Three Shot:Love you bhai ke dost (Moh-moh ke dhaage) Part:3*COMPLETED*

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hi Aazu❤️🤗
Just saw the second and the third part updated.👏 I'll be reading them in a while. And the reviews later or by tomorrow.😳😃
How are you feeling now my dear?😃

No issues bhabhi with the review... Give them as per ur convinience...
I just wanted to finish the TS off as soon as possible... As much as it is delayed, it takes the form of Laziness...
You see this TS was supposed to be finished off on my birthday... And here I'm finishing 2 weeks later...
Anyways, all said and done...
As to my health... I've recovered from fever, but weakness doesn't goes easily, and with sudden loss of diet, its's taking time to be back...
Baaki sab changa-bhalaa hai... 😃

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
No issues bhabhi with the review... Give them as per ur convinience...
I just wanted to finish the TS off as soon as possible... As much as it is delayed, it takes the form of Laziness...
You see this TS was supposed to be finished off on my birthday... And here I'm finishing 2 weeks later...
Anyways, all said and done...
As to my health... I've recovered from fever, but weakness doesn't goes easily, and with sudden loss of diet, its's taking time to be back...
Baaki sab changa-bhalaa hai... 😃

May God bless you with extra strength to recover fully. Take a very good care of yourself Aazu! 😊

Just read the full TS, am in the highest level of Ashni's pure ecstasy right now. Going to review in a while, thanks a lot for this special version Aazu. You simply rock my dear. ❤️🤗

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Part 2

Just Awesome!!! 👏

The night they both danced together on a romantic duet - How can they both forget it? No question to make it unbelievable. Loved the way you have made them equally drowned in love Aazu. ❤️A brilliant piece of work ⭐️ Just got bowled over. 😳

The Love letter. O my my!!!!!!!!! What a lovely and very thoughtful expressions Nidhi has put in. ⭐️❤️Her mind spoke and heart wrote, her love expressed and her fears came out. Yet, yet she has so smartly written her heart there. Beautifully expressed, wonderfully penned down. 👏

Ashu on the same hand, living with the same feelings and his heart is out to make it sure now. His happiness is obvious. And i loved his laughs to every point. Recalling the simpleton Nidhi, turning into a lover of his. His own insecurities have flown out now. What a loving scene Aazu. You made me landing in the AshNiland.

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Part 3

No match to the concluded version. 👏 Wondrous and praiseworthy indeed!!! ⭐️👏

I cud imagine the state of mind Nidhi was going with when she was waiting for Ashu at the sunset point. Almost crying inside, she moved from the place. Only to find out that the man she was waiting for, was waiting to stun her with some hard questions. And Ashu also did not spare her from the teasing fonts. 😉 Nidhi's fumbling and Ashu's unexpected behavior brought tears to her eyes. Aww..

But loved the tears so cutely wiped by her man. Charming and cherished moments.⭐️ Beauty lies in the scene so nicely woven. His way of proposing gives an intense feeling of knowing him better. Fulfilling a wish, with exactly the same way!

A man of his words and so straight forward!!! His going the simple and a choicest way to address her family for her hand makes him a sincere and a balanced person. His honesty spoke so much and ended in the marriage to his soulmate. Love claimed each other and Nidhi cud not stop saying it again - Love you bhai ke dost!

What a completion which looks like a beginning. Superloved.❤️❤️ Thanks for this extra dose today itself Aazu.🤗 I was feeling homesick here, and after reading this TS, am feeling so happy inside today. Luv ya loads dearie for your finest pen and your thoughtful lovely articulation. Flair of writes. Great finesse. 👏

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shobha21

@shobha21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Very lovely ending Aazeen ❤️👏

Loved the way Ashutosh proposed Nidhi on his knees in a beautifully decorated canopy.😃

Thank you so much for this TS Aazeen.

Will be waiting for another AshNi story...please come with one soon.

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Thanks for writing...enjoyed reading it..very well written👏

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ssss97

@ssss97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Beautiful ending azeen. Don't they have any age gap???
Par loved Ashu's suspense. Achaa tha.
Thanks for updating.

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Okay!

First of all lots of apologies, that I have not been commenting back to your precious comments since the first part...

But now I'm back and will comment back one by one...😃

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: babita68
Hi Aazu 🤗Thanks for this wonderful piece of work dearie 👏👏The song is so loving that the Main title becomes the fragrance of the shot ❤️
--Hello Babita!!!🤗
It was my pleasure giving u this piece of work, however it is...😃
The song! Aah! that has become a favorite track of almost everybody these days...
Glad that it could be felt apt.😃

Loved the beautifully written fabulous And more loved the storyline. Amazing thought of Nidhi a sis of Armaan and the romantic aspect is Wow !!!
--Hehehehe... I know, thats a different kind of track with Nidhi being Armaan's sister and Ashutosh being Armaan's best friend... But Nidhi being Armaan's sister wala concept I have used earlier also in my previous AshNi ff, Mere jeewan saathi...
But anyways that u liked the thought of it...😃

More loved are Nidhi's deep love that is progressing slowly and the both sides are silent till the date. Ashu's seductive lopsided smiles made even me jumped out of my seat. 😉😆 Sorry haan... I felt helpless. 😳
-- I think it would be mean of me, if I don't let u guys a little mushy seeing the handsome hunk's features... U getting helpless in falling for him is my win...😆

For a change, The two birds in love knows each other from their childhood - I liked this one, though his being in doubts about if Nidhi leaves him like every one -- made me a little enthusiastic over a Bro's reaction towards his sister's love for his friend. But, What if Armaan also wants this relationship to take place ?? 😳
-- Yup! Some change in every story...😳
But this story is more about the hesitation of confession of love having a big brother as a common in each other's life; is what the concept of this story... Armaan's yes or no wasn't the question...😳

Thank U so much for this beautiful work once again, felling for this OS but at the same time felt for your lost datas. Can't even hope for them to be traced back.
-- Well I'm trying to forget that fact Babita... Seriously... I am no longer feeling bad for my stories... Woh toh shayad main phir dubaara banaa loongi, but I lost my entire lot of pictures and videos that I had made since March 2014... Unn yaadon ko dubaara kaise banaau? I am still so miserable about that fact...😭😭😭

Loves and hugs. 🤗
--Thanks for all the love and beautiful words in this review... All of them make my writing successful! Thanks a lot!👏👏👏

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: bawaswift

😃 I didnt do anything here... Tera TS hi aisa hai... 👏
Ab dont say main fir se humble ho gaya.. 😆
And all the very best for your exams my little but very cute... intelligent... writer sis !!! 🤗

Thanks again bhai...😳

Nops! I will say aap phir se humble ho gaye hain... Coz thats the truth...😆

Main apni kahaani likhti hu, aur mujhe maalum rehta hai ke kab main average kaam kar rahi hu... And trust me, I did not feel myself doing my best work this time...

So, its ur humbleness that u are making me feel so great...😃

Edited by Aazeen02 - 10 years ago