing in front of each other there was silent between them.They both want to hug each other.Finally Kanya ran and hugged Ranbir really tight.Ranbir also felt the current running through his body.Now he was sure that this is love.

Ranbir holds Kanya?s face at tell her to look at him.Next second he was kissing her so passionately.Its like the greatest feeling for Ranbir in the world and Kanya was kissing him back.They both love each other so much.Ranbir just wants to kiss Kanya so bad.That he was no letting go Kanya feeling were the same.

K:Ranbir I love you.I love you so much I don?t know y ur just perfect for me.I want you so bad.I?ve never loved anyone before.Your the one I was looking for.You complete me Ranbir.Wats your answer I want your answer do you love me or not?

Ranbir was quite shocked and happy he almost forgot abt his marriage.He thought tht he was still single.

R:Kanya I love you too.Your such a sweetheart I was waiting for you all of my life.Where were you before I need u.I love you so much.Promise me one thing.

Next day Ranbir and Kanya both were very happy.Afterall they are in love.Ranbir was just so excited to meet Kanya he finally gets someone who loves him for who he is.And Kanya felt really secure and happy that she gets someone with whom she can share her all kind of feelings.They both were deeply in love.Kanya was leaving for office she was brushing her and singing songs her mother saw her.Kanya didn?t want to answer any of her questions.But still she asked her:

Kanya why are you so happy can I know the reason

K:Come on mom I m happy becozi got a great job and great people to work with and my boss is really sweet I m happy with my life so there?s nothing wrong with it.

Kanya?s mom knows tht there?s something going on which Kanya is not telling her about.Kanya mom has a very bad impression of rich and famous people.She thinks tht they are mean they don?t care about anyone else money and they are not trustable.

At the office, Mukti came.

Mukti saw Kanya and thought she?s a nice girl.But she knows tht Ranbir loves her and only her and he cant betray her that?s y she?s taking advantage of him.Then Mukti said to Kanya.

You can go now I want to talk to Ranbir in private.Kanya felt really bad and looked at Ranbir who was staring his wife and Kanya at the same time.Kanya left the room.

M:Ranbir I want to talk to you abt something really important

R:First tell me y are you here.In the past 4 months u never came to my office then y now?

M:Ranbir relax I just wanna tell you tht I m going to my frend?s house for two nights I?ve told the servants they will take care of everything.

R:Ok thank you very much now you can go

Mukti was really shocked Ranbir was never being rude to her before this was the first time.But she left the office.While leaving she saw Kanya and gives her a really harsh look.

K:Who was tht girl Ranbir

Ranbir has no answer.He just wants to cry.He was cheating Kanya.He wants to tell her everything but he was helpless.He doesn?t want to lose Kanya he truly loves her he don?t know wat to say to her.But he cant hide this truth forever but he cant tell her now.He decided he will tell her everything when the time?s right.

Kanya was still standing there waiting for his answer.There was silent between them.Finally Ranbir said:

Kanya I really wanted to tell u this before but I was afaraid tht u will get angry and leave me.

Kanya was scared of what he was saying.

K:Ranbir plz tell me what are u trying to say m scared.

R:First promise me u will not leave me

K:Ok I promise

R:Kanya she is my wife

K;Wat??

Kanya was shocked and she had tears in her eyes.She was about to faint.But Ranbir ran to her and hold her in his arms.Kanya plz listen to me u promised tht u will never leave me.Finally Kanya came to her senses and stand up.

K:Ranbir don?t touch me u betrayed me I never expected this from you.If you have a wife then y u came to me and said tht Kanya I love you.Ranbir I m really hurt.You hurt me.

Kanya was crying so much.Ranbir didn?t know wat to do to make her stop.Finally he made her sat on the sofa and he sat on the floor and he holdher hand and said:

Kanya I really love you.U have the right to be angry u can slap me you can do whatever uou like but plz don?t leave me I promise I will never hurt you again.I will leave Mukti.She is my wife but we don?t have tht relation she hardly gives me time.She was only after my money.I was depress until u came in my life.When I saw u I fell in love with you.I always thought tht someone will come in my life and loves me for who I m.Kanya I m really very sorry but I truly love you.I never meant to hurt you.Kanya plz understand me.

K:Ranbir I really love u and I will never forget u.But one thing is really clear this relation is over I don?t know if I can live without u maybe I will die.But as a woman I cant even think of stealing sumone?s husband m sorry Ranbir I had to go.But remember one think I love u maybe this feeling can keep u close to me.

By saying this Kanya left she was crying so hard she ran away.Ranbir was so shocked at wat Kanya said he cant even think of living without Kanya.Ranbir hated his wife now.He thought he never loved her.She betrayed him.He didn?t have a choice else giving divorce to his wife.

there was a knock on the door Ranbir said coming.It was Kanya she was looking so beautiful but her eyes were filled with tears and she was still crying a lot.

