Ashni FF : Game of fate (Updated)

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Oh poor Ashu, who when realized his mistakes and wanted to settle his life with Nidhi, fate turned a gloomy turn and he is shattered. Shattered to see his wife with another man and she is laughing and blushing and wearing western clothes once again, that she left after her marriage.

The irony is that he is happy to see her happy but he is not the cause of her happiness, but Abhi is. Nice twist and looking forward to see what happens in the party as U have mentioned a twist that will change their life ?? 😳

Thanks dear 👏👏 and loves ❤️

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Good progress in the story, though Ashu is suffering the most of it. Liked that he is assuring himself with a positive thinking that Nidhi might get her flashes back while looking at him in the attire she ever wanted to see.

New twist is waiting, and so am i. Hope the change does not affect much to either Ashu or Nidhi, cos any one hurt means we are hurt. So, will be waiting for your approach to the game of fate.

Luv ya sweetie for the perfection in your pen writing purely the touching stories! ❤️🤗

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Thank you Guys and love you for these lovely coments

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

I started another Ashni SS. let me know how is it. Link is given below.

Ashni SS: Every Dream comes with its price

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

are u going to update this today.sorry if u feel I'm bothering you but really love this story

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

No no you are not bothering. I love your eagerness. I will try to update as soon as possible for me.

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Too painful for poor Ashu... n when this Lucid period ends... Abhi will feel the same...

But what abt Nidhi... she will only live a guilt that what she did in all her memory loss... ! Not a disheartened... but a strange happenings making the life of Ashu n Nidhi both... a miserable one..

The time Nidhi is enjoying with Abhi... she will be crying over it later..

Fate is playing a forceful game n all are playing in knowing n unknowingly of the future... !

Thanks dear... will wait for more.. God bless... !