AshNi FF- Ek Ajnabee Haseena Se... Chap 6 updated on page 33

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

I am back after working for 20 hrs 😔

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

I am sorry to think dat my ff is not being liked. thank u all for liking it and giving ur invaluable feedback.

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Babita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni
I am sorry to think dat my ff is not being liked. thank u all for liking it and giving ur invaluable feedback.

Why are U saying that Amreen ??

U don't want me to review here ?? Your FF is much much liked Dearie, only that we are taking time to come and comment. These days are hectic with studies and other works. Please try to understand. 🤗

And please do reply the reviews so far, they all are fabulous. 👏👏

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Babita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

It's a cute chapter Amreen, loved it. 👏👏

The cute fights between Ashu and Nidhi are so loving, and they must be enjoying it so far. :Loved how U have given the details of Ashu and Mallika's presence in his life and it's all over for now.👏

The compensation ride was awesome❤️. Loved them talking during the ride. And i loved Nidhi explaining her martial arts knowledge. 😛 They are coming more closer to each other, and Nidhi's name telling is a speechless term for Ashu. This was the icing on the cake. ⭐️⭐️

Looking forward to see how things progress and they both come more closer to each other. 😊

Wishing more to come from you, please do update and do not think to discontinue ever.

Request and concern. Please do consider. 🤗😃

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni
I am sorry to think dat my ff is not being liked. thank u all for liking it and giving ur invaluable feedback.

How can you say that...the first task I have done after coming back from work is reading this...

How much we thanked you for starting this??? Did you forget???

Please continue...it is good, very unusual story for AshNi and you have continued Mallika also...

When are you giving me Chapt 3???

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

AshNi have no connection in college?

They are just Apt mates?

Is Armaan there?

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Considering his age, house and Baba connection are not going to be there???

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Swati Kapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

First of all Amreen, I loved the mental state you have shown of Ashu! He is a well behaved, very intelligent, very hard working, and very lone. But his break up with Mallika has made him a bit like a patient.

And the way you have told his state of mind before going to the cafe, anyone of his age wud behave exactly like he did with Nidhi -- But he made himself very cool and this is the plus point of the hero of this FF 👏

The repartee that we read in the convo or rather in the fights of Ashu and Nidhi over almost their pwn frustrations, it was very nicely written and woven later to make the story get a track to follow. Loved it.

The bike ride was enthusiastic for me. O how Nidhi was sitting on the back seat and Ashu was behaving like a good rider, when her hands fell on his shoulder to stop falling form the bike when it unbalanced. It was a lovely scenario with a cute smile on both the faces. Sharply told and it was a jest of mood. More looked like a pun here. 😉

Waiting eagerly to know how they met again after the lift to their building. And as Nidih has asked freely to use her name, i think they are more like friends now.

Thanks dearie, for the adorable update. 🤗

Pls do continue, it's the wish of all your ardent readers. ❤️🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni
I am sorry to think dat my ff is not being liked. thank u all for liking it and giving ur invaluable feedback.

Not done Amreen...

How cud you say that dear... ??/

There are very few members left in this forum,,, and all of them come to every thread...n so is with your thread... !.. Plzz rethink abt your decision...

And ... dont you think that we all are here waiting for the next chapter to be uploaded... then why are you doing with us who are in wait,,,

Plzz Amreen... do post the 3rd chapter... WE ALL ARE IN WAIT... 😊