R:Kanya how r u now?Kanya plz listen to me I really love u Kanya plz talk to me

K:This is my resign sir I m leaving this job

R:Wat?No u cant leave this job and wats this sir I m Ranbir Kanya I love u y don?t u understand.

K:Maybe I don?t understand but seriously Ranbir I m really very hurt.

R:Are u running away from me?

He was now holding Kanya?s arms tightly

I will never let u forget me I love u soo much and I?ve decided

Ranbir cudnt complete his sentence becoz Kanya was not listening to him.Ranbir lose his grip and let Kanya go.But Ranbir said:I will never let u forget me Kanya tht I promise.

Ranbir than ran to the lawyer and signed the divorce papers and send them to his wife.His wife called him and asked for the meeting.Now Ranbir was waiting for Mukti she came she was red with anger she came and said:

M:What is this Ranbir is this some kind of joke

R:No its not I want a divorce from u plz sign the papers

M:Well if u want a divorce then u have to give me ur money.

R:Ok fine take whatever u want but plz just get lost from my life.

M:Ok here m signing the papers

As Ranbir and Mukti was talking Ranbir felt Kanya presence there he turned around and saw her standing there listening to everything Ranbir and Mukti was discussing.But Mukti didn?t saw Kanya she signed the papers and left.

Now Kanya wants to just hug Ranbir she forgave him she ran to him and hugs him tightly he was so happy.Now Ranbir said to Kanya tht they will get married today.

Kanya and Ranbir was now married and they are living happily ever after with their 2 kids.

Entry # 3
A Viking love story
(A love story from the time the vikings lived)

Ranbir live in a castle with his father. ranbir is strong and very handsome. ranbir loves his father but not his kingdom. He is not happy in his life, his father knew that and that?s why his father is going to bring ranbir a wife.


ranbir want a girl who love him not his or his father kingdom and that?s why he don?t want to get married with a girl who hasn?t seen him. He believes in love and wants to marry a love marriage not arrange marriage.

kanya lives with her little family on a farm which is built of wood, stone, blocks of turf and turf roofs. She love her little brother harpal, sister puja, mother pammi and her father anand. Her father anand works on a farm and he handles
boats for fishing. Her mother pammi did all the household jobs; she also help on the farm and milking the cows.

kanya have a great body, not stick thin but curvy in all right places. She wasn't baring her skin for the world to see in a reveling outfit. She has long black hair, blue eyes and 167 tall.

kanya is sitting on a chair outside in a very beautiful garden and also writing in her dairy:

I love to sing song that I have written. My songs are always about my dream boy, the boy I am waiting for. The boy I am dreaming of is like that: He is strong and very handsome and has short black hair, 179 tall, blue eyes and strong muscles. I don?t know why but whenever I think of him then I get some feeling, but the feeling are very strange. I always wish to meet that stranger, don?t know why but the feelings says something about that the stranger is waiting for me to as I do!

kanya: ooh no?
anand: Maria came inside! I need to talk to you.
kanya: ok papa I am coming.

kanya left her dairy outside and runs away to talk to her father.

kanya: what?s the matter pa?
anand: the matter is series because Mrs. King Jack have talked to me about you?re and his son Sam?s marriage.
kanya: what did you say?
anand: of course yes? we can?t say no to a king and don?t you agree.
kanya: no I didn?t mean that but could I see before marriage.
anand: I am sorry my child but you can?t see him before the dinner?
kanya: ok father!

She took a paper from the dairy, and ripped it out and hid it from her father, in the garden under a three los.
Suddenly it started to rain and the wind took the paper from the dairy that she had hidden. And the wind took it away, far away.

Ranbir was hunting in the forest, when he came upon the paper from the dairy that was hanging from a three. He was thinking when he read it that this is about me. And says to himself:

ranbir: maybe this is the girl I always was waiting for?

After few minuets maria remembered that she had hid the paper from the diary in the garden, and starts searching for it. But it isn't there.

kanya: oh my god, wheres the paper?

The same evening their fathers have decided to have a dinner and discuss the marriage between ranbir and kanya.

kanya went to look after the paper and when shes down the road she sees the paper in her dream boys hand. Their eyes meets and its love. They could see the love and passion that they felt for one another. ranbir looks at those eyes, he could get lost in those eyes.

He always had girl behind him, they all looked hot, but not beautiful. This girl standing in front of him was beautiful, she was classic beauty.

They don't know that their fathers has decided that they are going to get married, but the same night under the dinner between their fathers they find out that it is them ? who are getting arranged to get married. They get married and lived haply ever after.

Now what????? VOTEEEEEEEEE!!! 😆
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Aman di you so funny
i voted for entry # 3😆
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I know y😆
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# 2 Was lovely!!!!!
Edited by nadz_J - 17 years ago
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#2......though I felt I read it before.
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Thanks for the votes everyone. 😊

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